Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 Although Anne McCaffrey grew up in New Jersey she later had settled in...

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Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 Although Anne McCaffrey grew up in New Jersey she later had settled in Ireland Corrected Although Anne McCaffrey grew up in New Jersey, she later settled in Ireland. [had deleted]

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Proofreading Warm-up Item 3 Some of the men beleived the more younger dragonboys should of been left out of the pool of candidates. Corrected Some of the men believed the younger dragonboys should have been left out of the pool of candidates. [more deleted]

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Item 1Although Anne McCaffrey grew up in New Jersey she later had settled in Ireland

CorrectedAlthough Anne McCaffrey grew up in New Jersey, she later settled in Ireland. [had deleted]

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Item 2The baby dragones hatched struggled from they’re shells and choose they’re riders.

CorrectedThe baby dragons hatched, struggled from their shells, and chose their riders.

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Item 3Some of the men beleived the more younger dragonboys should of been left out of the pool of candidates.

CorrectedSome of the men believed the younger dragonboys should have been left out of the pool of candidates. [more deleted]

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Item 4was the dragonboys leg broke

CorrectedWas the dragonboy’s leg broken?

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Item 5He keeped his balance by leaning on the stick, and hoping on one leg.

CorrectedHe kept his balance by leaning on the stick and hopping on one leg. [comma deleted]

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Item 6Him and the bronze dragon would be partners forever

CorrectedHe and the bronze dragon would be partners forever.

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Item 7Nenny don’t want to eat at the school canteen, she like to go to her freind Glorias house for lunch.

CorrectedNenny doesn’t want to eat at the school canteen. She likes to go to her friend Gloria’s house for lunch.

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Item 8The girl eaten her rice sandwich which was all ready cold and greasy.

CorrectedThe girl ate her rice sandwich, which was already cold and greasy.

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Item 9t. j. and the other boys gets along good.

CorrectedT. J. and the other boys get along well.

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Item 10The city kids quick excepted him into there group

CorrectedThe city kids quickly accepted him into their group.

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Item 11The boys couldn’t hardly beleive it

CorrectedThe boys could hardly believe it.

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Item 12T. J. and them had growed grass on the roof of a city building!

CorrectedT. J. and they had grown grass on the roof of a city building!