Great Ideas 2010 Presentation Sheri Jacobs

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Making Your Voice Heard: How to Write Marke5ng Copy that Sells Presented by Sheri Jacobs, CAE President + Chief Strategist Avenue M Group, LLC ASAE & The Center Great Ideas Conference 2010 March 8, 2010

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Making  Your  Voice  Heard:  How  to  Write  Marke5ng  Copy  that  Sells    

Presented  by  Sheri  Jacobs,  CAE  

President  +  Chief  Strategist  Avenue  M  Group,  LLC  

ASAE  &  The  Center  Great  Ideas  Conference  2010  

March  8,  2010  

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Name  something  you’ve  recently  bought  that  you  

really  love.  

Why do you love it?

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I  love  my  camera!  

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What  do  I  love  about  my  camera?  

• Fits  in  my  pocket.    

• I  can  take  great  pictures  from  anywhere.  

• It  is  so  easy  to  use;  I  actually  appear  in  pictures  from  family  vacaPons.  

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Lumix Panasonic with mega OIS image stabilizer.

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Another  approach…Nikon  D40  

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Nikon:  Real  people,  real  words.  •  Benefit:  Simple  to  use.  

•  Proof:  Large  sample  audience  (200  residents).  

•  Technology:  Nikon  used  a  microsite  called  Picturetown.  

•  People:  Seven  stories  of  people’s  lives  and  experiences  with  examples.  

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Outcome/Results  •  Nikon  became  the  brand  most  likely  to  purchase.  

•  Changed  percepPon  from  'for  professionals  only'  to  'easy  to  use'  cameras  'for  everyone.’  

• Web  site  engaged  visitors  with  9.5  million  pictures  viewed.  

•  Increased  market  share  by  30%.  

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They read what interests them and sometimes

that happens to be an ad.

People don’t read ads.

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It’s  easy  to  market  when  this  is  your  product.  

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That’s  great.    But  I’m  selling  membership,  conferences  or  advocacy!  

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Your  challenges…  

• Being  heard.  Gefng  my  message  read.  

• Numerous  audiences  –  creaPng  a  segmentaPon  strategy  

• Reaching  new  audience  segments  • What  else?  

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What  do  you  hope  to  learn  

today?  

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MarkePng  is  about  3  things…  

1.  Unique  value  to  the  audience.  

2.  IdenPfying  the  most  trusted  sources/channels.  

3.  The  right  words  to  connect  with  customers.  

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• Who  you  are  selling  to.  

• What  you  are  selling.  

•  Your  compePPon.  

•  The  best  channels  to  reach  your  customers.  

• What  moPvates  your  customers.  

To sell anything you must know everything you can about…

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It  all  starts  with  understanding  your  

prospects  and  what  you  are  offering.  

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Do  you  know?  •  How  prospects  find  you?  

•  Why  do  they  join,  register  or  purchase?  

•  What  other  organizaPons  they  belong  to?  

•  What  they  need  based  on  their  size,  locaPon,  business  or  other  factors?  

•  What  is  keeping  them  up  at  night?  

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Don’t  know…ask!  

www.wordle.net  

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4  out  of  5  Online  Adults  Now  Par5cipate  in  a  Social  Network  

Source: 2009 Razorfish Brand Experience Report

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How  omen  do  you  parPcipate  in  the  following  acPviPes?  

More than once a month

Less than once a month

Not at all

I visit social networking sites (Facebook or LinkedIn)

I update my pro!le on social networking sites

I read customer reviews on Amazon

I post reviews on Amazon

I read blogs

I post comments on blogs

I use Twitter

I follow others on Twitter

I use a wiki to research a topic

I watch videos on YouTube

I visit the Association Web site

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How  much  do  you  trust  informaPon  from  the  following  sources?  

