Script group 1 redone

St. Andrew’s Catholic School

Unit G324: Advanced Portfolio in Media

Script

Name of Production:- ‘The Wells’

Group Members:

Hannah Hughes – Director

Asuka Young - Director

Chris Jacobs - Producer

Esme Quantrill - Producer

(Mum = Gloria, dad = Alex, girl = Holly)

Scene: Number 1

Character name: child (Holly)

Shot type/Camera Angle: MLS, angle: eye-level, static.

THEN: LS, angle: eye-level, tracking shot (after a cut).

Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue:

*Non- Diegetic Music* - ring a ring o’ roses. OR can be diegetic, by

the child singing it?

Diegetic Sound: swing noise

Action: The child skipping forward with a cuddly toy

End

Scene: Number 2

Character name: child (Holly) & murderer

Shot type/Camera Angle: POV shot of the gun to the child, close-up,

pull focus, angle: eye-level.


*Non- Diegetic Music* - Mumford & Sons (Broken Crown): -coming in after

the ring’ o roses faded out.

Diegetic sound: Heavy Breathing of the murderer

Action: Black clad man, hipshot of weapon POV. Focus shift

from weapon to girl. Female character powerless to what the

male character is doing to her.

End

Scene: Number 3

Character name: child (Holly) & Cuddly Toy

Shot type/Camera Angle: Close-up, static, angle: eye-line/high

angle.


Diegetic sound: a thump on the ground as the doll falls.

*Non-Diegetic Music:* - Mumford & Sons (Broken Crown)

Action: Girl drops toy to floor in slow motion, hits ground with thud.

This is what the girl reacts like by dropping her toy its shows her

being shocked, to see what she’s seen

End

*CUT TO SCREEN WITH WORD ‘PRIDE’ –CU (a sound effect?) + Mumford & sons

soundtrack

Scene: Number 4

Character name: child (Holly) & murderer

Shot type/Camera Angle: High angle, Long Shot.

Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: *Non-Diegetic Music:* -

Mumford & sons (Broken Crown)

Action: : bad guy looking down at the woman he’s just wounded, medium

long shot to give perspective of what has just happened

End

*CUT TO SCREEN WITH WORD ‘HATE’ –CU (a sound effect?) + Mumford & sons

soundtrack

Scene: Number 5

Character name: Mum (Gloria) & Dad (Alex)

Shot type/Camera Angle: In eye-level, a two in shot, (hand held?)


Mumford & sons (Broken Crown),

Gloria: “I don’t love you anymore!”

Action: Mum screaming at Dad,

Dad listening furiously. Eye level/ over two in shot to express the

tension and portrayal of emotions between the two characters.

End

CUT TO SCREEN WITH WORD ‘LUST’ –CU (a sound effect?) + Mumford & sons

soundtrack

Scene: Number 6

Character name: Mum (Gloria)

Shot type/Camera Angle: OSS, Eye-level, Close-up to the mirror’s

reflection


Mumford & Sons (Broken Crown)

Action: Mum putting on red lipstick.

Focus on reflection of mum putting lipstick expresses that she

could be having an affair.

End

*CUT TO SCREEN WITH WORD ‘SLOTH’ –CU (a sound effect?) + Mumford & sons

soundtrack

Scene: Number 7

Character name: Dad (Alex)

Shot type/Camera Angle: Long shot, high angle, pan, (slow zoom?)



Action: Dad giving up and falling down to floor. Full shot showing the

reaction of the dad finding out his daughters been kidnapped

End

*CUT TO SCREEN WITH WORD ‘GREED’ –CU (a sound effect?) + Mumford & sons

soundtrack

Scene: Number 8


Shot type/Camera Angle: OSS, High angle, zoom in on note.


Mumford & Sons (Broken Crown)

Action: Dad receives ransom note. Focusing on the dad getting the

ransom note with OSS shot of male character

End

*CUT TO SCREEN WITH WORD ‘GLUTTONY’ –CU (a sound effect?) + Mumford &

sons soundtrack

Scene: Number 9

Character name: murderer

Shot type/Camera Angle: Birds eye / high angle



Action: bad guy scoops money into arms. Focus on the money with an over

the shoulder shot of the male character still hidden by hood

End

*CUT TO SCREEN WITH WORD ‘ENVY’ –CU (a sound effect?) + Mumford & sons

soundtrack

Scene: Number 10


Shot type/Camera Angle: ECU of eyes reflecting to the mirror inside

the car.

Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue:*Non-Diegetic Music:* -


Action: dad watching his wife go to the bad guy because she knows him.

Focus on an eyeline match in the reflection of the car mirror

End

Scene: Number 11

Character name: Mum (Gloria) & murderer

Shot type/Camera Angle: Establishing shot, low angle (This is just

a small cut)

Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: *Non-Diegetic Music:*

-Mumford & Sons (Broken Crown)

Action: Mum (Gloria) going into the murderer’s house (but never see his

face)to let the audience know what the dad is looking at

End

Scene: Number 12

Character name: Dad (Alex) & Murderer

Shot type/Camera Angle: Medium shot, eye-level. After a cut: close-

up of dad’s reaction to the man without hoodie.

Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue:*Non-Diegetic Music:* -

Mumford & Sons (Broken Crown) AND/OR *diegetic sound effects of two

men interacting?

Action: Man grabbing another man. Dad getting bad guy. Unmask bad guy.

Focusing on the pull off the hood of villain with over the shoulder

shot exposing Dad’s reaction

End

Scene: Number 13

Character name: Murderer

Shot type/Camera Angle: A long shot, panning from left to right.

Angle: eye-level – TO: medium shot from a low angle.

Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Diegetic

sound effect of the swing swinging, *Non-Diegetic Music:* -Mumford &

sons (Broken Crown)

Action: Swing and man walking away

Focus on the swing creepily slowly swinging with a medium shot from a

low angle

End

Scene: Number 14

Character name: Murderer

Shot type/Camera Angle: Medium long shot, panning from left to

right centering the murderer

Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Diegetic sound effect

of the wind, *Non-diegetic soundtrack faded away / ended*

Action: Man sitting on ‘The Wells’ street sign, the bad guy disguising

his image from public with hood using a medium long shot.

End

*A voice over*: “The Wells - brand new soap coming soon Thursday 8:30, only on BBC Two” .

Scene: Number: (between other scenes)

Character name: Holly, Alex, Gloria, Murderer

Shot type/Camera Angle: High angle with Over the shoulder shot,

Medium Close-up.

Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: *Non-Diegetic

Music:* -Mumford & Sons (Broken Crown)

Action: Shots of the girl being pushed by other characters: Static,

focusing on the hands that pushes.

End

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