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“S” step is added

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1dx Granny Birthday party Ever been really

surprised?

Pizza trick

Pizza, ice cream, cake

This was the best birthday ever.

Lots of presents

Birthday cake

ice cream

basketball

Daddy-clown

orange hair

Pizza Palace

Video tape

video games

Clown video

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Best friends came

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Last week, Mom stopped at the Pizza Palace and sent me in to pick up an order. It was a trick to surprise me with a birthday party.

My best friends were there. When I walked in, they yelled “SURPRISE!” I was really shocked. I could even speak.

I got lots of cool presents, but the best one was the basketball you sent me. I’ve wanted one for a long time. I also got some cool video games.

First we ate pizza. Then I opened presents. Dad came out with my birthday cake. We had chocolate ice cream with it.

Mom video taped the whole thing. It is really funny. I hope you get to watch it. Dad had orange hair and a weird clown suit on.

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x Granny Birthday party Ever been really surprised?

Pizza trick

Pizza, ice cream, cake

This was the best birthday ever.

Lots of presents

Birthday cake

ice cream

basketball

Daddy-clown

orange hair

Pizza Palace

Video tape

video games

Clown video

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2

3

4

Best friends came

5

Last week, Mom stopped at the Pizza Palace and sent me in to pick up an order. It was a trick to surprise me with a birthday party.

My best friends were there. When I walked in, they yelled “SURPRISE!” I was really shocked. I could even speak.

I got lots of cool presents, but the best one was the basketball you sent me. I’ve wanted one for a long time. I also got some cool video games.

First we ate pizza. Then I opened presents. Dad came out with my birthday cake. We had chocolate ice cream with it.

Mom video taped the whole thing. It is really funny. I hope you get to watch it. Dad had orange hair and a weird clown suit on.

Dear Granny,

Have your ever been really surprised? Last week, Mom stopped at the Pizza Palace and sent me in to pick up an order. It was a trick to surprise me with a birthday party. My best friends were there. When I walked in, they yelled “SURPRISE!” I was really shocked. I couldn’t even speak. I got lots of cool presents, but the best one was the basketball you sent me. I’ve wanted one for a long time. I also got some cool video games. First we ate pizza. Then I opened presents. Dad came out with my birthday cake. We had chocolate ice cream with it. Mom video taped the whole thing. It is really funny. I hope you get to watch it. Dad had orange hair and a weird clown suit on. This was the best birthday ever.

Love, Jamil