First Draft Feedback

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“Didn’t really get it”

Transcript of First Draft Feedback

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“Didn’t really get it”

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“Quite boring”

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“Too long”

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“Get what you are trying to do but it becomes a bit repetitive and boring”

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“Very good editing”

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“Good variety of shots”

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“Like the concept and how different it is to the others”

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“Close-ups and stop-motion was really good”