LET’S  STRIVE  FOR  EXCELLENT  ENGLISH  

014  A  ON  TARGET  

 I am just an ordinary teacher looking for something a little more out of the ordinary…

I love teaching and l love teaching English Language subject. However, I am here not to teach, I am here to share ideas, knowledge and experience.

BAND   MARKS  

EXCELLENT   9  –  10  

GOOD   7  –  8    

CREDIT   5  –  6    

ACHIEVEMENT   1  –  4    

SECTION  A  No.  1  

     

HOW  TO  DO  IT  RIGHT???  

What  do  you  need  to  do?  1. Read  the  instrucMon.  2. Look  at  the  picture.  3. Do  the  circling  and  labelling.  4. Look  at  the  notes  given.  5. Construct  sentences.  

It  is  advisable  that  you  use…  PRESENT  CONTINUOUS  TENSE     SUBJECT   VERB   Object/  

Compliment/  Adj/Adv/Noun  

are    ……ing  washing  eaMng  doing  

   

       ?  is  

And  you  have  to  remember…  •  NO  ASSUMPTIONS  •  NO  IMAGINATIONS  •  NO  FEELINGS  (UNLESS  THE  WORDS  ARE  GIVEN)  •  NO  ADJECTIVES  (UNLESS  THE  WORDS  ARE  GIVEN)  •  N0  ADVERBS  (UNLESS  THE  WORDS  ARE  GIVEN)              

(WHAT  YOU  SEE  IS  WHAT  YOU  WRITE)      

 

Discussion  on  SecMon  B  

QUESTION  NO  2A  WHAT  SHOULD  YOU  DO?    Be  careful    ¢ when  transferring  informaMon  ¢ with  your  spelling  ¢ with  your  punctuaMons    Remember  ¢ to  follow  the  paberns    

QUESTION  NO  2B  WHAT  SHOULD  YOU  DO?  

 Be  careful    ¢ when  construcMng  sentences  ¢ with  your  spelling  ¢ with  your  punctuaMons    Remember  

¢ to  give  reasons  for  every            aspect  

 

QuesMon  No  2b  

BAND   MARKS  

EXCELLENT   5  

GOOD   4  

CREDIT   2  –  3    

ACHIEVEMENT   1  

ASPECTS POINTS + (Linkers)

REASONS

CHOICE I would prefer Nike for my sister

because it suitable for her. She likes the brand.

PRICE The price is RM 45.00. Besides, it is reasonable and affordable.

COLOUR It comes in two colours. They are blue and black.

- They are my sister’s favourite colours.

MATERIAL It is made of canvas. Furthermore, it is long lasting.

SOLD AT It is available at Nikko’s Souvenirs.

- One of the shops is near my house. I can cycle there to buy it.

COMPARTMENTS It has two compartments with two side pockets.

In addition, my sister can put her things/stuff into them.

ASPECTS – POINTS + REASONS

ASPECTS POINTS + (Linkers)

REASONS

CHOICE I would prefer Nike for my sister

because she likes the brand.

PRICE The price is RM 45.00. Besides, it is reasonable and affordable.

It is worth buying.

I will not burn a hole in my pocket if I buy it for my beloved sister.

COLOUR The bag is available in blue and black

Furthermore, they are my sister’s favourite colours.

MATERIAL It is made of canvas and it is long lasting.

SOLD AT I can buy it at Nikko’s Souvenirs.

In addition, one of the shops is just a stone’s throw away from my house.

COMPARTMENTS It has two compartments with two side pockets.

My sister can put her things/stuff into/in them.

Based on the above reasons, I am sure this is the best choice.

ASPECTS – POINTS + REASONS

DISCUSSION  ON    SECTION  C  

QuesMon  No  3  BAND   MARKS  

EXCELLENT   13  –  15    

GOOD   9  –  12    

CREDIT   5  –  8    

ACHIEVEMENT   1  –  4    

What  is  the  easiest  way?  1.  IdenMfying  the  verbs.  2.  ExtracMng  them.  3.  Recognising  the  subjects  to  the  verbs  

extracted.  4.  ConstrucMng  sentences.  5.  Modifying  the  verbs  and  nouns.  

+   SUBJECT   VERBS   O/C  

Last  week,   Amir   was  walking   home  from  school  alone.  

On  his  way,   he   saw   mangoes  on  the  tree.  

They   looked   very  delicious.  

Amir   decided  to  take   the  mangoes  

because   he   was   hungry.  

Without    thinking,   he     climbed  up   the  tree.  

Unfortunately,   the  branch  of  the  tree  

broke.  

He   fell   down  to  the  ground.  

and   he   hurt   himself.  

-­‐one  word  one  sentence-­‐  WORD   SENTENCE  

walking   Amir  was  walking  ager  school  

home   As  usual,  he’s  walking  home  alone    

saw   On  his  way,  he  saw  a  mango  tree.  

Words  of  Wisdom  A  journey  of  a  thousand  miles  begins  with  a  single  step.  

Lao-­‐tzu,  The  Way  of  Lao-­‐tzu  Chinese  philosopher  (604  BC  -­‐  531  BC)  

 

Dreams  are  journeys  that  take  one  far  from  familiar  shores,  strengthening  the  heart,  

empowering  the  soul.  ~  Unknown