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Entering English 101
• Eng. 085• Ritter’s 1st
Email• Self-evaluation
up until the Day #1
By Kevin Kors
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Week to week memos always pertained to my attitude towards my job
Primary issue: “Unity” & “Run-on” sentences Constant Struggle
Why is there two people on the Hill?
Memos
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Home life goes from crazy to stable Made some changes Memos got better
Unity
“We all we got, We all we need”
-Seahawks
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What are some of the first things that come to mind?
How did I fix it? Writing became clearer
Run-Ons
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Have never worked on weaknesses Meet with a teacher Just sit down and read over the rubric
numerous times
New Approach
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Had an extremely tough time starting the research
Went to Instructor for help Applied memo critique into paper Ended up doing better than expected
Annotated Bibliography
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Both contain messages One offers creative writing and the other
offers information Which was more powerful?
Memos VS. Annotated Bib
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Taking a new sense of confidence with me
Be a strong critique towards my work
Conveying my message in the clearest most concise way
Leaving English 101