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Student Guidance for Assessment Criteria and
Portfolio Tasks
Tracey O’Keeffe MA, BSc, MAFHP, MCFHP
© The Smae Institute (1919) Ltd
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What is this guidance for?
As part of your course you will be writing portfolio tasks which consist of 12 short essays. These are handed in to be marked in two batches: Modules 1-6
and Modules 7-12.
You need to pass all 12 - The pass mark is 50%
This presentation should help you understand how these are assessed and therefore how YOU can work towards achieving the best mark possible!
It will explain the process for handing in portfolios as well as how the person marking them will review your work and how the final % and grade is
reached.
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So, what’s the process for handing in portfolios?
Handing in portfolio tasks are done electronically and comes in stages:
1) The first portfolio task (module 1) is handed in on its own. This is so you can get some guidance on your writing style, referencing, structure etc, as well as content. The tutor marking it will put some comments to help you understand how you can improve.
2) You then make corrections and hand this back in with essays 2-5, in other words all of 1-6 in together as a draft for tutor comments/feedback before they are officially marked. You will submit this set of 6 essays once you pass the Module 6 assessment.
3) Once these are returned and you have corrected and improved them, you then send 1-6 in again but this time for final marking at which stage a % will be scored.
4) Portfolio essays 7-12 are also handed in together as drafts for comments and on their return, you once again improve them and return them for final marking.
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Assessment
Criteria
A (80%+) B (70% - 79%) C (60 - 69%) D (50% -59%) RESIT (49% and
below)
Level of knowledge
and relevance of
content
(30% weighting)
Excellent knowledge
base and thorough
discussion of relevant issues. Conclusion
shows synthesis and
clarity.
Good knowledge base
with a degree of in-
depth and relevant discussion. Conclusion
identifies key issues.
Evidence of reasonable
knowledge base with
discussion focused on the question. Simple
conclusion presented.
Demonstrates limited
knowledge base but
broadly answers the question. Attempts to
draw relevant
conclusion.
Inaccurate or irrelevant
content. Essay question
not adequately answered. No
conclusion or
conclusion not related
to the question.
Use of literature and
analytical discussion
(25% weighting)
Excellent range of
appropriate references
to support discussion. Demonstrates ability to
analyse and synthesise
information and
evaluate significance.
Good range of
appropriate references
to support discussion. Demonstrates some
ability to analyse
information and
evaluate significance.
Reasonable range of
appropriate references
to support discussion. Limited analysis instead
using literature in a
descriptive manner.
Limited range of
appropriate references
used. Minimal analysis and evaluation relying
instead on description.
Inadequate range of
reliable sources used
and/or inappropriate sources used.
Significant amount of
work with inadequate
referencing or unreferenced.
Quality of Referencing
(15% weighting)
Sources acknowledged
in essay with accurate
correlation to reference list. Harvard system
followed consistently
and accurately.
Sources acknowledged
in essay with accurate
correlation to reference list. Harvard system
followed consistently
with only occasional
errors.
Sources acknowledged
in essay and shows
correlation to reference list. Some elements of
Harvard system missed
but general consistency
demonstrated.
Sources generally
acknowledged but lack
of correlation between essay and reference
list. Inaccuracies in
Harvard format.
Attempts to be consistent.
Sources of information
not acknowledged.
Inappropriate and/or inaccurate referencing.
Harvard format not
adhered to with no
consistency.
Academic style and
written expression
(15% weighting)
Fluent, articulate and
coherent with logical
progression, clarity and academic expression.
Well written, coherent
with logical progression
with appropriate academic style.
Meaning clear. Some
logical progression but
lacks some academic style.
Meaning clear. Most
issues identified
logically and coherently.
Meaning unclear in
places. Lacks clarity and
coherence.
Presentation and
adherence to
guidelines
(15% weighting)
Excellent presentation,
articulate grammatical
style and correct spelling throughout.
Good format and
presentation, correct
grammar and spelling.
Attempts to follow
presentation guidelines
with only occasional errors in grammar and
spelling.
Presentation lacking in
areas but most
guidelines adhered to. More than occasional
grammar and/or
spelling errors.
Poorly presented with
lack of adherence to
guidelines. Multiple spelling and/or
grammar errors.
Word Count Word count outside -10% to +10% of the 500 word allowance will result in a 10 mark penalty
Marks awarded for each criteria section are added up to form an overall percentage mark which will equate to a grade.
