Teacher feedback

WWW:

•Green screen

•Confident at performing

•Well synced

EBI:

•More variety of shot types

•Hands out of shot

•More narrative

WWW:

•Fast editing

•Cuts to the beat

EBI:

•Lighting

•All mid shots

•Too much green screen

•More narrative

Student feedback

EBI:

•Lighting

•Some green screen shots

•One scene is out of sync

•More narrative

WWW:

•Green screen

•Framing

•Good editing

•Effective performance shots

Student feedback

EBI:

•Lighting

•More narrative

WWW:

•Cheesy

•Edited well

•Fits genre

•Green screen

Student feedback

EBI:

•Storyline - narrative

•Green screen

•Shadows

WWW:

•Seemed like a girl band

•Fits genre

•Costume

Student feedback

EBI:

•Less green screen

•More narrative

WWW:

•Fits genre

•Performance shots good

Student feedback

EBI:

•More narrative

WWW:

•Close up of lips

•Green screen

Student feedback

WWW:

•Synced well

•Up tempo

•Cuts with beat

•Green screen

Student feedback

EBI:

•All mid shots

•More narrative

What we can take from this:- We are going to re-film some shots without the green screen as everyone felt that there were too many green screen shots, this will be done either in front of the black or white screen and using close ups and long shots to add variety.

- We are also not going to use the shots on the split screen where our hand are cut off as it does not look right.

- We are also going to re-film some narrative scenes so we have more to add in so it makes sense.