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The College EssayWhat it is
What it meansHow to nail it
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What’s the point?
An essay takes a topic & examines it in personal terms› Earthshaking vs. Everyday
May be the last chance to tell your story Let colleges know how you’re different than
the other thousands of applicants “What kind of person will you be on campus? Shows how you think, not what you know How you say it. Not what you say.
“To know your enemy is to defeat your enemy.” –Sun Tzu
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How to approach it Perfect forum to display:
› Individuality› Creativity› Ability to communicate
Displays you beyond the general application Listen to your own voice Take chances/compositional risks
› Allow your personality to shine through Express opinion/make a point
› No right/wrong answer› BE SURE TO LET THE READER KNOW ASAP WHAT
YOUR POINT IS!
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Common Sense•Plan ahead.•Do not use the same responses for every application.•Follow the essay format.•STAY ON TOPIC!•PROOFREAD, PROOFREAD, PROOFREAD!!
•BE YOURSELF!•TRY TAKING CHANCES•BE OPEN & HONEST•SHOW YOUR POV ASAP!•STAY ON TOPIC•READ IT OUTLOUD•HAVE OTHERS READ IT TOO!
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Word Count Brevity is valued 500 to 1,000 words to convey you
› Some may request 300 words Major obstacle
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Word Count Be economical
› “I’m a good candidate for Rowan University. I’m a good candidate because I’m an excellent student, hardworking, and involved.”
› “I am a good candidate for Rowan University because I am able to create and maintain a strong balance between academics and extracurricular activities.”
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Word Count Forces you to focus on what matters Be aware of word count
› A few words over won’t hurt you› A lot of words over needs revision
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Technology Applying by mail
› Print essays on separate pages & submit as a packet
› Include the question you’re answering at the top of the page Many colleges offer choice
› Number your pages› Include name & SS# at top of pages
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Technology Internet applications
› Be careful to still treat your essay as if it’s been printed
› Print them to edit› Convenience does not equal carelessness
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Essential Strategies for Writing a Great Essay Be yourself Be original Reveal something
about yourself Have a point Spend as much time
thinking as writing Highlight growth Keep your
introductions brief
Create mystery at the forefront
Demand 100% from every sentence
Raise intriguing questions or dilemmas
Force yourself to analyze your motivations
Use original language Be witty, but only if you
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25 Mistakes to Avoid: Don’t… Try to be someone else Get stuck on intro Write in clichés Over quote Cross the line between
creativity & absurdity Go thesaurus wild Write a humorous essay if
you’re not funny Resort to gimmicks Treat online applications like e-
mail Assume specific knowledge Let your editors ruin your essay End with a whimper
Write a sob story Flex Write a resume Second guess what admissions
wants to read Wait until the last minute Generalize Say it. Show it. Get lazy with sentences Start the essay with ”my name
is” Use ghostwriters Write a Hallmark card Spill your guts Turn anything in w/o proofreading
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You Heard it Hear First…Real quotes from Real admission officers.
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How Applications are Read Regional or Random Read applications one by one
› Sometimes read 2nd, 3rd, 4th time Things considered:
› Grades› Difficulty of high school› SAT or ACT scores› Recommendations› Extracurricular› Essay
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Continued… Some look at essay first
› Know John Smith person before John Smith scholar
Want a blank canvas without a score attached to a name
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Why Require an Essay? “Window into soul.” (Yale) “Can’t interview every person.”
(Lawrence University) “Validate other information &
achievements.” (Case Western Reserve University)
“Window into mind.” (Bryn Mawr College) “Learn what is important & valued.”
(Gettysburg College)
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Qualities of Successful Essay
“Not looking to be entertained…done serious thinking and reflection.”
“Beginning, middle, end.” “Edit their work.” “Hear your voice… what matters to
you.” “Unique perspective on
achievements.” “A little humor.” “Not a tell-all.”
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Qualities of Successful Essay
“Understand what is being asked in the question.”
“Best essays use dramatic elements like dialogue & interesting narrative.”
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Common Mistakes to Avoid “Copied essays.” “Two paged essays with no
paragraphs.” “Mind your editors.” “Don’t let assumptions about the
reader be the primary guide for your essay.”
“Not being original enough.” “Grandmother character portrait.”
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Students Might Be Surprised to Know…
“Truly interested in experiences, thoughts, values.”
“Good writing matters.” “Dangerous to second guess what
admissions wants to read.” “Looking for someone to be a
contributor, not the prototype.”
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Advice from Admissions Officers
“Constantly rewrite.” “Start with an oral draft.” “Start early.” “Think of the essay as a piece of your
story and then tell it to us.”
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Fill in the blank… Focus on a quality of your mind or of
your character. “I am a very _________________ person.”
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Timed Writing Warm-UpPretend you’re taking an exam and respond to the question in the pink box using your fill-in-the-blank answer.
You have 20 minutes.FORCE YOURSELF TO WRITE FOR THE FULL TIME!
“Tell a story about an experience or time when you showed you were a very __________________ person.”
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Brainstorm Read questions first to have in back of
mind Write down everything that pops into
your head No topic is too silly, complex, or stupid Take 15 minutes to complete the
Brainstorm Packet.
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The topic is: Sports and me—what a team
My specific topic: Root for all Philly sports teams (not so much Sixers) and Notre Dame
5 minutes to jot down ideas: Phillies make it to postseason for 4th straight year; my postseason tix came in mail last week; Vick is hurt, so now the QB controversy continues; Flyers start this week; hope for another great run; ND won one for a change; f or as much as I love sports, I never really played; I need a big win in fantasy football this week; almost lost my suicide pool because ATL let SF get an early lead; love to visit different parks/stadiums across the country; haven’t done one of those trips in a while; would love to go to games in San Diego; Texas stadiums would be neat too; going to Wed.’s game!
5 minutes to draw inferences about myself based on jottings: sports fanatic; competitive; traveler; relaxing Sundays; passionate; knowledgeable
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Your turn! Choose one topic from the brainstorm
packet. Complete the chart based on yourself.
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How can this help me? List several broad contexts to consider
› Challenge, triumph, fear, hope Prepare yourself with all aspects of
your choice› Actions, reactions, sights, sounds, people,
places, emotions, etc. Mold the information to fit the question
› An academic lesson might evolve from a c
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Topic = Dance Mold the information to fit the question
› An academic lesson might evolve from a choreographer’s direction
› A social challenge in terms of an audition› Most treasured recreational moments = moving to
music› Ethical goal might be to bring dance to
underprivileged kids› Personal/spiritual triumph a difficult sequence
you’ve mastered› An injury might force you to examine occupational
goals