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    PLUS, A

    REVIEW OF

    SOME OLDSTUFFSTYLE IN ARGUMENT

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    Word Choice

    Sentence StructurePunctuation

    Special Effects

    STYLE AND PRESENTATION IN YOUR

    RESEARCH PAPER

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    The words you use should match the tone you want to

    establish in your research paper, and they should match your

    subject and purpose.

    Slang and jargon can be useful to illustrate a point, but do not

    overuse or you risk alienating readers who dont understand. Be mindful of the connotations of the words you use and even

    the things you dont say (loaded words).

    Be as specific as possible for the greatest clarity and greatest

    argumentative impact.

    WORD CHOICE

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    WORD CHOICE IN THE 2ND DEBATE

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    WORD CHOICE IN THE 2ND DEBATE

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    WORD CHOICE IN OUR ASSIGNMENT

    SHEET

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    Punctuation is whatreally builds rhythm inan argument.

    Since this is an

    academic researchpaper you want toconsider the use ofwhat you might thinkof as more formal

    punctuation:semicolons, colons,dashes.

    PUNCTUATION

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    Figurative language/figures of speech aid

    understanding by drawing by parallels

    between a known and an unknown, and it

    helps make your writing more interesting andmemorable.

    Everythings an Argument classifies figurative

    language in two categories: Tropes and

    Schemes.

    SPECIAL EFFECTS

    AKA FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE

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    TROPES

    Tropes represent a

    change in the ordinary

    meaning ofwords/phrases.

    Metaphor, simile,

    analogy, hyperbole,

    understatement,rhetorical questions,and irony are tropes of

    language.

    SCHEMES

    Schemes represent a

    special arrangement of

    words to create an

    effect.

    Parallelism, antithesis,

    inverted word order,

    anaphora, and reversed

    structures are schemes

    of language.

    FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE

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    Tropes are all pretty well -known to you. There are a few

    schemes we should address though:

    Antithesis is the use of parallel (similar or the same)

    structures to mark difference. (p. 437)

    Inverted word order simply means that a sentence is out of itsusual subject-verb-object order, drawing attention to itself.

    Anaphora is repetition to achieve a desired effectusually

    good for driving a point home. (p. 438)

    Reversed structures: best to look at examples (p. 439)

    SCHEMES

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    Read through the speech excerpts given to you. Identify the

    different figurative language effects being used by consulting

    the handout. Mark as many examples of figurative language

    as you can find. Also note any unique word choices, sentences

    structures, and punctuation usage. Compare your notes with your classmates & discuss. Why do

    you think the speaker chose to use those figures of speech

    (and that particular punctuation, wording, sentence structure).

    As a group tr y to rewrite the speech excerpt without any of the

    figurative language. Is it possible? What does the speechsound like now? (Youll share your rewrites with the class.)

    IN-CLASS WORK

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    YOUR VOICE

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    + KEEPING YOUR VOICE IN YOURRESEARCH PAPER

    Avoid too many block

    quotes.

    You can use I when you

    are discussing your own

    opinion.

    Find your thesis and let i t

    direct you.

    Avoid using someone elses

    quotation in your thesis.

    Use signal phrase when

    you quote to identify which

    thoughts are yours and

    which are not.

    Question the

    crit ics/experts, andrespond to them.

    Dont fool yourself with too

    much paraphrasing.

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    REVIEW SLIDES

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    WHEN TO START A NEW PARAGRAPH(WHY DO PARAGRAPHS MATTER?)

    1. When you have a new or slightly new idea

    2. To emphasize a point, or make a contras t between points

    3. In dialogue, when a different person speaks

    4. When your reader needs a pause

    5. When you are ending your intro or conclusion

    From the OWL and Tim Fredricks ELA Teaching Blog

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    +ELEMENTS OF APARAGRAPH

    UNITYCOHERENCE

    DEVELOPMENT

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    UNITY: The entire paragraphshould concern itself with a

    single focus. No wanderingaround mentioning random

    things that have nothing to dowith each other!

    DEVELOPMENT: Help yourparagraphs reach maturity--

    dont abandon them in an

    awkward tween phase!

    Use examples andanecdotes

    Define terms

    Evaluate causes, examine

    effects

    (There are more developmentmethods but these are the most

    relevant to our narratives. See the

    OWL for more!)

    UCD BASICS

    COHERENCE: This meansyour paragraph is easy for

    a reader to follow and

    understand. You createcoherence by building

    bridges between your

    sentences.

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    + BRIDGESNOT JUST FOR THE BLUES BROTHERS AND SPICE GIRLS OF

    THE WORLD

    LOGICAL BRIDGES Carrying your topic idea

    from sentence to

    sentence

    Parallel sentence

    construction

    VERBAL BRIDGES Repeat key words in

    several sentences

    Use of synonyms in

    several sentences

    Pronouns referring to

    nouns in previous

    sentences

    Transition words linking

    ideas from different

    sentences

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    ARGUMENTusesevidence and reason

    to discover some

    version of the truth.

    PERSUASIONaims to change a

    point of view.

    ARGUMENT VS. PERSUASION

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    To INFORM: tell your audience somethingthey dont know To CONVINCE: tell your audience that anissue merits their attention To PERSUADE: move your audience to action To EXPLORE: (self-)reflective analysis of apersonal or societal issue that you thinkneeds to be addressed To MAKE DECISIONS: stemming fromexploratory argument, this type of

    arguments purpose is to enable theaudience to make an informed decision To MEDITATE/PRAY: generally a personalargument/reflection aimed towardstransformation ACADEMIC: academic arguments usuallyhave one of the above purposes with theaddition of being held to disciplinarystandards

    PURPOSESOFARGUMENT

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    PAST: Forensic arguments seek to determine the nature ofpast eventsthey may be exploratory in nature, seeking todeepen existing knowledge

    FUTURE: Deliberative arguments seek to establish whatshould/will happen in the future. Theyre usually based onpre-existing information and often draw on forensicarguments.

    PRESENT: Epideictic/Ceremonial arguments seek to addresscurrent social issues/valuesdescribing the good and the badof contemporary society (according, of course, to the opinionof the arguer).

    OCCASIONS FOR ARGUMENT

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    FACT: Did somethinghappen? Provable/disprovableargumentDEFINITION: What is thenature of the thing? Determining if one thingbelongs in a secondcontested category

    QUALITY: What is thequality/cause of thething? Present criteria thenmeasure the thing against

    those standards Why did something happen,what factors played into it,what will the consequencesbe? PROPOSAL: Whatactions should betaken? Describe a problem, then aproposal for a solution

    KINDS OF ARGUMENT