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Nicole Sivyer
ENC1102
Joseph Cottle
28 March 2013
Break the Habit- Obesity Epidemic
The 2010 “Break the Habit” commercial made a bold statement to target
childhood obesity around the world. The ad is purposely controversial in order to bring
attention to parents who feed their children unhealthy food, even with knowledge of the
harmful effects. The ad centers on a typical mother bringing home a paper bag while her
average-sized son colors in a crayon book. From the bag, the mom pulls out drug
paraphernalia while she prepares to inject her son with an unknown substance in a needle.
The drugs then morph into a hamburger while the mother and her son sit down for dinner.
The ad is comparing fast food to drugs in the sense that they are both known to have
harmful effects but people use them anyways. This ad is an obvious exaggeration of the
effects of bad foods but is successful in imprinting a sense of fear into the viewers. Its
objective is to get parents to stop eating and feeding their children junk foods that are
harmful and will cause obesity.
The commercial stands out to viewers right away due to its bold statement. Few
commercials have had the nerve to display drugs being used because of the younger
audience that could have been exposed to it along with the controversy that could follow
it. In recent years, drugs themselves have been banned from being advertised in a
promoting manner on television. However, the obesity agency found a way to turn such a
powerful and self-destructive habit into motivation for people. At the end of that ad, the
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question “You wouldn’t inject your children with junk, so why are you feeding it to
them?” is displayed, along with “Childhood Obesity. Break the Habit” (Break the Habit).
Viewers of the ad will most likely think twice the next time they roll through a fast food
joint to grab a hamburger. The memory of sticking a needle into a child to inject them
with drugs has probably generated hesitation for a vast number of people.
Obesity has become a growing epidemic around the world. In America, “a third of
adults are overweight. Another third are obese. Combined, 68.8% of U.S. adults are
either overweight or obese” (Chou & Kane). Those are just the statistics for adults; for
kids, “one-third of American children are overweight or obese” (Glenn). Children “who
eat more “empty calories” are more likely to be obese than other children. This can be
caused by changes in the food market, in the built environment, in schools, and in the role
of parents” (Anderson & Butcher). However, one of the biggest contributors to obesity is
the fast-food industry. For college students like me, fast food is the easiest and cheapest
food to buy. Students are on budgets and rely on fast food restaurants to live. The
industry is becoming more popular every day, and “during the last 35 years, sales in the
U.S. fast-food industry have grown by almost 1000%” (Glenn). Their business is brought
in not only because of their cheap prices but also because of the large amounts of money
that they put into advertising, which is close to $5 billion per year. To put the $5 billion
“in perspective, consider the Center for Nutrition Policy and Promotion, the USDA’s sub-
agency that works to improve the health of Americans by promoting dietary guidance
that links scientific research to the nutrition needs of consumers. Its annual budget? $6.5
million” (Philpott). So basically, for every $100 the fast food companies spend on
advertising their unhealthy foods that will make people overweight, the nutrition
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company spends a penny to promote healthy ways of life. The obesity that is caused by
over consumption of fast food “is a contributing factor in 5 of the top 10 contributing
factors of death: heart disease, cancer, stroke, diabetes, and kidney disease” (Chou &
Kane). The cute mascots, creative jingles, and cheap prices that are advertised
everywhere from on television to billboards are what drive us to want these types of
foods so badly. If healthy food industries put more money and creativity into their
advertising like fast food businesses do, people might want to eat healthier foods more
often.
To set the tone for the “Break the Habit” ad, it uses strong and recognizable
sounds. This helps to set the chilling and unnerving mood. The commercial starts out
with nothing but the sound of footsteps and soft background violin music. The floors
creek as the mother walks up and slides her chair out. The eerie violin music continues
throughout the commercial and slowly gets louder. The only other noises are the
scratching of the crayon that the boy is using along with the peeling open of the paper
bag, the crumbling of the tinfoil, and the clicking of the lighter. Not one word is spoken
even when the mother/son scene ends and the “Childhood Obesity” slogan pops up. This
helps the viewers to be able to make their own opinions about the ad without it directly
telling them the thoughts of someone else. The entire scene is made suspenseful and dull
through the use of the few but recognizable sounds, the intensifying violin music, and the
lack of dialogue.
Not only does the use of sounds help add to the meaning of the commercial, but
the use of visuals makes the ad stronger as well. Everything in the commercial is dull or
dark in coloring, with hardly anything that is bright or cheerful to look at. To start off, the
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mother who walks into the house has on dark boots, dark hair, and is wearing a dull blue
sweater. The house is dim and shadowy with not one single bright piece of furniture or
decoration in the room. The bag itself that the mother carries is brown and looks as if it
holds something illegal and mysterious inside. The son is basically stabbing and
mutilating his drawing with red and black colors, and is paying no attention to coloring in
the lines. When it comes to the ad’s choice of colors, “black is the color of the night and
of evil…it can also mean sorrow or mourning in the tradition of wearing black to
funerals. Red is the color of blood and fire” (Anime). Neither color is associated with a
positive connotation. This whole layout helps to foster the dreary mood.
The obesity epidemic around the world, especially in America, is spiraling out of
control. Health issues are rising, physical attractiveness is decreasing, and the drive to do
anything about it is nearly absent for most overweight families and individuals. More
commercials like this one need to be present to scare people off from eating or feeding
their kids whatever they want. This commercial very effectively uses many techniques
such as its dull visuals, haunting sounds, and crude tone in order to open viewers’ eyes to
what they are really doing. I believe in a healthy lifestyle and was raised not to eat fast
food such as McDonalds or Burger King, and to also stay active by working out and
playing sports. It amazes me how different some families are than mine but I have
learned from various documentaries, commercials, and articles how harmful fast food is
for you. Parents need to start becoming more aware of how much danger they are putting
their kids in for their futures. One of the best ways to do this would be to stop putting
billions of dollars into junk food advertising, and instead putting more money into
commercials that promote healthy eating and the physical, emotional, and medical
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benefits that come with it. Junk food is okay every once in a while and fast food
restaurants legally have a right to advertise; however, they should focus their
advertisements so that people will eat their unhealthy food on occasion, not regularly. A
large number of adults around the world are already obese with health problems and we
need to stop our children from becoming that way.
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Works Cited
Anderson, Patricia M., and Kristin F. Butcher. "Project MUSE - Childhood Obesity: Trends and
Potential Causes." Project MUSE - Childhood Obesity: Trends and Potential Causes.
N.p., 2006. Web. 12 Apr. 2013.
Anime, Mark. "Symbolism: Colors." Symbolism: Colors. N.p., 2000. Web. 28 Mar. 2013.
"'Break the Habit' - Childhood Obesity Ad Australia." YouTube. YouTube, 16 Apr. 2011. Web.
12 Apr. 2013.
Chou, Joey, and Jason Kane. "Obesity in America: By the Numbers." PBS. PBS, 08 May 2012.
Web. 01 Apr. 2013.
Glenn, Brittany. "As Americans' Dependence on Fast Food Increases, the Obesity Epidemic
Worsens." Body By Vi Challenge from ViSalus Sciences As Americans Dependence on
Fast Food Increases the Obesity Epidemic Worsens Comments. N.p., n.d. Web. 01 Apr.
2013.
Philpott, Tom. "Fast-food Industry’s $4.2 Billion Marketing Blitz." Grist. N.p., 10 Nov. 2010.
Web. 12 Apr. 2013