AS Pre-production Tasks Feedback

Student Name: Hollie Morriss

Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on blog

1. Similar Products – film beginning analysis some2. Genre Analysis Yes3. Target Audience Yes4. Script Yes5. Drafts Yes6. Storyboard Yes7. Shotlist Yes8. Layouts – floor plan No Yes9. Locations Some Yes10.Costumes Yes11.Props Yes12.Actors Some Yes13.Equipment Yes14.Production schedule Yes

Teachers comments

1. Excellent analysis of Along Came a Spider and Gone Baby Gone. Please add 2 more film beginnings. Back to the Future and Gone Girl analysis now added to an excellent standard, great attention to detail in showing how each opening sets up the film, well done.

2. Excellent prezi on your genre, well done.3. Well researched target audience. Good use of avatars to visualise your

stereotypical audience member.4. Well written script that follows conventions well. Please take your

address off of the front page and replace with the school address. Now changed.

5. Good evidence of drafting of ideas and script. Excellent inclusion of a risk assessment. Title mind maps, title final choice and music choices now also added

6. Excellent well thought through storyboards, well done.7. Extremely detailed shot list, well done.8. No work uploaded Excellent floor plans of key locations, good use of a

key.9. Choice of locations identified well, please upload pictures. Excellent

pictures of locations explained well.10.Costume choices identified well, you could add images to show

examples. Images and further detail now added.11.Prop choices have been explained extremely thoroughly, well done.

Images and further information now added.12.Choice of actors identified well, please upload pictures. Images and

additional information now added.13.Equipment choices identified well. Images now added.

14.A very detailed production schedule, well done.

Overall this is very proficient with some excellent work Hollie and could be into level 4. However you are missing some elements and until then is a level 2. Please use the notes in red above to improve your work.All work has now been completed/improved to an excellent standard. Excellent additions of addition items such as music choices and risk assessments – level 4 well done.

Mark out of 20: 11Teacher name: A Jones Date: 22/12/14

Student action plan for improvement

Added 2 more film beginnings Changed the address to school address Added floor plans Uploaded images for locations, actors, props and costumes. Added my initial ideas mind map Added the planning/mind map of my film title

Final mark out of 20: 18 Date:16/03/15