Rising of the darkness

By Jake

Dom and Zoe , who were brother and sister , were playing football by a river.

Dom was just about to score when Zoe stole the ball of him and scored in his

net. He ran over to the ball and wacked it as hard as he could with all his anger.

It went right of the grass and onto the river path. “Go and get it then.” Said

Zoe.

“ All right then.” Groaned Dom. As he was walking down to the river path he

noticed a sign saying WARNING SLIPPERY EDGE.

Zoe started to walk to walk to Dom to see why he’d stopped. As she got closer

she saw the sign and said “ I would not get the ball if I were you it’s pretty

close to the edge.”

“But that’s my new ball.” Said Dom.

“Come on I’ll be fine.”

“ But Dom you can’t swim and how will I save you?”

Dom started to walk towards the ball getting closer and closer to the ball. But as he reached out he slipped on some wet moss and SPLASH!!! He fell in. Luckily there was some rope on the side of the wall so he grabbed it but it was very slippery. He could just about hang on. Zoe started to shout for help but nobody was there. All she could see was an old crooked house she started running towards it. She knocked on the door but there was no answer. She sat on the door step crying. Meanwhile, Dom could feel the currents on his legs and his hands start to slip.

The door started to creak open and Zoe stopped crying. She ran into the old house hoping someone would be there. But there was nothing. She started to feel a tingling sensation down her spine. She was seeing things too. All of a sudden she started to feel hands clutching her red cheeks tighter and tighter. The last thing Dom heard was a scream and it was such a frightening scream that his body went limp and he let go of the rope.