1 = Low Trust 2 = Some Trust 3 = High Trust

Information posted on a listserv

Email from a friend

Email from an association

Online article from the association’s publication

Online advertisement, banner

Information on a blog

Information found on Wiki

Reviews posted by someone you know

Reviews posted by an unknown source

Information on Facebook

Information on an Association Web site

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Very  AcPve,  Low  Trust  

Not  AcPve,  Low  Trust  

Very  AcPve,  High  Trust  

Not  AcPve,  High  Trust  

High  Response  Rates,  Increase  ROI  

•   AssociaPon  Web  site  •   Online  forums  •   Email  from  a  friend  •   Wiki  

•   Blogs  •   Banner  Ads  

•   Twioer   •   Program/Product  Reviews  

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How  well  do  you  know  what  you  are  trying  to  sell?  

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Asset  Audit,  Benefit  Analysis  +  MarkePng  Brief    

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How  well  do  you  know  your  

compePPon?  

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How  do  you  compare?  What  do  prospects  see  when  they  look  at  other  organizaPons?  

• MarkePng  and  promoPons  

•  Product  line  •  Brand  strength  and  recogniPon  •  Strengths  and  weaknesses  (resources,  staff  size)  

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20  Ways  to  Improve  Response  

Rates  

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Know  the  triggers  

95%  of  the  reasons  a  prospect  buys  involve  a  subconscious  decision!  

Source:  Triggers  by  Joe  Sugarman  

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1.  Proof  of  Value  

Should  I  spend  $1000  for  a  laptop?  

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Price:  $3,848.00        Ouch!  

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Price:  $989.00        Yes!  

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Proof  of  Value  All  the  features  I  need  in  

a  laptop.    

$3,848+  vs.  $989  

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1.  Proof  of  value  

Show  two  pricing  opPons,  one  being  considerably  more  expensive.    • Premium  membership  and  regular  membership  

• Your  organizaPon  vs.  compePtor  • Regular  fee  vs.  special  offer  fee  

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2.  Tone  

What  is  the  nature  of  what  you  are  selling?  Is  it  Serious?  Fun?  Luxurious?  Inexpensive?    •     Free,  freebies  •     Exclusive,  InvitaPon  only  •     PresPgious  •     Serious    

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3.  EmoPon  

What  emoPonal  needs  will  your  product  solve?  •  Staying  afloat  during  the  recession  

•  SorPng  through  an  avalanche  of  informaPon  

•  Budget  constraints  –  no  money  to  travel  and  aoend  conferences  

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4.  Address  objecPons  

If  cost  is  an  issue,  talk  about  it.    •  Membership  is  less  than  $2/day  •  Offer  freebies  to  offset  the  cost  to  aoend  a  

meePng  

If  lack  of  Pme  is  a  concern…  •  Tell  how  aoendees  can  stay  connected  at  the  

conference  

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MarkePngProfs  Conference  What  you  get  with  the  cost  of  registraPon:  1.  Free  copy  of  B2B  Marke)ng  in  2009:  Trends  in  

Strategies  and  Spending    2.  A  free  Premium  Plus  membership  for  Basic  and  

Non-­‐members.    3.  Free  one-­‐to-­‐one  expert  advice  4.  Free  ongoing  private  (exclusive)  networking  with  

fellow  aoendees  on  Facebook,  LinkedIn  and  Twioer.  

5.  Free  meals  throughout  the  enPre  conference    

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5.  Involvement  &  Ownership  

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A  good  involvement  device  in  direct  response  adverPsing  has  doubled  and  even  tripled  response  rates.  

“Write  down  3  issues  you  want  to  address  when  you  come  back  from  the  the  Great  Ideas  Conference.  

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6.  Storytelling  

A  good  story  should  capture  a  person’s  aoenPon,  relate  the  product  or  service  to  the  sales  

message,  and  help  you  bond  with  the  prospect.  

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Actual  Copy  

WSAE  holds  eight  1/2  day  educaPonal  programs  each  year  presenPng  some  of  the  best  naPonal  and  state  speakers  

discussing  cufng  edge  soluPons  to  the  challenges  faced  by  associaPon  

execuPves.    

