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Name _________________Homebase ________________City ____________________

Relocation GuideSelf and Formative Assessment

Population and Resources

Student:

If I were turning this in right now, I would probably earn _______. I think this because:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

My favorite part about my article is:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I would like to do the following before I make this a part of my Relocation Guide:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Teacher: If you were turning this in right now, you would probably earn _______. This score WILLappear in power school but WILL NOT count towards your grade. Please work to improve thecontent of the following before it becomes a part of your Relocation Guide:

ContextWhen, why and by whom was your city was founded? Where it is located(water)?

Relocation Guide

(PerformanceAssessment)

Exemplary(100%)

Proficient(88%)

Developing(76%)

Emerging(64%)

M.SS3.2 describeand compare thehumancharacteristics of aplace

M.SS3.4 explain and

give examples of thevoluntary andinvoluntarymovement of people

Why did/do peoplemove to your city?Who lives in your citytoday?

Thorough and accurateexplanation of thepopulation demographicsin your city today. Youclearly articulate andfully detail why peoplewould choose to live inyour city, both in thepast and the present.

You provide anaccurateexplanation of thepopulationdemographics inyour city today andaccurately explainwhy people havechosen to live

there.

You provide someexplanation of thepopulationdemographics inyour city today andexplain why peoplehave chosen to livethere, but someinformation is

unclear orincomplete.

You provide verylimitedinformation abouthe people wholive in your city owhy they havechosen to livethere. We are lefwith many

questions.

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Cause--Why would people want to move to your city today? What resources or

opportunities does your city have for its people?Effect--Who lives in your city today? Nationalities? Religions? Other population data?

In English

Student:If I were turning this in right now, I would probably earn _______. I think this because:

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Relocation Guide

(PerformanceAssessment)

Exemplary(100%)

Proficient(88%)

Developing(76%)

Emerging(64%)

E4.1 develop main ideasand supporting details ona topic, story, or idea in aparagraph format

How do I develop andstructure my writing?

You have done anexcellent jobthroughout your guideof stating main ideasand supporting thosemain ideas withsupporting details.

Your hamburgerparagraph format isstrong.

Your main ideasare developedand have strongdetails to supportthem. Thehamburgerparagraphformat is evidentin your writing.

Your main ideacould be furtherdeveloped.Some details donot support themain ideas.Pieces of yourhamburger maybe missing!

Main ideas areunclear anddetails shouldbe stronger.

Your hamburgehas fallen apart

E3.2 write sentences thatuse stylistic devices

appropriate to the genreand purpose of the piece

E 4.2 begin to create avoice as a writer thatidentifies a piece ofwriting as theirs

Your skillful use ofstylistic devices

creates an accuratepicture of what yourcity is really like.Impressive!

You have masterfullyshown how you feelabout your city. Yourpersonality shinesthrough your writingand you areexceptionallypersuasive.

You use somestylistic devices

that add color toyour writing.

Your writing isquite persuasiveand individualityis shown.

You took the riskto try to add

stylistic devicesbut some couldbe stronger.

You attempt tobe persuasiveand show somepersonality inyour writing, butmore could bedone to showyourindividuality.

You show littleattempt at

using stylisticdevices.

Your opinionabout your cityis unclear, andthere is little inyour writing tomake it standout as yours.

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I think the best part about this piece of writing is:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I would like to do the following before I make this a part of my Relocation Guide:

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Teacher: If you were turning this in right now, you would probably earn _______. This scoreWILL appear in power school but WILL NOT count towards your grade. I wouldsuggest that you work on the following before you make this article a part of yourRelocation Guide: Main ideas

Supporting details

Hamburger structure

Stylistic Devices--vivid words, simile, metaphor

Voice-personality, feelings, individuality