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Lesson 3: IELTS Process Diagram It is less common in the writing test, but sometimes you will get an IELTS process diagram to describe. This should follow the same format as any task 1: 1. Introduce the diagram Class 12

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Lesson 3: IELTS Process Diagram

It is less common in the writing test, but

sometimes you will get an IELTS process

diagram to describe.

This should follow the same format as any task

1:

1. Introduce the diagram

2. Give an overview of the main point/s

3. Give the detail

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• What is an IELTS Process Diagram?

• To begin, look at this question:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to

manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the

main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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• A process will have a number of stages

that are in time order.  So you should start

at the beginning, and describe each stage

through to the last one.

• In the example before, this is fairly clear. It

begins with the digging of the clay, and ends

with delivery.

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• Processes are not always this clear, and you

may have to look more carefully to spot the

beginning, and there may also be two things

happening at the same time.

• So it is important that you look at other

sample processes to get a good

understanding of how they can vary.

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• Introduce the Diagram

• As with any task 1, you can begin by

paraphrasing the rubric:

• The diagram explains the way in which bricks

are made for the building industry.

• As you can see, this has been taken from the

question, but it has not been copied. You need

to write it in your own words.

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• Highlight the main points

• An IELTS process diagram is different to a line, bar,

pie chart or table in that there are not usually key

changes or trends to identify.  However, you should

still give an overview of what is taking place.

• The  ‘public band descriptors’ state that to

achieve a band 6 or more for ‘task response’ the

student must provide an overview in a task 1.

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• As there are no trends to comment on, you

can make a comment on, for example, the

number of stages in the process and how

it begins and ends:

• Overall, there are eight stages in the

process, beginning with the digging up of

clay and culminating in delivery.

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• Turn to Pg 59 in your level 1 books and

rearrange the sentences.

• The first two are use to say what the diagram

is about.

• The second two are general statements

about the stages involved

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• Giving the detail

• Now you need to explain the IELTS process

diagram, and there are two key aspects of

language associated with this:

1. Time connectors (Sequencing language)

2. The passive

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• Time Connectors

• A process is a series of events, one taking

place after the other.  Therefore, to connect

your stages, you should use ‘time

connectors’.  Here is the rest of the answer

with the time connectors highlighted (notice

that you simply go from the beginning to the

end of the process):

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• Time Connectors

• To begin, the clay used to make the bricks is

dug up from the ground by a large digger.

This clay is then placed onto a metal grid,

which is used to break up the clay into

smaller pieces. A roller assists in this

process.

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• Time Connectors

• Following this, sand and water are added to

the clay, and this mixture is turned into

bricks by either placing it into a mould or

using a wire cutter. Next, these bricks are

placed in an oven to dry for 24 – 48 hours.

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• Time Connectors

• In the subsequent stage, the bricks go

through a heating and cooling process. They

are heated in a kiln at a moderate and then a

high temperature (ranging from 200c to

1300c), followed by a cooling process in a

chamber for 2 – 3 days. Finally, the bricks are

packed and delivered to their destinations.

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• Time Connectors

• These connectors are the same you would

use to write a graph over time when you

explain a series of changes.

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• Time Connectors

These are some common IELTS process diagram connectors:

(** If you use before, this means that you will be mentioning a later stage

before an earlier stage, so you need to use it carefully.  If you can use it

properly though, it will get noticed.  )

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To begin

Following this

Next

Then

After

After that

Before**

Subsequently

Finally

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• Time Connectors

• Here is an example using stages four and

five:

• Before being dried in the oven, the mixture is

turned into bricks by either placing it into a

mould or using a wire cutter.

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• The Passive

• When we describe an IELTS process, the

focus is on the activities, NOT the person

doing them. 

• When this is the case, we use the passive

voice, not the active.

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• The Passive

• Most sentences use this structure:

• Subject + Verb + Object

• (S) A large digger (V) digs up (O) the clay in

the ground.

• In the active voice (as above), the digger is

doing the verb i.e. the digger is doing the

digging.

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• The Passive

• When we use the passive voice, we make the object (the

clay) the subject, and make the subject (the digger) the

object. We also add in the verb ‘to be’ and the past

participle (or Verb 3).

• (S) The clay in the ground (V) is dug up (O) by the

digger.

• So throughout most of your description for your IELTS

process diagram, you should be using the passive voice. 

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• This is difficult as some verbs cannot take

the passive. For example, 'to go' cannot be

passive, so it is kept in the active voice:

• ...the bricks go through a heating and cooling

process.

• This is why you need to make sure you

practice the passive so you know exactly

how to use it.

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• Present passive

• We do not always need to say who is doing

the action so sometimes we can exclude the

word ‘by’.

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• Look at the worksheet and change the

sentences from active to passive.

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• Now turn to Pg. 60 in your level 1 book and

Pg. 61 in your introduction book.

• The first six stages have been written into

the passive for you (Pg. 60 level 1)

• Now write sentences for the remaining

stages of the process.

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• Now turn to Pg. 61 in your introduction book.

Answer questions 1-5

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• Varying your Language

• Sometimes it may be appropriate just to use the

same language that you are given in the IELTS

process diagram to describe it, but you should try

to vary it.

• You may be able to use nouns from the diagram as

your verbs.  For example, the noun packaging in

stage seven becomes:

• Finally, the bricks are packed…

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• This is another example of an IELTS task 1

process.

• This is a fairly simple example so it is good if

you are new to processes. In the actual test it

is likely to be a bit more difficult.

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• The important things to remember when you

write about a process are:

• Use the passive

• Use time connectors

• Change the word forms of the

vocabulary given in the process

diagram

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Language of purpose

• We use this type of language to say why

something happens.

This is useful whenever some extra information

would help someone to understand the

process. It also shows your level of

understanding of the diagram you are writing

about.

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Language of purpose

Three simple phrases the say the purpose of the

stage:

1. to

2. in order to

3. so as to

We do not use because as the above phrases are

far more formal.

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Language of purpose

In the exam you would not want to write about

the purpose of every stage in this way as it

would become repetitive.

Only explain the stages that you think are

important – or maybe the ones that you are

most confident about!

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Language of purpose

Turn to Pg. 63 in your level 1 books and write

sentences about the purpose of the following

stages

(Refer to the diagram on Pg. 60 in your

introduction book.)

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• IELTS Process - Chocolate Production

(Diagram 2)

• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

• The illustrations show how chocolate is

produced.

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Summarize the information by

selecting and reporting the main

features and make comparisons where

relevant.

Write at least 150 words.