Focus group for my final magazine:

In my focus group I received a lot of positive feedback. This was things like: the colour scheme was

consistent throughout, my pictures were attractive, I am appealing to my target audience with the

layout and use of colour, I have done research and know what type of articles appear in pop magazines.

But, a few improvements were suggested too. These were things like; the title on the double page

doesn’t look like it belongs as it doesn’t fit the colour scheme, to improve it I should change the colour.

Also, the font for the header and footer on the front cover isn't bold/big enough and different fonts

would suit the magazine better and would stand out more to attract the audience. And lastly, I didn’t

follow conventions on the front cover as the main image is to the right and not central.