Proposal Vandalism

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Introduction This proposal addresses the problems of minor crime in our city. For this purpose, I would like to make you aware of the current situation and to recommend possible solutions. Vandalism Our community has been suffering from young vandals who are causing criminal damage to private and public properties. In consequence, I propose they need to perform/carry out Community service. Therefore, it could be interesting if the police would be involved in this project. Fighting Despite the fact that fighting is a minor problem, I have in mind to create a youth club because the community is concerned about new troubles between young groups. What is more, they could learn respect, coexistence and work together playing sports or performing new activities to channel/to focus their rage. Theft A big number of thefts were committed last year, for this reason, the community is afraid of new robberies. Security cameras and night watch-men would be truly helpful. Intimidation We are especially worried about the way young people are reacting in front of each other. It would be a good idea if the police and the community group work hand in hand. As a result, they will be taught how to manage their behavior. Conclusion The areas identified in this proposal are most in need of improvement. Helping young offenders to learn about rules and conduct is the key to develop more constructive ways of behavior. In addition, patrols and surveillance units are necessary to protect our community.

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IntroductionThis proposal addresses the problems of minor crime in our city. For this purpose, I would like to make you aware of the current situation and to recommend possible solutions. VandalismOur community has been suffering from young vandals who are causing criminal damage to private and public properties. In consequence, I propose they need to perform/carry out Community service. Therefore, it could be interesting if the police would be involved in this project.FightingDespite the fact that fighting is a minor problem, I have in mind to create a youth club because the community is concerned about new troubles between young groups. What is more, they could learn respect, coexistence and work together playing sports or performing new activities to channel/to focus their rage.TheftA big number of thefts were committed last year, for this reason, the community is afraid of new robberies. Security cameras and night watch-men would be truly helpful.Intimidation We are especially worried about the way young people are reacting in front of each other. It would be a good idea if the police and the community group work hand in hand. As a result, they will be taught how to manage their behavior. ConclusionThe areas identified in this proposal are most in need of improvement. Helping young offenders to learn about rules and conduct is the key to develop more constructive ways of behavior. In addition, patrols and surveillance units are necessary to protect our community.