Final Edit 1st Draft

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FINAL EDIT By Tesfah Watkins-Scott & Marcus Thomas

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FINAL EDITBy Tesfah Watkins-Scott & Marcus Thomas

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MUM’S HOUSE SCENE 1) Mid shot – Mother calling red riding hood 2) Medium close up – Red riding hood responds 3) Medium long shot/ Long shot – Mother giving red riding hood a

basket of patties 4) High Angle shot/ Close Up – Taking a patty (only her hand is shown

and patty being grabbed). 5) Close up – Of red riding about to eat the patty 6) Long shot– mum puts her hand on her hips and puts on her facial a

expression (Di Rass), 7) Side angle shot – red riding hood frowns and puts patty back in

basket 8) Panning shot – of red riding hood collecting basket and walks to the

door then looks to wave 9) Extreme wide shot – mum stands at the door and waves at red

riding hood and red riding hood would be a slight distance away from the door but she still turns back and waves and then continues to walk into the woods.

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WOODS SCENE 1. Camera still – red riding hood skips a few yards towards the camera and

when she gets close up to the camera she walks out of the scene (camera is still going to be still)

2. Extreme Long shot - red riding hood skipping (just to set the scene) 3. Medium Close up - red riding hood thinks about eating a patty, and then eats

one 4. Long shot - wolf steps on poo whilst creeping in bushes 5. Point of view shot- wolf is scene lurking in the bush, senses the smell of the

patties being eaten 6. High-angle shot - of red riding hood leaving packet trails of patty, Pans Down 7. Extreme close up - of wolf twitching nose 8. wolf buckles over his legs - pan/tilts down 9. Long shot, camera follows the wolf moving backwards whilst the wolf is

walking forwards - of wolf following trails 10. Medium close up - of wolf's hand grabbing red riding hood's basket 11. Long shot - wolf and red riding hood playing tug-a-war with the patties 12. Mid shot - of red riding hood pulling the basket 13. Mid shot - of wolf pulling the basket

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GRANDMA'S HOUSE SCENE/ WOODS SCENE Close up - of one eye of grandma's opening up from her sleep (senses trouble) Long Shot - of both red riding hood and the wolf falling to the ground on their

backside, the basket of patties fall on the ground Long shot - grandma gets up of her seat and runs outside of the door, two seconds

later she runs back to get her walking stick and starts limping like and old lady outside of the door again camera tracks grandma throughout her antics

POV shot - grandma running at full pace and sees the wolf and red riding hood battling

Mid shot - of red riding hood getting out the way Mid shot - of the wolf making himself look scary Mid shot - grandma drops walking stick making herself look scary Long shot - of grandma and wolf fighting High angle shot - of red riding hood collecting patties and putting it back into the

basket Extreme long shot - of wolf and grandma fighting Mid shot - of grandma's leg kicking wolf's head to sideways and spit comes out of

the wolf's mouth Mid shot - of wolf falling to the ground Camera pans up - grandma takes red riding hood's hand from the floor goes to

mid shot Long shot - grandma runs (walking stick in hand) with riding hood (basket in hand) High angle shot - wolf tries to get up but lays down again dead? Wide shot - grandma and riding hood runs to the camera Long shot - Door opened and grandma and red riding hood runs in and shuts the

door out of breath Wide shot - of riding hood and grandma eat patties with a nice drink