Student Paper Coleridge
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Patrick Mooney
Professor Hayes
English 102
19 April 200X
Symbolic Language in Coleridges Kubla Khan
When I was younger, I spent a lot of time with my grandparents, who lived just a few
miles from my family and me. On those occasions when I spent the night at my
grandparents' house, my grandmother would frequently read to my brother and me.
Unlike many other children, we were not subjected to constant repetitions of such
children's classics as Spot Gets NeuteredandDick and Jane Become Lost in the Woods
and Are Eaten by Hungry Bears. My grandmother, a remarkably well-read woman
without a college degree, selected our bedtime stories from the high points of world
literature. My grandmother was, for instance, the one who introduced me to Greek
mythology. Thanks to her, I grew up on stories of Pandora's box, Hades and Persephone,
and Perseus. Although very little of this bedtime reading material was poetry, one of the
selections which I remember the most clearly from the many years of bedtime reading
that my grandmother gave to me was Coleridge's "Kubla Khan."
Although the form of "Kubla Khan" is beautiful, it is complex. The rhyming
patterns are quite complicated; the first stanza, for instance, rhymes in the pattern abaab
ccdede. Coleridge's patterns of alliteration are also involved: He will sometimes use the
sound at the beginning of one syllable as the sound at the beginning of the next syllable,
as in "Xanadu did" in line one, "miles meandering" in line 25, and "deep delight" in line
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44. He also alliterates vowels, not only consonants, to produce a rhythmic singsong
effect.
Although the form and the beautiful language in "Kubla Khan" were all that I
could appreciate when my grandmother first read the poem to me, I have since come to
realize that the poem has a complex symbolic pattern, as well. My own analysis may
seem to be paltry when faced with the fact that, as was mentioned in class, there have
been thousands of criticisms of this poem published, some comprising entire volumes.
But the very quantity of criticism may serve as an argument that any interpretation of the
poem is really an investigation of the writer of the criticism. That is to say, the poem has
no outward meaning, or at least that the meaning put in by the author is of secondary
importance. The subtitle of "Kubla Khan" reads "Or a Vision in a Dream." Dreams may
or may not have symbolic meaning, but it is doubtful that anyone intentionally designed
symbolic meaning specifically for an individual dream.
My reading of "Kubla Khan" depends on a biographical detail from Coleridge's
life. Coleridge was an opium addict for years, and Appelbaum, an editor of a collection of
romantic poetry, claims that "some of his [Coleridge's] poems reflect the anguish this
caused. (Appelbaum viii). Coleridge also claimed, for many years, to have written this
poem while intoxicated on opium. "Kubla Khan" seems, to me, to reflect an anguished
addict's desire for and envy of strength. In the first stanza, Coleridge describes Kubla
Khan, the main character of the poem who "did a stately pleasure dome decree," (lines 1-
2) and describes the landscape surrounding and enclosed by the dome. The setting is
immediately identified as sensuous; for instance, in the dome "blossomed many an
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incense-bearing tree (line 9)." Incense, like opium and opium addicts, immediately calls
to mind sensuality and languor, at least for me.
The pleasure dome is not, however, all sensuality: It is "a savage place" (line 14).
It contains a fountain that occasionally throws rocks into the air from deep underground
(lines 19-21). Finally, it rests over a deep cavern, "measureless to man," which is a "cave
of ice" and a "chasm, with ceaseless turmoil seething" (lines 36 and 17).
The pleasure dome, then, has a dual character: it suggests both softness and
hardness, in that it is identified with both sensuality and danger. I think that Coleridge, in
describing the dome, sees it as a work of man of strength who can "a stately pleasure
dome decree," and who was, historically, a warlord, a man of strength -- in line 30 the
Khan hears "ancestral voices prophesying war." Kubla Khan is also a man who can both
enjoy its sensual pleasures and survive in this atmosphere of danger.
Coleridge, in describing his vision, also describes the anguish that it causes. In the
fourth and last stanza, he describes an "Abyssinian maid," a "damsel with a dulcimer,"
who sung to him of the dome and its creator. It seems that this woman fills a place, for
Coleridge, which is frequently identified with the Greek muses -- she provides him with
inspiration. Coleridge states that if he could "revive within" himself "with symphony and
song," he would "build that dome in air (lines 43-44 and 46)." He intends, should he ever
be inspired, to build the pleasure dome "with music loud and long" -- with poetry,
perhaps. It seems that this is exactly what Coleridge has done with the poem "Kubla
Khan." In the meantime, however, the torment caused by this vision is almost
unendurable for Coleridge. The poem closes with a warning for others who may look
upon the pleasure dome, perhaps in the form of Coleridge's poem, that they are bound to
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be unhappy with the everyday life of the average person. Those who look upon the
pleasure dome advise others not to look upon the author of the poem, the creator of the
dome who has not only seen a vision of a heaven -- who has "drunk the milk of paradise"
-- but has built an earthly version of it (line 54).
The fourth stanza reflects a change in the author's attitude. Whereas he may have
previously been supposed to be merely an opium visionary -- a weak person who lives
outside the everyday reality that the rest of us inhabit -- he is revealed here to be a
creator, a strong individual, as well. Coleridge is here identifying himself with Kubla
Khan. The Khan decreed a stately pleasure dome, while Coleridge created a poem that is
equated with the dome. "Kubla Khan" is Coleridge's attempt to rise above what many
people assume drug addicts to be and to show himself to be a strong creator, on a level
with an emperor who founded a great dynasty.
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Works Cited
Coleridge, Samuel Taylor. Kubla Khan. An Introduction to Literature. Ed. Sylvan
Barnet et al. 13th
ed. New York: Longman, 2004. 719.
Appelbaum, Stanley, Ed. English Romantic Poetry: An Anthology. Mineola: Dover,
1996.
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