Megan and the cottage of darkness

By Kate onslow

Every day Megan took her dog, who was a black

Labrador named Lilly, for a walk. Lilly and Megan loved

walking together. Megan always walked in a field

called flower field. Flower field had sunflowers,

buttercups and every flower you could think of! But

then suddenly one afternoon out of nowhere a gloomy

shadow appeared in the middle of the colourful field…

Finally as the shadow started to get clearer, Megan

could see it was an old cottage. The cottage had

brown, mouldy walls and a black and yellow striped

door. On that door it said KEEP OUT! Megan looked at

it for a while then suddenly CREAK! The door stared to

open. Lilly ran in. “Lilly, NO”! But it was too late!

She muttered to herself, “I have to go in, I just have

to.” After a long decision she crept in as quite as a

mouse.

It was pitch black, she tried shouting “Lilly,” but she

could not hear a reply. After 15 minutes of looking she

thought to herself, “It is too late, I have to go back and

give up.”

But she couldn’t find her way back because it was pitch

black. She was lost! When she trying to find her way

back the walls were starting to crave in. It was so tight

that she could hardly breathe. Then she found

something on the wall it read REDRUM WON!