How to Write an Effective Comment Letter

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National Tribal Forum on Air Quality Fountain Hills, AZ May 1, 2013

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How to Write an Effective Comment Letter. National Tribal Forum on Air Quality Fountain Hills, AZ May 1, 2013. Presentation Roadmap. Pre-Comment Letter Development Preparing the Comment Letter Post-Comment Letter Period. Pre-Comment Letter Development Establish your Tribal Identity. - PowerPoint PPT Presentation

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National Tribal Forum on Air Quality Fountain Hills, AZ

May 1, 2013

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Pre-Comment Letter DevelopmentPreparing the Comment LetterPost-Comment Letter Period

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ValuesDemographyEconomyGeographyLegal RightsWhat Else Makes You Unique?

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Reservation MapMap of Off-Reservation ActivitiesAir-Related InformationOther Information

DemographyEnvironmental HealthEconomic

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Semiannual Regulatory AgendaEPA/NTAA Tribal Air Policy Calls Pre-Publication of Regulatory ActionComment deadlines

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Research Table of ContentsPreambleSearch on “comment”Statutory and Executive Orders

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Write persuasivelyCriticize constructivelyGive praiseBe clear and concisePropose alternatives/recommendations Remind EPA what’s at stake

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Identify your TribeRoadmap of main discussion pointsCommunicate your Tribal IdentityIntersperse discussion points with Tribal IdentityOffer alternatives/recommendationsClosing

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Technical comments

Frequent comments

Things to Avoid

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Sharing with Others

EPA response

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