Spelling, Punctuation and Grammar Exemplification Booklet ......GCSE Religious Studies Unit 1...
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Spelling, Punctuation and Grammar Exemplification Booklet
GCSE Religious Studies Unit 1 (5RS01) and Unit 2 (5RS02)
Autumn 2012
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Spelling, Punctuation and Grammar Marking Criteria
These criteria are common to all four subjects that have marks for Spelling, Punctuation and Grammar (SPaG) – GCSE English Literature, GCSE History, GCSE Geography and GCSE Religious Studies.
However, the marks allocated to each level vary for individual subjects and units.
In Edexcel’s GCSE Religious Studies, SPaG marks will be assessed across all units in the same way. These marks will be awarded on the first section of the exam paper, on either question 1 or 2 (depending on which question the candidate answers). The SPaG marks will be assessed across the whole of this question, i.e. parts (a), (b), (c) and (d).
In Edexcel GCSE Religious Studies the marks allocated at each level are as follows:
Questions with four marks available for SPaG0 marks Errors severely hinder the meaning of the response or candidates do
not spell, punctuate or use the rules of grammar within the context of the demands of the question.
Threshold performance
Level 1 1 mark Candidates spell, punctuate and use the rules of grammar with reasonable accuracy in the context of the demands of the question. Any errors do not hinder meaning in the response. Where required, they use a limited range of specialist terms appropriately.
Intermediate performance
Level 2 2–3 marks Candidates spell, punctuate and use the rules of grammar with considerable accuracy and general control of meaning in the context of the demands of the question. Where required, they use a good range of specialist terms with facility.
High performance
Level 3 4 marks Candidates spell, punctuate and use the rules of grammar with consistent accuracy and effective control of meaning in the context of the demands of the question. Where required, they use a wide range of specialist terms adeptly and with precision.
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Examiner Comments MarkThe candidate manages to demonstrate general control of meaning in the context of the question.
Uses some specialist terms which are spelled correctly, e.g. ‘beautiful’, ‘poisonous’.
Use and control of spelling, punctuation and grammar is usually correct. However, the candidate does write ‘brung up’ rather than ‘brought up’. Very few errors are made with capitalisation.
Intermediate performance
Level 2
3 marks
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Examiner Comments MarkThe candidate manages to demonstrate general control of meaning in the context of the question.
Uses some specialist terms which are spelled correctly, e.g. ‘omniscient’, ‘reincarnation’, ‘omnipotent’.
Use and control of spelling and punctuation is usually correct. However, the candidate does make errors in capitalisation, using capital letters where none are needed, e.g. ‘Humans’. Full stops are used instead of commas. The grammar could be improved by the candidate reading through their response and ensuring that it ‘sounds’ right.
Intermediate performance
Level 2
3 marks
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Examiner Comments MarkThe candidate manages to demonstrate general control of meaning in the context of the question.
Uses some specialist terms which are spelled correctly, e.g. ‘atheist’, ‘upbringing’.
Use and control of spelling, punctuation and grammar is usually correct. However, the candidate’s use of capital letters is not good, e.g. names such as ‘God’ and ‘Constantine’ do not have capital letters and ‘atheist’ is written with a capital letter when it should be lower case.
Intermediate performance
Level 2
3 marks
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Examiner Comments MarkThe candidate manages to demonstrate general control of meaning in the context of the question.
Uses some specialist terms which are spelled correctly, e.g. ‘sinning’, ‘created’.
Use and control of spelling, punctuation and grammar is not always accurate and this is why it gets the lower mark within Level 2, e.g. ‘chapter’ and ‘causing’ are spelled incorrectly. The candidate’s use of capital letters is not good, e.g. names such as ‘God’, ‘Big Bang’ and ‘Bible’ do not have capital letters.
Intermediate performance
Level 2
2 marks
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Examiner Comments MarkThe candidate manages to demonstrate general control of meaning in the context of the question.
Uses some specialist terms which are spelled correctly, e.g. ‘Sunday School’, ‘designed’.
Use and control of spelling, punctuation and grammar is not always accurate and this is why it gets the lower mark within Level 2, e.g. ‘programmes’, ‘gradually’, ‘exists’ and ‘theories’ are spelled incorrectly. The candidate’s use of capitals is usually good but ‘Big Bang’ does not have capital letters and the word ‘and’ has a capital letter in part (c).
Intermediate performance
Level 2
2 marks
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Examiner Comments MarkThe response is effective in control of meaning and fully relates to the context of the question.
Uses a wide range of specialist terms with precision, e.g. ‘omni-benevolent’, ‘existence’, ‘omniscient’.