A RESIT in any criteria will result in an overall mark of RESIT – all criteria must be passed
Portfolio Task 1: The first step
When you have submitted your first draft essay (Module 1 Portfolio Task), as already explained it will be returned with some comments – but also some guidance around where your work is in terms of grading (only summative – in other words the score doesn’t count at this stage).
It will have an assessment criteria sheet electronically attached (see right)
The grid will have areas shaded which indicate roughly what the
essay would score in each section
This example shows a reasonably good essay in terms of presentation, grammar and content but it has problems with referencing style – this would have to be addressed to get a
pass!!
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The assessment criteria – “marking grid”
When you receive your portfolios back from the final marking (both 1-6 and 7-12) they will have a marking grid attached to them electronically (see image left).
This is what the tutor will have been using to assess your work and allocate marks. It is therefore
important that you look at this and understand it – it will help you maximise your chances of getting the
best mark.
The next few slide will help explain this in more detail…
The SMAE Institute Diploma in Foot Health Portfolio Marking Grid
Assessment Criteria A (80%+) B (70% - 79%) C (60 - 69%) D (50% - 59%) RESIT (49% and below)
Level of knowledge and relevance of
content
(30% weighting) Available marks = 30
Excellent knowledge base and thorough discussion
of relevant issues. Conclusion shows
synthesis and clarity.
Good knowledge base with a degree of in-depth
and relevant discussion. Conclusion identifies key
issues.
Evidence of reasonable knowledge base with
discussion focused on the question. Simple
conclusion presented.
Demonstrates limited knowledge base but
broadly answers the question. Attempts to
draw relevant conclusion.
Inaccurate or irrelevant content. Essay question
not adequately answered. No conclusion
or conclusion not related to the question.
Marks Awarded = 24.1 or above 21.5 – 24 18.1 – 21 15 – 18 < 15
Use of literature and analytical discussion
(25% weighting)
Available Marks = 25
Excellent range of appropriate references to
support discussion. Demonstrates ability to
analyse and synthesise information and evaluate significance.
Good range of appropriate references to
support discussion. Demonstrates some
ability to analyse information and evaluate significance.
Reasonable range of appropriate references to
support discussion. Limited analysis instead
using literature in a descriptive manner.
Limited range of appropriate references
used. Minimal analysis and evaluation relying
instead on description.
Inadequate range of reliable sources used
and/or inappropriate sources used. Significant
amount of work with inadequate referencing or unreferenced.
Marks Awarded =
20.1 or above 17.6 – 20 15.1 – 17.5 12.5 – 15 < 12.5
Quality of Referencing
(15% weighting)
Available marks = 15
Sources acknowledged in essay with accurate
correlation to reference list. Harvard system
followed consistently and accurately.
Sources acknowledged in essay with accurate
correlation to reference list. Harvard system
followed consistently with only occasional errors.
Sources acknowledged in essay and shows
correlation to reference list. Some elements of
Harvard system missed but general consistency demonstrated.
Sources generally acknowledged but lack of
correlation between essay and reference list.
Inaccuracies in Harvard format. Attempts to be consistent.
Sources of information not acknowledged.
Inappropriate and/or inaccurate referencing.
Harvard format not adhered to with no consistency.
Marks Awarded =
12.1 or above 10.6 - 12 9.1 – 10.5 7.5 - 9 < 7.5
Academic style and written expression
(15% weighting)
Available marks = 15
Fluent, articulate and coherent with logical
progression, clarity and academic expression.
Well written, coherent with logical progression
with appropriate academic style.
Meaning clear. Some logical progression but
lacks some academic style.
Meaning clear. Most issues identified logically
and coherently.
Meaning unclear in places. Lacks clarity and
coherence.
Marks Awarded =
12.1 or above 10.6 - 12 9.1 – 10.5 7.5 - 9 < 7.5
Presentation and adherence to
guidelines
(15% weighting) Available marks = 15
Excellent presentation, articulate grammatical
style and correct spelling throughout.
Good format and presentation, correct
grammar and spelling.
Attempts to follow presentation guidelines
with only occasional errors in grammar and
spelling.
Presentation lacking in areas but most guidelines
adhered to. More than occasional grammar
and/or spelling errors.
Poorly presented with lack of adherence to
guidelines. Multiple spelling and/or grammar
errors.
Marks Awarded =
12.1 or above 10.6 - 12 9.1 – 10.5 7.5 - 9 < 7.5
Word Count Word count outside -10% to +10% of the 500 word allowance will result in a 10 mark penalty.
Marks awarded for each criteria are added up to form an overall percentage mark which will equate to a grade.
