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Group redraft
Written By
Charley Fleming/Dana Holloway & Amber Cornwell
Based on, if any
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INT. SCHOOL CANTEEN - MORNING
HEAD MASTER (V.O)
It was morning break at the school of Merriwether High. Students were gathering round tables in their friendship groups welcoming each-other. All besides one girl.This one girl was called Elsa, she wasn't your average girl she'd be the one over in the corner on her own minding her own business as the days went by.
INT. SCHOOL CANTEEN
JAY (loudly)
Woo, look at the jocks. What idiots.
JOCK GROUPLook at us? look at you giving the weirdo girl the looks.
JAY(casually)
I don't know what you're talking about.
JOCK GROUPHahaha, whatever kiddo.
The Jocks walk away from winding Jay up casually. He stops for a moment and stares at Elsa over in the corner.
INT. SCHOOL CANTEEN - MOMENTS LATER
Jay walks over to Elsa, and starts to make a conversation.
JAY (shyly)
Urhm..Hi, my names Jay, I keep seeing you but I urhm, well i've never been able to walk over..what's yours?
ELSA(giggling)
Hehe, my names Elsa...
JAYThat's a nice name, so why're you on your own...?
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ELSAI like to be on my...
The buzzer goes off, next lesson is about to start. Jay and Elsa stumble away to their lessons in the crowd.
EXT. PLAYING FEILD - AFTERNOON
The fitness classes make their way out to the playing field, only to see they've been placed in mixed groups for the term. A shock comes whilst being paired up for Jay and Elsa.
FITNESS TEACHER (MR JONES)Right class get into pairs or groups! HURRY!
Jay and Elsa see each other and decide to pair up.
JOCK GROUP(mocking)
Awh look at the freakish couple.
ELSAUhg, they really annoy me, thank's for pairing with me.
The Jocks walk past Jay, nudging him hardly to the side.
JOCK GROUPTry not to get lost in the weird girl Jay!
JAY (mumurs)
Whatever...
FITNESS TEACHERTodays lesson we're doing football. Your task is to keep track of strong kicks and turns!
Elsa and Jay start the task of strong passes.
EXT. PLAYING FEILD - MOMENTS LATER
(swooshing football flies over)Jay screams and falls to the floor.
ELSAJAY, JAY, where are you hurt?
JAYMy ribs, my ribs they feel broken.