Poetry: Capturing the Image Jeana Etamé North Star of Texas Writing Project Lewisville ISD...

Poetry:Capturing the Image

Jeana EtaméNorth Star of Texas

Writing ProjectLewisville ISD

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June 21, 2005

From Awakening the Heart by Georgia Heard

“What is it that allows many people in the United States to accept the view of poetry as a luxury rather than food for all: food for the heart and senses, food of memory and hope?”

- Adrienne Rich, Introduction (xvi)

Rationale:

Ralph Fletcher, Poetry Matters

“Mental pictures, or images, are at the heart of poetry, just like emotions.” (21)

Thought for the Day:

Let’s begin…

Whole Group Writing:Read-Aloud

Student Focus:Image Details

Think/Pair/Share:

What do you…See? Hear? Feel? Think?

“…students often need to talk out what they plan to write before beginning to write.” (135)

Gail Tompkins, Teaching Writing: Balancing Process and Product

Think/Pair/Share:

“We need to raise our expectations for student writing to a higher literary standard and teach students how to meet them.”

- Nancie Atwell, Lessons That Change Writers

Modeling:

“I take off the top of my head and write out loud in front of [the students]…I show them how I plan, change my mind, confront problems, weigh options, make decisions, use conventions to make my writing sound and look the way I want it to and my readers will need it to, and generally compose my life.” (25)

- Nancie Atwell, In the Middle

As teachers, we are mentors of writing, mediators of writing strategies and models of writers at work. (21)

“Teachers encourage children by demonstrating how to develop topics using the ordinary events of daily life and school life. Teachers encourage children to talk about things that interest them, stories they have enjoyed, ideas they might want to share with classmates. Out of these conversations, topics emerge.” (49)

- Gail Tompkins, Teaching Writing: Balancing Process and Product


“…ELL students at any grade level learn a great deal when they write with classmates and the teacher.” (31)

Ralph Fletcher, Poetry Matters

“If you want to create strong images, get in the habit of observing the world so you can create your own pictures using words.” (21)

Let’s continue…


Small Group Writing:Image Photography

Student Focus: Image DetailsPre-writing Activity

“Poetry is about recognizing and paying attention to our inner lives – our memories, hopes, doubts, questions, fears, joys – and the image is the hook we find to hang the poem on.” (66)

- Georgia Heard, Awakening the Heart

“…the image moistens the poem.”

- Robert Bly, Awakening the Heart (66)

“The energy that comes from rubbing one image against another in poems…we’re desperate for that energy.”

- Naomi Nye, Awakening the Heart (66)

- Harry Noden, Image Grammar

“When an author lacks a visual eye, his or her writing has no heart and soul: images lie lifeless like cadavers in a morgue.” (2)

Brushstrokes

Show, Don’t Tell

Use Your Senses

“Don’t say the old lady screamed. Bring her on and let her scream.”

- Mark Twain

On your own…


Small Group Writing:Image Photography

Individual Writing Activity:Six-Room Poems

Fold your paper in thirds.

Six-Room Poem

Fold your paper long-ways in half.

Six-Room Poem

Image

First Room

Think of something you’ve seen outside that is amazing, beautiful and interesting

OR

Think of some time long ago that is a special memory

OR

Think of a moment in time that has stayed in your mind like a picture

ACTIVITY: Close your eyes. See your image as clearly as a photograph. Notice the details. Describe it…

From Georgia Heard’s Awakening the Heart

Six-Room Poem

Image

Second Room

Looking at the same “photograph” in your mind, focus on the quality of light.

Questions to ask yourself…

Is it bright? Cloudy? Dull?

Are there shadows? Colors?

Examples:

Shiny blues, Sparkling red

ACTIVITY: Describe the quality of light…

Light


Six-Room Poem

Image

Third Room

As you picture your image, what can you hear? Focus on the sounds you hear.


Maybe it’s silent. What kind of silence?

Examples:

Rustling of leaves, Pitter-patter of rain, Sweet laughter

ACTIVITY: Describe the sounds you hear…

Light

Sounds


Six-Room Poem

Image

Fourth Room

Write down any questions you might have about the image.


