Shooting-Book Development

By: Marija Djikic

1st Version of Shooting-Book

This is the 1st version of Shooting-Book for the short film ‘Redemption Dinner’. The main benefit of this version is the correct order of scenes and shots. However, when it comes to the flashback part, there isn’t sufficient number of shots, thus the main purpose of that scene will not be clear enough. This will be improved in the next two versions. Also, scene 3 has wrong order of shots. David should first unpack his groceries, wash his hands and then pun an apron on.

2nd Version of Shooting-Book

This is the 2nd Version of Shooting-Book. While reading thoroughly each sentence of the text, various grammar mistakes were found. This will be improved in the final version. In addition to this, few shots became unnecessary so they are removed from the shooting-book, but few where added as they represent the most natural of denouement. Emma-the supporting role of the film will be David’s girlfriend instead of being his wife.

Final Version of Shooting- Book