A RESIT in any criteria will result in an overall mark of RESIT – all criteria must be passed.
1st Marker
2nd Marker Agreed / Disagreed
Mark Awarded
Grade Awarded
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The final mark…
All portfolio essays are marked by two separate tutors. This helps the marking to be fair and objective.
The first marker provides a percentage mark which the
second marker then reviews.
If there was any disagreement (very rare!), it would go to the College Dean to arbitrate.
You will receive one final mark.
The final mark will be a % and a pass grade between A and D (i.e. 50% and above).
If you hadn’t achieved the assessment criteria in any section, you would be marked as a RESIT
The SMAE Institute Diploma in Foot Health
Portfolio Marking Grid
1st Marker
2nd Marker Agreed / Disagreed
Mark Awarded
Grade Awarded
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Level of
knowledge and
relevance of
content
(30% weighting)
Available marks =
30
Excellent knowledge
base and thorough
discussion of
relevant issues.
Conclusion shows
synthesis and clarity.
Good knowledge
base with a degree
of in-depth and
relevant discussion.
Conclusion identifies
key issues.
Evidence of
reasonable
knowledge base with
discussion focused
on the question.
Simple conclusion
presented.
Demonstrates
limited knowledge
base but broadly
answers the
question. Attempts
to draw relevant
conclusion.
Inaccurate or
irrelevant content.
Essay question not
adequately
answered. No
conclusion or
conclusion not
related to the
question.
Marks Awarded = 24.1 or above 21.5 – 24 18.1 – 21 15 – 18 < 15
The first assessment criteria:
Level of knowledge and relevance of content
This section carries 30 marks
= 30%
Best marks here are achieved here by addressing key issues in depth, with an introduction, a discussion section and a
brief concluding paragraph.
The essay should demonstrate your understanding of the subject!
Common Pitfalls
Not focusing on the question! Try to avoid getting distracted by interesting subjects which are not
relevant to the question.
Getting information wrong/incorrect content
Make sure you have checked your work before submission.
A confusing structure & a lack of conclusion
This can result in the question not clearly being answered. The final
paragraph should be a brief summary of the answer to the
question and should relate to what has been discussed in the work.
Avoid filling in a
“back-story” to the
question!
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Use of literature
and analytical
discussion
(25% weighting)
Available Marks =
25
Excellent range of
appropriate
references to support
discussion.
Demonstrates ability
to analyse and
synthesise
information and
evaluate significance.
Good range of
appropriate
references to support
discussion.
Demonstrates some
ability to analyse
information and
evaluate significance.
Reasonable range of
appropriate
references to support
discussion. Limited
analysis instead using
literature in a
descriptive manner.
Limited range of
appropriate
references used.
Minimal analysis and
evaluation relying
instead on
description.
Inadequate range of
reliable sources used
and/or inappropriate
sources used.
Significant amount of
work with inadequate
referencing or
unreferenced.
Marks Awarded =
20.1 or above 17.6 – 20 15.1 – 17.5 12.5 – 15 < 12.5
The second assessment criteria:
Use of literature and analytical discussion
This section carries 25 marks
= 25%
Best marks here are achieved here by using quality academic references, critiquing them and by “weaving” them into your discussion points.
Comparing different view points can help to add more marks!
Common Pitfalls
Not using enough references You need at least 3 for each essay
otherwise is classed as a resit.
Using inappropriate references They need to be reliable – if a
website is selling nail varnish, it’s probably not academic enough!
Large sections of work unreferenced
This can occur even if the reference list is long enough!
Lots of disjointed statements from literature without
discussion and clear relevance to the question.
You cannot cite YouTube, or websites
like “my assignment
help”
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Quality of
Referencing
(15% weighting)
Available marks =
15
Sources
acknowledged in
essay with accurate
correlation to
reference list.
Harvard system
followed consistently
and accurately.
Sources
acknowledged in
essay with accurate
correlation to
reference list.
Harvard system
followed consistently
with only occasional
errors.
Sources
acknowledged in
essay and shows
correlation to
reference list. Some
elements of Harvard
system missed but
general consistency
demonstrated.
Sources generally
acknowledged but
lack of correlation
between essay and
reference list.
Inaccuracies in
Harvard format.
Attempts to be
consistent.
Sources of
information not
acknowledged.
Inappropriate and/or
inaccurate
referencing. Harvard
format not adhered
to with no
consistency.
Marks Awarded =
12.1 or above 10.6 - 12 9.1 – 10.5 7.5 - 9 < 7.5
The third assessment criteria:
Quality of referencing
This section carries 15 marks
= 15%
Best marks here are achieved here by sticking firmly to the Harvard referencing
system and being consistent throughout all work.
