Review by actors

I showed it to Lucy, Philippa and Chloe who were actresses in it and they have agreed that it was very jovial and laughed a lot during it which was the intended effect of the video and means that the atmosphere is how I wanted it and I'm getting the right reactions in the right places. I also showed it to Jessica Yang, a fellow classmate, and she said it had a good range of shot types, lip synching was good but one clip where Chloe first appears goes on too long compared to the rest of the shots so I'm planning to put a clip in the middle to break it up a bit and vary the shot lengths. Getting this kind of feedback from a student that understands how the video works technically means that I have a lot more critical feedback and a bit of a clearer idea of how to remedy my errors. 

Progress

At this point I think it is progressing how I wanted it to and in comparison to the as course I think I have a much clearer idea of how i want the audience to respond and how I should review the video at the end of every editing session to ensure it is progressing as intended and there aren't any confusing clips for the audience that affects their enjoyment or receiving of the music video. I believe that after I finish filming my parents and top up the dancing of my grandparents I will find it easier to edit as I will have all of the material and won't have to keep on leaving room to balance out the appearances of the different locations or scenes.