Rover Red Rum

by Jamie M

Splash. The ball hit the water but before it could be washed

out Rover quick as a flash pulled it back to Jamie. “Well done

boy,” said

Jamie. Rover wagged his tail in delight. “See if you can get

this boy.” Jamie then hurled the ball over some slimy rocks

.Rover couldn’t get it because it was too far out so he

followed it not his is off the ball. Suddenly he banged into a

castle. He saw the ball carry on its journey through the gates

and Rover dashed into the castle crash the door SLAMMED

shut

.Jamie came breathless shouting when he caught his breath

back “rover here boy “he said softly. Then he had a shock! He

saw a sign saying red rum. He heard a deafening

Howl. What could it be? He thought. So Rover

Carefully not to trigger anything he heard a voice but tried to

control himself and carry on .Rover walked through another

narrow path and the hard, cold and wooden floor and made

a very creepy sound. But suddenly he saw the tennis ball roll

ahead he thought the tennis ball was trying to lead him

somewhere.

So he left the tennis is ball. Then he heard a dripping sound

“drip” ”drip” ”drip”. He saw a skeleton and took it out, as

quick as lightening. The he saw a door and peered through

the key hole and opened the door luckily there was nothing

behind the door

Then he came to another door and opened and there was

Jamie and the skeleton queen

So Rover barked and Jamie shouted. There was a pause and

the queen hit Jamie and then Rover bit the queen’s neck and

she fell to peace’s and the Rover bit Jamie free and they got

out the castle and went back to their game of fetch but this

time further away from the castle .

The end

Notice:

Rover then went on to win dog of

the year.

Thank you for reading hope you

enjoyed it (:

By Jamie. M