Shaun Hawthorne & Mike Fowler NZATE Writing Project Presentation July, 2010
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Shaun Hawthorne & Mike FowlerNZATE Writing Project Presentation
July, 2010contact Shaun by email - [email protected]
contact Mike by email – [email protected]
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Presentation Outline
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Facts about writing in NZ
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What types of writing are students most involved with in secondary school?
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What types of writing activities are most prevalent in secondary schooling?Rate what sorts of tasks you think are probably most prevalent in NZ secondary school classrooms. Short Answer Responses to QuestionsBrief Responses to Material ReadCompleting WorksheetsBrief Summaries of Material ReadWriting ListsCopying TextWriting InstructionsMulti-Paragraph “Essays”Research PapersShort StoriesAutobiographies
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From: “Teaching Writing to High School Students: A (US) National Survey” (Kiuhara et al, 2009)Most Common Writing Tasks (Avgs Across Eng, Science & Soc Studies)turn out to be those involving relatively low levels of analysis and interpretation and not much writing e.g.
Daily 2-4 x Wk
Wkly Mnthy Qrtly ½ Yrly
Short Answer Responses to Questions 6% 37% 39% 13% 2% 1%
Brief Responses to Material Read
7% 27% 36% 19% 4% 1%
Completing Worksheets 5% 28% 39% 16% 5% 1%
Brief Summaries of Material Read
5% 19% 28% 26% 9% 3%
Writing Lists 2% 13% 23% 18% 7% 3%
Copying Text 3% 10% 13% 9% 4% 4%
Writing Instructions 4% 8% 14% 12% 9% 9%
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From: “Teaching Writing to High School Students: A (US) National Survey” (Kiuhara et al, 2009)Least Common Writing Tasks (Avgs Across Eng, Science & Soc Studies) - turn out to be those involving relatively high levels of analysis and interpretation and multi-paragraph in length e.g.
Wkly Mnthy Qrtly ½ Yrly
Yrly Never
‘Essays’ 8% 21% 18% 15% 7% 27%
Research Papers
0% 3% 12% 32% 37% 17%
Short Stories
3% 5% 8% 13% 14% 55%
Biographies or Autobiographies
0% 0% 5% 12% 25% 58%
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Differences between subjects
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Talking PointsHow do these stats from the US survey
compare with your own rating?Were there any surprises for you in this
data?Do you take any messages from these
statistics?
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Key Principles in teaching writing
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We believe that some key principles that underpin effective teaching of writing are:
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Four types of knowledge writers need to write well
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Talking PointsTo what extent to you think your own and
your department’s teaching of writing aligns with these key principles?
To what extent do you think your own and your department’s teaching of writing focuses on each area of knowledge that students’ need to be effective in their writing?
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Seven Effective Instructional Practices
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Talking PointTo what extent to you think your own and
your department’s teaching of writing aligns with these seven effective practices?
Where would you start if you were going to make a change in your teaching of writing?
How might this resource assist you in PD around the teaching of writing?
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Ways you could use this resource in PD around teaching writing
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WAYS OF USING THE RESOURCE IN PD1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.
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Supplementary slides
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Outline of Feedback Steps – from Jennifer Glen’s process
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How to respond to student work
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What does the research literature say are the most effective ways of teaching writing?
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From: “Effective Ways of Teaching Complex Expression in Writing” (Myhill et al, 2008)
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From: “Beating the Odds: Teaching Middle and High School Students to Read and Write Well” (Langer, 2001).
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From: “Writing Next”: Meta-analysis of effective strategies for improving writing (Graham & Perin, 2007)
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From: “Writing: Teachers and Children at Work” 20th Anniversary Edition (Graves, 2003)
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From: Bennet Woods Elementary School study (Pressley et al, 2007)