7/25/2019 Narrative Paragraph Notes

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Narrative paragraph notes

Csenge

No TS Illogical connection of clauses No verbs for the sake of drama Strange association of words yell kindly

Barabas Bogi

Logical stu New ideas intro w!o prep and put ne"t to each other# others# when shouldn$t

%utai &s

TS not clear does not indicate what it is to follow

'en$ta

Collo(uial a bit Style issues )ood TS# structure* Nice

+nett

)rammar issues Struc* ,- Inlikely clauses linked Sudden shift

-ovacs Nandor

.the/ )rammar Stylistic issues# few

0etru +nita

)rammar# contractions

Last sentence# out of logical1