With the main sell line, I realised that the name of my artist was too small and the information on the article was too large. I decided to change this, I enlarged the writing of the artists name so it would stand out, I then left a space and decreased the size of the article information. I think this looks much better as the name of the artist stands out more and you instantly read that and look at the image.

With the puff, I found that the circle was too small and the writing looked too cramped within in. I decided to enlarge the circle and then spread out the text. Furthermore, I made the text ‘WIN’ stand out more by enlarging the text and keeping it separate from the rest. I did this as the splash of colour and size attracts the readers attention.

With the sub headlines/sell lines I realised that the writing was to large with the lines on either side, and some of the text were slightly touching the line. I decided to change this as it could be difficult for some viewers to read and put them off my magazine. I pulled my writing further up the page so that the ‘/ED SHEERAN’ wasn’t covered by the guitar. Furthermore, I widened the space between the two black lines so that the text fit better.