The Narrative Storyboard Chapter 4.4 in Sketching User Experiences: The Workbook.
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Slug Line: INT. SHOP.DAY Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY.
Action: Beth buys coffee from the cashier and walks out of the shop. Action: Beth walks down the corridor with coffee in each hand. Action: Liam is upset when she arrives.
Camera: LS
Camera: WS
Camera: CU
Dialogue: BETH: Thank you. Dialogue:BETH:(Calmly) Here you go. Dialogue: LIAM: (Stammering) Th-th-thanks.
Sound (diegetic): foot steps, people walking around the college, cash register
Sound (diegetic): footsteps, people walking around the college
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Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line:INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY.
Action: Beth sits down next to him. Action: Beth begins to talk to Liam. Action: Conversation
Camera: shot reverse shot
Camera: shot reverse shot
Camera: shot reverse shot
Dialogue:BETH:No problem, so, why don’t you tell me what happened?
Dialogue:LIAM:(Stammering)We started out like any other couple. We were happy. I don’t understand what happened. She just changed. Maybe I did something. Maybe I hurt her in some way. Maybe I hurt her. I don’t know, all of this could be my fault.
Dialogue:BETH:Hey! Look at me. This isn’t your fault. You didn’t do anything wrong. So tell me the whole story.
Sound (diegetic): beth sitting down
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Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line:INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line:INT. CORRIDOR. DAY.
Action:Conversation Action:Conversation Action:Conversation
Camera:shot reverse shot
Camera:shot reverse shot
Camera:shot reverse shot
Dialogue:LIAM:(Sighs)So it all started a few months back.
Dialogue:There was this party that we were planning on going to. We were both looking forward to it.
Dialogue:I – I went over to her house to get ready with her, everything was fine until she started doing her make up
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Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY. Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY.
Action:Conversation Action: Jade puts on her makeup Action: Nathan walks into the room
Camera:shot reverse shot
Camera: MCU
Camera: WS
Dialogue:LIAM (AS NARRATOR):She was sat listening to music, making a mess with her make-up all over the floor. I just walked in and was stood watching her.
Dialogue: Liam : That part always entertains me. Isn’t it strange how girls pull some ugly faces when they are applying make-up to try and look ‘perfect’?
Dialogue:JADE:This dress is really nice. I’m so happy you got it for me.
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Sound (diegetic): music, make up products rattling
Sound (diegetic):music, make up products rattling, footsteps
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Transition: dissolve
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Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY. Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY. Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY.
Action: argument begins Action: arguing Action: arguing
Camera: WS
Camera: Shot rev. shot
Camera:Shot rev. shot
Dialogue:JADE:(Angrily)Who is that?
Dialogue:JADE:(Aggressively)And who is she? I bet she’s your bit of stuff on the side is she. I see how it is here. There was bound to be someone else. That’s why you surprised me with this. Trying to buy m now, are we?
Dialogue:LIAM:(Nervously)Wow, where is this coming from? I bought you that dress because I remembered you liked it when you saw it on Facebook. Why are you getting so jealous? She’s just a friend from college.
Sound (diegetic): music
Sound (diegetic): music
Sound (diegetic): music
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Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY. Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY. Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY.
Action: arguing Action: arguing Action: jade slaps liam for the first time
Camera:Shot rev. shot
Camera: Shot rev. shot
Camera: two shot
Dialogue:JADE:(sarcastically)Yeah! “Just a friend” That’s what they all say.LIAM:Seriously, get a grip! She is just a friend. You’ll see her tonight and you can talk to her yourself.
Dialogue: Jade:Me? Get a grip? How dare you speak to me like that? Who on earth do you think you are?
Dialogue: N/A
Sound (diegetic): music
Sound (diegetic): music
Sound (diegetic): music and slap
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Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY. Slug Line: INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY. Slug Line: INT. BLANK. NIGHT.
