JACKED UP THESIS STATEMENTS
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JACKED UP THESIS STATEMENTS
AND HOW WE WILL FIX THEM
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I’VE GOT 5 PROBLEMS, AND THEY’RE ALL THESIS’
Lack of a claim Restatement of fact Using personal conviction Too broad Breaks one of the rules
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“Don’t Claim Me, Bro!” Too often, no claim
is made.
“I’m going to write about my weekend and how fun fun fun fun it was”
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Face The Facts Thesis statements should expand upon
common facts.
“Abercrombie & Fitch’s marketing targets teenagers”
- Well duh
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YOU WON’T LIKE ME WHEN I’M ANGRY! Personal conviction
(or hardcore feelings) has no place In a thesis.
- The ACT shouldn’t be allowed because I freakin’ hate it, man.
Angry Cat has trouble keeping personal emotion out of his thesis statements.
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To Infinity, And Beyond! Thesis statements can also be too broad.
“The risk of drinking water outweigh the benefits.”
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How dare you question me!
Do not break our rules for thesis statements.
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“Advertising tries to get people to buy things”
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“The Twilight book series is fun to read.”
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“On this Power Point I’m going to show you how to improve your thesis statements.”
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Isn’t G.T.L. the way to live?