Do you want to know anything else about the image?

Do you wonder something?

Examples:

Why were we in this place in the winter?

Why was I with them?

ACTIVITY: Write your questions…

Light

Sounds Questions


Six-Room Poem

Image

Fifth Room

Write down any feelings you have about your image.


How was I feeling?

How do I feel now?

Example:

I remember being so happy as we played outside together.

ACTIVITY: Write your feelings…

Light

Sounds Questions

Feelings


Six-Room Poem

Image

Sixth Room

As you look over all your rooms,

think of one word,a few words,

a phrase,a line,

or a sentence that is important to you and/or describes the

image entirely.

ACTIVITY: Repeat your word or words three times…

Light

Sounds Questions

Feelings Repetition



“[poets] create strong images when they use unexpected comparisons, repeat sounds within a line or stanza, imitate sounds, repeat words and phrases, and choose rhyming words.” (409)

How to Make a Poem

Close your eyes.Don’t peek.Close them tight,tight so it’sdark, darktill you see somethingin sight.

Close your eyesdon’t peek.Tryand see a poem.

Danielle Pioggia, Grade 3 (125)

Awakening the Heart, Georgia Heard

“We need to look for, listen for, and feel the heartbeats in our students. That’s where the energy is, for us and for them.” (90)

- Donald Graves, Teaching Day by Day

A suitable lesson for your classroom?

Elementary Age Students: Four-Room Poem – Memory; Sound; Feelings; and Now

Middle School Age Students: Add some rooms to describe image using similes and/or

metaphors Add smells, touch, taste that students can imagine in the

images

High School Age Students: Thirteen-Room Poem – Using Wallace Stevens’ “Thirteen

Ways of Looking at a Blackbird” Add a room to weave a favorite line or quote from another

poem or book that helps describe the image.


“…reading and writing poetry will give our students more than a good score on a writing test.” (5)

- Georgia Heard, Awakening the Heart

Quest for the Test:

6th grade Language ArtsTEKS

4A (W) connect his/her own experiences, information, insights, and ideas with experiences of others through speaking and listening

15C (W) write to inform such as to explain, describe, report, and narrate (1)

15D (W) write to entertain such as to compose humorous poems or short stories (1)

15E (W) select and use voice and style appropriate to audience and purpose (1)

18A-I (W) Writing Processes (1,2,3,4,5,6)

18A (W) generate ideas and plans for writing by using prewriting strategies such as brainstorming, graphic organizers, notes, and logs (1)

18 G (W) refine selected pieces frequently to “publish” for general and specific audiences

24C (W) assess how language, medium, and presentation contribute to the message

R=Reading; W=Writing

6th grade Language ArtsTEKS

3C (R/W) analyze the use of aesthetic language for its effects

8B (R) select varied sources such as plays, anthologies, novels, textbooks, poetry, newspapers, manuals, and electronic texts when reading for information or pleasure

9C (R) read for varied purposes such as to be informed, to be entertained, to appreciate the writer’s craft, and to discover models for his/her own writing

10D (R) describe mental images that text descriptions evoke

11A (R) offer observations, make connections, react, speculate, interpret, and raise questions in response to texts

R=Reading; W=Writing

“…[life] is not about the amount of breaths you take but rather the moments that takes your breath away.”

- Will Smith in Hitch

Bibliography

Atwell, N. (1998). In the middle: New understandings about writing, reading, and learning. Portsmouth, NH: Boynton/Cook Publishers, Inc.

______. (2002). Lessons that change writers. Portsmouth, NH: firsthand.

Fletcher, R. (2002). Poetry matters: writing a poem from the inside out. New York, NY: HarperTrophy.

Graves, D. (2004). Teaching day by day: 180 stories to help you along the way. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann.

Heard, G. (1999). Awakening the heart: exploring poetry in elementary and middle school. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann.

Keene, E.O. & Zimmermann, S. (1997). Mosaic of thought: teaching comprehension in a reader’s workshop. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann.

Noden, H. (1999). Image grammar. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann.

Tompkins, G. (1990). Teaching writing: balancing process and product. Upper Saddle River, NJ: Pearson Education, Inc.

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