There is consistent accuracy in spelling and punctuation. The candidate is able to use paragraphs appropriately. There are odd errors in capitalisation, e.g. ‘knowing’ should not have a capital. The grammar used is consistently accurate. The use of rhetorical questioning is particularly effective.
High performance
Level 3
4 marks
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Uses a wide range of specialist terms adeptly and with precision, e.g. ‘omni-benevolent’, ‘omniscient’, ‘organisms’.
There is consistent accuracy in spelling and punctuation. The candidate is able to use paragraphs appropriately. There are odd errors in capitalization, e.g. ‘bible’ should be capitalised. The grammar used is consistently accurate, although the sentence structure is not always particularly complex in style.
High performance
Level 3
4 marks
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Examiner Comments MarkThere is effective in control of meaning and the response fully relates to the context of the question.
Uses a wide range of specialist terms adeptly, e.g. ‘persuasive’, ‘upbringing’, ‘supernatural’, ‘designed’.
Spelling and punctuation are generally accurate. There are odd errors in capitalisation and spelling. For example, ‘agnosticism’ in the first sentence should be capitalised, and ‘biased’ is spelled ‘bias’. The grammar used is consistently accurate, although use of paragraphs could improve the answer.
High performance
Level 3
4 marks
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Uses a range of specialist terms e.g. ‘dictator’, ‘millions’, ‘Big Bang’.
There is consistent accuracy in spelling and punctuation, e.g. uses paragraphs and capitalisation appropriately.
High performance
Level 3
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Examiner Comments MarkThere is effective in control of meaning and the response fully relates to the context of the question.
Uses a range of specialist terms, e.g. ‘miracles’, ‘evolution’, ‘explosion’, ‘prayed’.
There is consistent accuracy in spelling and punctuation, e.g. uses paragraphs appropriately. There are no errors in capitalisation.
High performance
Level 3
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Examiner Comments MarkThe candidate just manages to demonstrate general control of meaning in the context of the question.
A limited range of specialist terms are used, e.g. ‘environment’ (‘evement’), ‘programmes’.
There are several errors in spelling, punctuation and grammar although the meaning is not hindered. For example, the candidate misspells ‘environment’, ‘parents’ and ‘raised’. The candidate also fails to use capital letters appropriately, e.g. ‘God’. The grammar used is not always correct, e.g. the garden ‘which adam and eve was in’. However, in all these cases the answers are understandable.
Threshold performance
Level 1
1 mark
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Examiner Comments MarkThe candidate just manages to demonstrate general control of meaning in the context of the question.
A limited range of specialist terms are used.
There is misuse of capital letters and some errors in punctuation and grammar. The first sentence does not make sense although its meaning can be understood. This is a pattern throughout where the candidate’s use of English is not very good. There are errors in capitalisation, e.g. a sentence that begins with a lower case letter. However, the candidate uses paragraphs and the spelling is generally correct.
Threshold performance
Level 1
1 mark
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Examiner Comments MarkThe meaning is reasonably clear within the terms and demands of the question.
Limited specialist terms are used, e.g. ‘Big Bang’, ‘tsunami’.
Lots of words are incorrectly spelled and there are some errors in punctuation and grammar. There is misuse of capital letters, e.g. ‘God’ and ‘Big Bang’ are lower case, while other words have capitals when they should not.
Threshold performance
Level 1
1 mark
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GCSE Religious Studies Unit 2 (5RS02)
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Examiner Comments MarkThe candidate manages to demonstrate general control of meaning in the context of the question.
Limited specialist terms are used.
There is misuse of capital letters and some errors in punctuation and grammar. The candidate has written ‘theorys’ rather than ‘theories’ and ‘science’ rather than ‘scientific’. Some errors in capitalisation, e.g. ‘God’ is lower case, whereas subjects such as ‘religion’ and ‘science’ are written as upper case.
Threshold performance
Level 1
1 mark
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13Examiner Comments MarkThe meaning is reasonably clear within the terms and demands of the question.
Limited specialist terms are used, e.g. ‘Big Bang’, ‘resurrected’ (‘resarected’).
There is misuse of capital letters and some errors in punctuation and grammar. ‘Miracles’ and ‘resurrected’ are spelled incorrectly and there are some errors in capitalisation, e.g. ‘God’, ‘Bible’, ‘Big Bang’ and ‘Eve’ are all lower case.
Threshold performance
Level 1
1 mark
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Examiner Comments
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Examiner Comments MarkThe candidate just about manages to demonstrate general control of meaning in the context of the question.
A few specialist terms are used, e.g. ‘resurrection’ (‘ressurection’).
The candidate does not spell, punctuate or use the rules of grammar within the context of the demands of the question. There are many spelling errors, there are many capitalisation errors and sentence construction is very poor.
Below Threshold performance
Level 0
0 marks
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