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Another  way  to  say  it:  

WSAE  offers  educaPonal  programs  “that  are  worth  gefng  up  at  5:00  am  and  driving  halfway  across  the  state  to  aoend.”  

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7.  Authority  and  Credibility  

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8.  Logic  In  today’s  economy,  people  need  to  jusPfy  the  purchase  –  membership,  aoendance,  adverPsing,  sponsorships.  

Remember  two  main  points  about  logic  as  a  trigger:    (1) You  buy  on  emoPon  and  jusPfy  the  purchase  

with  logic  (2) View  logic  as  the  answer  to  the  unspoken  

objecPon,  “Why  should  I  buy  this  thing?”  

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EmoPon:  BMW.  The  UlPmate  Driving  Machine!  

Logic:  UlPmate  efficiency.  Well  equipped.  No-­‐cost  maintenance.  No-­‐cost  BMW  Assist  Safety  Plan.    

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9.  SaPsfacPon  Guarantee  UncondiPonal,  no-­‐hassle,  money  back  guarantee  

Membership:  We  will  refund  your  money  if  you  are  not  saPsfied  -­‐  up  unPl  the  very  last  day  of  your  membership  

MeePngs:  We  will  refund  your  money  and  let  you  keep  the  course  materials  if  you  are  not  completely  saPsfied.  

What  type  of  guarantee  could  you  offer?  

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10.  Sense  of  Urgency  

•  Introductory  price/offer  

•  Limited  quanPty  –  only  the  first  20  people  who  register  will  receive  a  free  white  paper  

•  Pricing  based  on  number  of  seats  sold  

•  First  10  seats  sell  for  $49  

•  Second  10  sell  seats  for  $99  

•  Third  10  seats  sell  for  $149  

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11.  Exclusivity  

•  Create  a  sense  of  exclusivity  by  sefng  limitaPons  on  who  can  buy,  join  or  register.  

•  Offer  other  exclusive    products  to  prospects  have  parPcipated,  joined  or  aoended  a  session.  

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12.  KISS  –  Keep  it  Stupid  and  Simple  

Make  it  so  easy  to  register,  join  or  buy  that  all  the  customer  needs  to  do  is  click  or  sign  on  the  dooed  line.  

Unless  you  are  going  for  exclusivity!  

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13.  Be  Specific  

“Top  rated  educaPonal  program”    

or  

“95%  of  past  aoendees  of  the  Great  Ideas  Conference  rate  this  meePng  as  one  of  the  most  important  moves  in  advancing  their  

career.”  

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14.  Create  a  Must-­‐Read  Headline  

The  enPre  purpose  of  the  headline/subject  line  is  to  get  the  

prospect  to  read  the  next  line.  

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To  build  a  fan  base,  pick  a  fight  

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15.  Use  the  words  “How  to”  

Old  Headlines  (Actual  Ptles)  •  CopywriPng  101  •  TacPcs  for  Avoiding  RehospitalizaPons  •  ExcepPonal  Customer  Service  Builds  Business  

Revised  Headlines  •  How  to  Write  MarkePng  Copy  That  Sells  •  How  to  Avoid  Losing  PaPents  to  Other  Hospitals  •  How  to  Grow  Your  Business  and  Keep  Clients  happy  Amer  the  Sale  

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16.  Use  a  number  in  your  copy  

The  numbers  5  and  0  feel  manufactured.  When  you  use  a  number  such  as  6,  7  or  9  it  feels  more  real.  

11  Steps  to  a  Successful  Virtual  Conference  or  

10  Steps  to  a  Successful  Virtual  Conference  

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17.  Cut  your  copy  in  half!  

Use  short  simple  sentences.  Avoid  complex  jargon.  

