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Collated & created by Rhonda Kaidbay, Literacy Consultant 7-12, NSR, 2010
“Discover Australia”High Modality future
tense
“Visit us online”
Map and the route of the tour
Australian images instead of the word “AUSTRALIA”
The itinerary clearly structured
THE MODAL CLINE
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STRONG POSITION
WEAK POSITION
MEDIUM POSITION
must will
would
should
Is to
can
supposed to
has to
couldCUT&PASTE MODAL VERBSActivity: Cut the modal verbs
out and paste them on the cline
The Modal ClineActivity: discussion based. In groups have students glue where they think
the verbs belong
I believe (that)...
I guess (that)
It is obvious Everyone
knows
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ought to
Was to need
was to
may
might
MODAL CLINE 1. Colour the boxes containing verbs in blue and the boxes
containing clauses green2. Cut out these Modal verbs & Clauses 3. Paste them on the verb cline
In my opinion,
It isn’t likely
If..., then...
WEAK POSITION MEDIUM POSITION STRONG POSITION
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If you are looking to experience the atmosphere of medieval China, look no further than World Heritage- listed Pingyao, probably the best preserved walled city in the country.
Begin by getting to know some of little-visited Pingyao’s hidden treasures within the Ming City Walls, which are still relatively intact. The Ri Sheng Change Financial House or first bank in China, provides an insight into trade in the China of old. You’ll also have the chance to wander Pingao’s charming old streets, admiring the many examples of traditional architecture. The next day drive a short distance to Wang’s Family Courtyard, a labyrinth of courtyards, gardens and gateways waiting to be explored. On your final day drive to Shuanglin Temple, which was built during the Ming and Quing Dynasties and is home to thousands of Buddhist statues. From here head to Qiao Jia Dayuan, a beautifully-kept courtyard house that was the setting for Zhang Yimou’s famous film, Raise the Red Lantern. Later, transfer back to Taiyuan Station to connect with the overnight train back to Beijing, or on to Xian.
Identify the verbsActivity: This is an extract from a brochure on China. Read the extract and highlight the modal
verbs and clauses.
THE MODAL CLINE
Know your audience... who are you writing to?
Here are some sentences from a ski-resort brochure. Code them according to the target audience.
Sentence from brochure Target AudienceFamilies 18-30 year
oldsBeginner
level skiersAdvanced
level skiersThe vertical drop is perfect for extreme skiing.
The resort is friendly and quiet with a good range of welcoming restaurants. The cosmopolitan and chic centre is the place to be seen off the slopes. The extensive off-piste area offers exhilarating runs for the snowboarder who likes to be challenged. This tranquil resort offers extensive leisure facilities and a crèche, making it an ideal choice for mixed-ability parties and non skiers. Many of the ski runs are pleasant, gentle and sheltered.
Apres-ski and evening entertainment are plentiful and varied with lively bars and plenty of opportunities for dancing. The wide runs offer plenty of opportunity to gain confidence and experience.
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Who will be your target audience? How old are they? What do they do? What are their interests? How will your brochure appeal to them?
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Instructions: Choose a picture, describe the scene, list what people can do in the location, write a sentence for a brochure telling tourists about the activities they can do. Write the same sentence using high modal verbs, medium modal verbs and low modal verbs.
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Example:
Choose a picture: Ming City Wall Describe the scene: green trees, a long brown wall laced with what looks like moss List what people can do in the scene: wander along the wall, take a boat to reach the
wall, climb the wall, bungee jump off the wall. Write a sentence about what tourists can do using high modal verbs
Wander along the long winding Ming City Wall.
Rewrite the sentence with medium modal verbs - highlight the changes
You can wander along the long winding Ming City Wall.
Rewrite the sentence with low modal verbs - high light the change
Perhaps you can wander along the long winding Ming City Wall.
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Ri Sheng
Right hand of the big Buddha located at Lingshan near Wuxi