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Writing theConclusion Paragraph

Reviewing the thesis.Summarizing the topic points.

Making the structure complete.

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Some general rules… The conclusion should be the same

length and cover the same material as the introduction.

You should never simply “copy” or too closely rephrase the introduction,

You should, however, go back through all of your major points.

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(continued) Think of the introduction and the

conclusion as two halves of the same whole.

When done properly, the introduction and the conclusion “bookend” the writer’s thinking in the essay.

You never, never, never, never introduce new material in the conclusion!

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Step one: Review the thesis. In the introduction, the thesis was

the last sentence. Go back and review that thought. Ask yourself this question: Have

you done all that was necessary to show with quotes and to explain your own thinking in responding to the essay prompt?

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Here is a thesis:

Although Venice and Belmont appear insignificant as just backdrops to the action, these two places represent conflicting male and female forces in the play.

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Step two: Review your topic sentences. If properly done, each topic

sentence is a major sub-point of your thesis.

Look carefully at these sentences just after reviewing your thesis.

How do these major ideas support your thesis?

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Although Venice and Belmont appear insignificant as just backdrops to the action, these two places represent conflicting male and female forces in the play.

This thesis may have then been followed by three

topic sentences that looked like the following:

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The city of Venice is a masculine location and is a place of business, of hatred, and threat.

Belmont, on the other hand, is a feminine setting, characterized by music and poetry.

The two different settings reflect and reinforce Shakespeare’s two contrasting plot lines.

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Remember… A conclusion should return to the

main idea, your thesis. It should also review quickly and

without bringing in new material, your major points.

It should clearly bring the structure of your essay to a stylish conclusion.

The “Merchant of Venice” is a complex play. It’s locations, like its characters and plot lines, though intertwined, are different. Portia’s Belmont is a softer, gentler place, a place of love and music. It is a haven. Venice is colored with the hatred between Antonio and Shylock, a hatred that sets all of the male characters in motion around the possibility of Antonio’s death. Shakespeare uses these two forces, these two different settings, to subtly support the action in the two plots. In the end, Venice nearly kills Antonio and ultimately destroys Shylock while Belmont is crowned with the marriage of three couples. The settings are as significant in this play as are the characters.

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Summary The conclusion matches the

introduction in size and content. The conclusion revisits, briefly and

without merely repeating, the thesis. The conclusion will, with style and

confidence, review the major points of evidence indicated by the topic sentences of the body paragraphs.