NAME: NUR ABDILLAH BINTI ABIDIN (MS1214515060)

ASMALIZA BINTI MAT YASIM(MS1214514588)

NURUL BAHIYYAH BINTI MUSTHAFA(MS1214515264)

NUR FARZANA BINTI MOHD YUSOFF(MS1214515129)

CLASS: M2T1

QUESTION Some parents are strict with their children

while others allow their children to learn life lesson on their own. Which is a better approach and why. Give your opinion not less than 350 words.

INTRODUCTION Children are the future of a country.

Hence, teaching children should be seriously taken into consideration while we still have to ensure they all have a beautiful childhood. However, some parents believe growing their children in strict discipline would be better. In this essay, we are going to prove that children should grow up in a strict environment in which they can learn life lessons.

PARAGRAPH 1 First, children need to be disciplined more

strictly because they need to develop a positive mental attitude.

In the fact, most of children nowadays are not mature. Somehow, parents must say “no” instead of “yes” for certain good reasons.

For example parents must scold their children because they would rather spend most of their time on surfing internet and social network such as facebook and twitter than doing their homework. This method would open their eyes slowly important to become a diligent person.

If the parents do not tolerate, children would be more conscious of how important it is to have responsibility for their study. Moreover, they will realize that they must work hard to succeed in their study.

PARAGRAPH 2 Strict discipline should be inculcated to

their children for the excellent character development.

According to the researches, child from the strict discipline families have better results in school.

For example, strict parents tend to give chores and have hard-line policies regarding homework, school attendance and activities. Also they demand the best grades from their children, and the children tend to perform extremely well due to those expectations.

Therefore , the excellent character development of children born from parents who are able to manage the strict way to their children.

PARAGRAPH 3 Lastly, strict discipline is the best

method to remove bad habits or characteristics from their personality.

Strict parents will be able to monitor their children from doing anything bad.

For example, strict parents would spank their children if they committed offense. This will cause the children scare to something bad.

In the nutshell, good attitude comes from parents who are strict. Children will more respect to their parents and afraid to do something bad. This will help children to remove bad habits or characteristics from their personality.

CONCLUSION Strict parents is good way to raise

children, but of course it should be with love. Every parents want their child have a great future and try to do all things as long as they could.

Though there is a pain in strict discipline, children will think about something that they must change in their mind. Children need to appreciate their parent's actions when they are disciplined, that this is for their ultimate good.

Children would be conscious of how important discipline is to change their mind set and character to become a better person.

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