Action: liam looks at her in shock Action: the both look at eachother in shock Action: blank screen
Camera: MCU
Camera: WS
Camera: blank
Dialogue: N/A Dialogue: N/A Dialogue: LIAM (AS NARATOR):As soon as I saw her looking, I just knew what she was thinking. She thought I was cheating on her. I don’t know why. I was always loyal to her,
Sound (diegetic): music
Sound (diegetic): music
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Transition: cut
Transition: fade
Transition: fade
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Slug Line: INT. PARTY. NIGHT. Slug Line: INT. PARTY. NIGHT. Slug Line: INT. PARTY. NIGHT.
Action:Liam talks to lauren at the party Action: liam talks to lauren at the party Action: liam talks to lauren at the party
Camera:Shot rev. shot
Camera:Shot rev. shot
Camera: Shot rev. shot
Dialogue: Liam : I couldn’t even look at another girl. I’m that type of person. Once I’m with someone, that’s it, it’s them and me. That’s it. I thought she knew that but obviously not but I knew from that look what was coming next…
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Sound (diegetic): loud music
Sound (diegetic): loud music
Sound (diegetic): loud music
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Slug Line: INT. PARTY. NIGHT. Slug Line: INT. PARTY. NIGHT. Slug Line: EXT. ALLY. NIGHT.
Action: liam talks to lauren at the party Action: Jade sees them talking and decides to leave Action: They are walking home and Jade starts to get angry
Camera: Shot rev. shot
Camera: two shot
Camera: Arial shot
Dialogue: N/A Dialogue: N/A Dialogue: JADE:(Angrily)If she makes you so happy, why don’t you go out with her?LIAM:Oh my God. Would you drop it? We are just friends. How many times do I have to tell you that?
Sound (diegetic): loud music
Sound (diegetic): footsteps and faint thudding
Sound (diegetic): footsteps and faint thudding
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Slug Line: EXT. ALLY. NIGHT. Slug Line: EXT. ALLY. NIGHT. Slug Line: EXT. ALLY. NIGHT.
Action: Jade pushes liam against the wall Action: She looks angry as she gets jealous and paranoid and starts to hit him Action: a group of people walk past as liam is getting beaten
Camera: Arial shot
Camera: handheld
Camera: wide shot
Dialogue:LIAM (AS NARATOR):I begged her to stop but she wouldn’t. She just kept telling me that I was treating her like dirt because I was friends with another girl. She was really hurting me. I didn’t defend myself though, I wasn’t raised to hit a woman back. Then other people came along the street and…
Dialogue:LIAM: Jade, please stop!
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Sound (diegetic): Faint thudding, hitting
Sound (diegetic): faint thudding and hitting
Sound (diegetic): faint thudding and hitting
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Slug Line: EXT. ALLY. NIGHT. Slug Line: EXT. ALLY. NIGHT. Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY.
Action: The strangers seem amused by the abuse Liam is suffering Action: Jade repeatedly beats liam Action: The couple are on the couch watching TV
Camera: wide shot
Camera: low angle
Camera: wide shot
Dialogue:STRANGER:Oh my God! Look how pathetic he is haha! He’s getting beaten up by a girl!
Dialogue:LIAM (AS NARATOR): After that night she was continuously violent towards me and I couldn’t bring myself to leave her. I still loved her. Then she started patronizing me. I felt so stupid.
Dialogue: N/A
Sound (diegetic): faint thudding, hitting, footsteps
Sound (diegetic):faint thudding, hitting, footsteps
Sound (diegetic):TV
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Transition: cut
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Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY.
Action: They are watching TV Action: Jade mocks a man on the TV who has been beaten by his girlfriend Action: Liam feels emasculated
Camera: over shoulder shot
Camera: low angle shot
Camera: MS
Dialogue:JADE:(Laughing)Haha, how pathetic. That’s no kind of man if he’s intimidated by a woman. A woman can’t abuse a man.
