Makeup guide

I made questionnaire to find out if my final makeup guide was suitable for an adult audience and whether it helped them put on the makeup.

The feedback I got was they think it is suitable for adult because they said that it used an adult model and pictures that are suitable and interesting, it used step by step to help them to putting makeup on. Furthermore there got good information about the product. They said that my logo is suitable for adult audiences. Some people said they like how I used a wide range of pictures and the mascara colour chart, also my step by step guide. Furthermore they said the fonts is fix to the teenagers because the fonts is bold and standout.

For the improvement, they said it needs more images on page 18 to 19. However my teacher said les images on the pages and put more information.

Based in this and asking other teachers what they thought. I feel it is suitable for the instated purpose and audience.

The problem I had were too much images in my makeup guide. Drawn design next time I would put writing in my makeup guide and make the makeup guide more standout.

The change I made from my drawing design was I made more pages than my drawing design. Also my makeup guide front page is very different to my drawing design.

This made it more suitable for an adult audience because there have different colours of mascara and there also have the step by step to help them to put their mascara on. Moreover there have some images is different style of different images.

Poster

I also made a questionnaire for the people who is teenagers to find out does my final poster is suitable for the teenager audiences and does it made the teenagers want to buy this mascara if they seen the poster.

I gave some questions to the audiences, the feedback that I got was they said make poster is suitable for teenagers because it is funky and the teenager normally used, and it stands out to putting on a lot of mascara to their eye lashes in to bold if they use the mascara. They like the eyes and how they are slanted, also it is really catch your attention. Moreover it is simple and it‘s not overcrowded.

For the improvement, they said I should move the mascara bottle away from the eyes so I can see it more clearly. Some people said let all the eyes visible.

The problem I had for my final poster were the packaging of the mascara was cover the eyes and the fonts is too light. For the drawing design next time I would change my logo.

The is my final poster This is my drawing design