Notes Made on Previous Double Page Spread and Front Cover

Double Page Spread

Re-sizing the font on the introduction to the article to make it easier to read.

Adjusting the size of the main image so that it doesn’t overlap the text.

Change the and the font and size of the interview text as real magazines interview are not this big.

Blur the image of model playing on instrument to create a sense of soulfulness to the page.

Move the introduction to the second page instead of the first as it doesn’t make the page look complex and it will make the page look neater.

I want to include my pull quote into my interview to prove that I didn’t just put it on my page and also so that it actually makes sense with the interview with my artist.

Front CoverThe brown colour doesn’t allow my magazine to stand out. So adjusting the colour will allow the page to stand out to the reader.

Adjusting the positioning of the “Soul is monthly” will allow readers to identify this information

Trying not to compensate on blender tools and options so that it looks more professional

Moving the “PLUS Top 10 Soul Jams, Singing tips with T he Crystals” to a more convenient place. It doesn’t look like it’s supposed to go there.

Changing the colour of the background on “YOUR NUMBER 1 SOUL MAGAZINE” Teacher told me as if after the strapline that’s where the magazine starts.

Contents

The text looks too bunched which makes it look unprofessional. I should try spacing the information about the articles so that they are more easier to comprehend.

The lack of page numbers suggests that the contents is unfinished.

The fact that the additional images of the artists are positioned as circles doesn’t make this magazine look soulful or professional.

I was told by peers that the arrow at the bottom right corner looked quite inappropriate. I have now removed the arrow and will not be using it anymore.