Dialogue:JADE:(Motherese tone of voice)What’s the matter with your face
Dialogue:N/A
Sound (diegetic): TV
Sound (diegetic): TV
Sound (diegetic): TV
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Transition: cut
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Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line:INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line:INT. HOME. DAY.
Action: Jade patronises him Action: Liam packs his things Action: Jade is shocked and upset
Camera: MS
Camera: MS
Camera: MLS
Dialogue:JADE:(Aggressively)Oh take your tampon out, you big girl! Look at yourself. Absolutely pathetic! It’s a wonder I’m still with you!
Dialogue:LIAM:Fine! Then I’ll go!
Dialogue:JADE:(Shocked and pleading)You can’t just leave me. If you really loved me you wouldn’t just go.
Sound (diegetic):
Sound (diegetic): TV
Sound (diegetic): TV
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Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY.
Action: Jade hits him again Action: Liam gets upset Action: Jade hits him
Camera: POV
Camera: MS
Camera: MLS
Dialogue:LIAM:(Snapping)Yeah? Well if you really loved me you wouldn’t beat me for having friends.
N/A Dialogue: N/a
Sound (diegetic): TV and hitting
Sound (diegetic): TV and hitting
Sound (diegetic): TV and hitting
Sound (non-diegetic): N/A Sound (non-diegetic): N/A Sound (non-diegetic): N/A
Transition: cut
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Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line: INT. HOME. DAY. Slug Line: EXT. STREET. DAY.
Action: Jade gets more angry Action: Liam starts to leave Action: He walks out into the street
Camera: MCU
Camera: MLS
Camera: WS
Dialogue: N/A Dialogue: N/A Dialogue: N/A
Sound (diegetic):TV
Sound (diegetic): footsteps Sound (diegetic): footsteps, door closing
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Slug Line: EXT. STREET. DAY. Slug Line:EXT. STREET. DAY. Slug Line: EXT. STREET. DAY.
Action: Jade watches him leave through the window Action: He continues walking down the street Action: He is crying
Camera: high angle
Camera: MLS, tracking
Camera: ECU
Dialogue: LIAM (AS NARATOR):I didn’t look but I could feel her staring holes in my back as I was walking away. I didn’t want to look back, if I did I would only have gave in and walked back in.
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Sound (diegetic): footsteps
Sound (diegetic): footsteps
Sound (diegetic): footsteps
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Transition: cut
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Slug Line: INT. BLANK. DAY. Slug Line: INT. BLANK. DAY. Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY.
Action: blank screen Action: blank screen Action: Liam cries to beth
Camera: blank
Camera: blank
Camera: ECU
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Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY.
Action:Beth tries to comfort him Action: Beth tries to comfort him Action: beth tries to comfort him
Camera: two shot
Camera: Shot rev. shot
Camera: CU
Dialogue:BETH:So, was that the last time you saw her?
Dialogue:LIAM:(Sighs)Yeah, good riddance to bad rubbish, ey? Saying that though, the worst part about this whole situation is that I still love her.
Dialogue:BETH:I know it’ll be hard but you’ll be fine. I’m glad you felt like you could come to me, but I think you need to remember why you left her so you won’t go back there.
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Transition: cut
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Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY. Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY.
Action: He continues to cry Action: they hug Action: Beth offers him help
Camera: MLS
Camera: Two shot
Camera: LS
Dialogue:LIAM:I know, I just feel so weak right now.
Dialogue:BETH:You feel like that now but I’m going to help you get the right help so you can get your life back.
Dialogue:BETH:You’re going to be okay.
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Sound (non-diegetic): n/a Sound (non-diegetic): music Sound (non-diegetic): music
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Slug Line: INT. CORRIDOR. DAY.
Action: Beth offers him help
Camera: Shot rev. shot
Dialogue: N/a
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Sound (non-diegetic): music
Transition: fade
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