Provided  that  -­‐  -­‐  If  In  order  to  -­‐  -­‐  To  The  majority  of  -­‐  -­‐  Most  Accordingly  -­‐  -­‐  So  Facilitate  -­‐  -­‐  Help  Frequently  -­‐  -­‐  Omen  Commence  -­‐  -­‐  Start  Nonetheless  -­‐  -­‐  But    

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18.  Use  Curiosity  to  Get  Them  Interested  Program:  Physicians  and  health  care  reform  

50%  of  Physicians  Report  Health  Care  Reform  Worsened  CondiPons  for  their  PracPce  

In  this  session,  you  will  understand  the  key  implicaPons  of  health  reform  legislaPon  impacPng  OEM  physicians.  The  session  will  cover  health  and  producPvity  strategies,  how  to  market  your  services,  and  the  key  condiPons  that  are  driving  up  cost.  

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19.  Be  AuthenPc.  

Show  your  personality.  

Don’t  filter  their  comments.  Aoribute  comments  to  their  owners.  

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20.  Avoid  Clichés  

Clichés  are  trite  and  overused  expressions.  They  will  make  your  markePng  invisible!  

wordle.net  

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MarkePng  with    Direct  Mail.  

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6  Ways  to  Get  People  to  Act  Now  

1)  End  your  price  with  a  7  or  a  9.  

There  is  a  psychological  price  point  –  a  dues  amount  that  ends  with  a  dollar  amount  of  a  “7”  or  “9.”  For  example,  an  acquisiPon  price  of  $139  will  typically  generate  more  revenue  and  members  than  a  price  of  $150.    

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2)      Leave  out  the  brochure!  

• Change  the  process  from  a  “sales  effort”  to  a  personal  communicaPon  

• Test  with  a  brochure  and  without  

6  Ways  to  Get  People  to  Act  Now  

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3)    End  your  copy  with  a  quesPon  people  will  always  say  yes  to.  

•   Do  you  need  to  stay  up-­‐to-­‐date  on  xyz?  •   Are  you  looking  for  ways  to  cut  costs  yet  

sPll  deliver  great  service?  

6  Ways  to  Get  People  to  Act  Now  

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4)  Design  the  brochure  so  that  it  can  easily  be  skimmed.  Use  graphics  instead  of  words.  

When asked how young professionals (YP) first learned about their association, 76% of survey respondents selected colleagues and 56% selected employers. A significant percentage of young professionals also become aware of the association through the organization’s website (70%) and through their academic environment (66%).

How  do  young  professionals  first  learn  about  your  associa5on?  

Colleague  76%  

Website  70%  

6  Ways  to  Get  People  to  Act  Now  

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5)  Offer  installments  to  lower  the  perceived  price.  

If  your  members  are  resistant  to  paying  $599  to  aoend  your  educaPonal  conference,  try  offering  it  for  three  installments  of  $199    

6  Ways  to  Get  People  to  Act  Now  

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6)  Keep  your  envelope  blank  

An  envelope  with  no  wriPng  has  to  be  opened  to  see  what’s  inside.    

6  Ways  to  Get  People  to  Act  Now  

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MarkePng  in  the  age  of  Web  2.0.  

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6  Ways  to  Ensure  They  Open  Your  Email  

1)  Use  the  “from”  line  to  brand  your  email.  

2)  Send  it  on  a  Tuesday  or  Thursday.    3)  Focus  on  what  is  seen  in  the  preview  pane.  

4)  Make  sure  your  email  is  readable  when  the  pictures  aren’t  downloaded.  

5)  Use  bullets  and  keep  your  copy  short.  No  long  paragraphs.  

6)  Test  one  variable  at  a  Pme  such  as  day,  offer,  copy.  

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One  final  thought…  

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If we mixed up your

marketing collateral

with another

association would

anyone notice?

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Q  &  A  Do  you  sPll  have  quesPons?    Contact  me.  

Sheri  Jacobs,  CAE,  President  +  Chief  Strategist  Avenue  M  Group,  LLC  

[email protected]  T.    847.849.3396