The sample portfolio online shows you how to do this!
Common Pitfalls
Not referencing at all All work must be referenced!!
Plagiarism!
Citing sources differently in the essay itself compared to how they are cited in the ref list.
Incorrectly citing a reference or not acknowledging a direct quote when the words used are exactly the same as the original author’s.
Too many direct quotes It is usually best to paraphrase
whilst still referencing to acknowledge the source of the
information.
Referencing can be
boring … but it is
essential!
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Academic style
and written
expression
(15% weighting)
Available marks =
15
Fluent, articulate and
coherent with logical
progression, clarity
and academic
expression.
Well written,
coherent with logical
progression with
appropriate academic
style.
Meaning clear. Some
logical progression
but lacks some
academic style.
Meaning clear. Most
issues identified
logically and
coherently.
Meaning unclear in
places. Lacks clarity
and coherence.
Marks Awarded =
12.1 or above 10.6 - 12 9.1 – 10.5 7.5 - 9 < 7.5
The fourth assessment criteria:
Academic style and written expression
This section carries 15 marks
= 15%
Best marks here are achieved by an essay which flows really well and moves logically
from one section to the next.
The style needs to be academic rather than “chatty” or like a magazine!!
Common Pitfalls
Most problems occur here when the meaning is unclear. Sometimes this can be due to problems with grammar but it
can also be where the essay “jumps” around a lot, with
repetition or big gaps in content – make sure each section links
to the next.
Using “chatty” language or a style which sounds like
instructions Try to avoid writing as if you are
talking to someone!
Don’t write a story or make up characters – keep to the facts!!
Avoid using “I”, “you”, “we”, “us”,
etc in any of your work!
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Presentation and
adherence to
guidelines
(15% weighting)
Available marks =
15
Excellent
presentation,
articulate
grammatical style
and correct spelling
throughout.
Good format and
presentation, correct
grammar and
spelling.
Attempts to follow
presentation
guidelines with only
occasional errors in
grammar and
spelling.
Presentation lacking
in areas but most
guidelines adhered
to. More than
occasional grammar
and/or spelling
errors.
Poorly presented
with lack of
adherence to
guidelines. Multiple
spelling and/or
grammar errors.
Marks Awarded =
12.1 or above 10.6 - 12 9.1 – 10.5 7.5 - 9 < 7.5
The fifth assessment criteria:
Presentation and adherence to guidelines
This section carries 15 marks
= 15%
Best marks here are achieved by ensuring your grammar, spelling and presentation
are as good as they can be!
Make sure you copy medical words and authors’ names correctly!!
Common Pitfalls
Not proof-reading for spelling Use spell check but remember this doesn’t always pick up on
all errors
Not forming proper paragraphs Avoid bullet points, lists and
subheadings
Problems with grammar Keep to formal, academic style
sentences throughout
Using the wrong font size and style or changing it throughout
your work
No names on the
work – just your
student number!
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Word Count
Each essay should be 500 words as per the guidelines.
You are allowed -10% or +10%
i.e. 450 – 550 words
If you write more or less than you are allowed you
will lose 10 marks.
The word count must be cited on
each essay.
Remember: each criteria on each essay must be passed. This means that a good essay could improve marks
overall … but… conversely, a weak essay could pull the overall mark down!
One RESIT in one criteria in one essay could result in an overall RESIT… so
keep the standard consistently good
throughout!
Word Count Word count outside -10% to +10% of the 500 word allowance will result in a 10 mark penalty.
Marks awarded for each criteria are added up to form an overall percentage mark which will equate to a grade.
A RESIT in any criteria will result in an overall mark of RESIT – all criteria must be passed.
The marker will right your actual word count here when they have checked it
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Some final points…
We hope this presentation has been useful. Here’s some final pointers and reminders to help you:
Put your student number on each page (as a header or footer) – no names or addresses! Ensure the essay title is included for each essay (don’t worry, this is not included in the word count)
Start each essay on a new page – Page numbers on each page Check font and size - and double space all work
Keep clearly focused on the question – don’t waffle or go off on a tangent! Check your grammar, spelling, structure etc and keep to formal, academic English throughout
Avoid the use of “I”, “we”, “you”, “us” etc Reference consistently using the Harvard system – make sure references are appropriate
Avoid subheadings, lists and bullet points Keep within word count – and write it on each essay under the title
Have a concluding paragraph which clearly answers the question and reflects what you have discussed
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