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Extended Writing Task Extended Writing Task B1 Heart disease is the main cause of early death in the UK. It may be caused by high blood pressure or by high amounts of cholesterol in the blood. Explain why some people have high blood pressure or high cholesterol. How might statins reduce the incidence of heart disease in the UK?
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Extended Writing Task
Extended Writing Task B1
Heart disease is the main cause of early death in the UK. It may be caused by high blood pressure or by high amounts of cholesterol in the blood.
Explain why some people have high blood pressure or high cholesterol. How might statins reduce the incidence of heart disease in the UK?
Extended Writing Task
Extended Writing Task B1
Heart disease is the main cause of early death in the UK. It may be caused by high blood pressure or by high amounts of cholesterol in the blood.
Explain why some people have high blood pressure or high cholesterol. How might statins reduce the incidence of heart disease in the UK?
Annotate each part of the question to show
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Extended Writing Task B1Heart disease is the main cause of early death in the UK. It may be caused by high blood pressure or by high amounts of cholesterol in the blood. Explain why some people have high blood pressure or high cholesterol. How might statins reduce the incidence of heart disease in the UK?
Extended Writing Task B1Heart disease is the main cause of early death in the UK. It may be caused by high blood pressure or by high amounts of cholesterol in the blood. Explain why some people have high blood pressure or high cholesterol. How might statins reduce the incidence of heart disease in the UK?
Identify any spelling mistakes in the text.Correct the mistakes
that you find.
Identify any grammatical errors
in the text.Correct any errors
that you find.
What scientific keywords are
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Extended Writing Task B1Heart disease is the main cause of early death in the UK. It may be caused by high blood pressure or by high amounts of cholesterol in the blood. Explain why some people have high blood pressure or high cholesterol. How might statins reduce the incidence of heart disease in the UK?
Extended Writing Task B1Heart disease is the main cause of early death in the UK. It may be caused by high blood pressure or by high amounts of cholesterol in the blood. Explain why some people have high blood pressure or high cholesterol. How might statins reduce the incidence of heart disease in the UK?
Extended Writing Task B1Heart disease is the main cause of early death in the UK. It may be caused by high blood pressure or by high amounts of cholesterol in the blood. Explain why some people have high blood pressure or high cholesterol. How might statins reduce the incidence of heart disease in the UK?
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scientific terminology.
Extended Writing Task B1Heart disease is the main cause of early death in the UK. It may be caused by high blood pressure or by high amounts of cholesterol in the blood. Explain why some people have high blood pressure or high cholesterol. How might statins reduce the incidence of heart disease in the UK?
Extended Writing Task B1Heart disease is the main cause of early death in the UK. It may be caused by high blood pressure or by high amounts of cholesterol in the blood. Explain why some people have high blood pressure or high cholesterol. How might statins reduce the incidence of heart disease in the UK?
People may get high blood pressure because they smoke tobacco or drink lots of alcohol.
Another way is because they eat lots of salt.
Some people have it due to genetics.
If you eat a lot of saturated fat, such as red meat, butter and cream, your liver turns it into cholesterol.
It is taken to cells, in the blood, to make cell membranes stronger.
Statins stop your liver from making cholesterol.
Cholesterol in your blood can cause heart attacks.
Extended Writing Task B1Heart disease is the main cause of early death in the UK. It may be caused by high blood pressure or by high amounts of cholesterol in the blood. Explain why some people have high blood pressure or high cholesterol. How might statins reduce the incidence of heart disease in the UK?
Would you make any improvements
to this answer?If so, what would
they be?
Extended Writing Task B1Heart disease is the main cause of early death in the UK. It may be caused by high blood pressure or by high amounts of cholesterol in the blood. Explain why some people have high blood pressure or high cholesterol. How might statins reduce the incidence of heart disease in the UK?
