Script

Written By

Dana Holloway

Based on, if any

PRODUCTION DRAFTBlue Revised Nov 16, 2013

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FADE IN

INT. CLASSROOM - MORNING2.

The student is in the art classroom drawing, which are starting to come alive.A new student, Jay walks into the classroom and sees Joe.

JOE (Quietly)

Hi...

JAY (kindly)

I'm Jay. What's your name?

JOE

Joe puts her pen down.I'm Joe. Your new aren't you?

JAYYeah, why you all alone?

JOE I prefer to draw alone so I can concentrate. Why you in here?

JAYI was just wondering around the school so I know where everything is. Can I see some of your drawings?

Walks towards Joe. Joe slam's her book closed.

JAY (angrily)

Why did you do that? why can't I see?

JOE(Nervously)

I don't like anyone seeing my work, it's private.

JAY

Walks even closer to Joe(angrier and louder)

Just let me look!

Jay stares at the sketch book and it fly's across the room.

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JOE

Runs and picks up her sketch book. (Angry)

Why did you do that?

JAY(Confused)

Why you not shocked? I just made a book fly across the room.

JOE

Erm... I am

Jay notices something coming out of the sketch book. He then grabs it and opens it.

A pencil falls out and a shape of a pencil is missing from the page

JAYOh that's why. You have a power to don't you?

JOE(Snappy)

No I don't what are you talking about?!

JAYYour drawings, they come alive don't they? That's why you draw alone because you don't want anyone to see.

JOE

Joe snatches her book back and starts walking to the doorNo they don't. I don't know what you're talking about.

JAY(Slightly shouting)

Just admit it you have a power to.I won't tell anyone.

JOE (Annoyed)

No I don't. Just leave me alone.

Joe goes out the door and slams it

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JAY(Slight whisper, annoyed)

I'm not the only one....

Jay sits down and stares out the nearby window. Another *student, Adam sees and thinks he's staring at him. *

ADAM *(Shouting angrily) *

What you looking at little nerd? *

Jay points to himself. *

JAY *(Confused) *

Me? *

Adam starts walking towards the door near Jay *

ADAM *Yes, I'm talking to you. *

Jay gets scared and starts using his power. Adam walks into *the classroom but walks straight past Jay. *

JAY *(Sighs with relief) *

That was a close one. **

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Dialogue confuses me as in action it did not say that Joe is appoached by Jay.

d h Nov 15, 2013 3:12 PM

Punaution, say who puts their pen down.Have a space begween new dialogue

d h Nov 15, 2013 3:14 PM

Good dialogue here

d h Nov 15, 2013 3:15 PM

Visual effects here with the drawing coming to life

d h Nov 15, 2013 3:17 PM

Slightly shoutingd h Nov 15, 2013 3:20 PM