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English Language Arts Test Listening/Writing 2009 Scoring Guide Grade 7

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English Language Arts TestListening/Writing

2009 Scoring Guide

Grade 7

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Acknowledgment CTB/McGraw-Hill LLC is indebted to the following for permission to use material in this book:

“Growing Up...and Up” from On the Court with...Shaquille O’Neal by Matthew F. Christopher, copyright © 2003 by Catherine M. Christopher.Used by permission of Little, Brown and Co., Inc.

Developed and published under contract with the New York State Education Department by CTB/McGraw-Hill LLC, a subsidiary of The McGraw-Hill Companies, Inc., 20 Ryan Ranch Road, Monterey, California 93940-5703. Copyright © 2009 by the New York State Education Department. Permission is hereby granted for school administrators and educators to reproduce these materials in the quantities necessary for their school’s use, but not for sale, provided copyright notices are retained as they appear in these publications. This permission does not apply to distribution of these materials, electronically or by other means, other than for school use.

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This response is accurate and complete, and it fulfi lls all the requirements of the task. The student has provided correct text-based details to explain what fi nally convinced Coach Madura that Shaquille could be a star (“eager to learn and worked hard”; “very big in size”).

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Listening Score Point 1

This response includes some correct information. The student has provided a general explanation of what convinced Coach Madura that Shaquille could be a star (“he saw the hard work he put into it”), but the response needs additional text-based support to fully answer the question.

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Listening Score Point 0

This response is inaccurate. The student has provided some information from the passage (“when he developed his leadership abilities”), but the information does not support why Coach Madura thought Shaquille could be a basketball star.

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2009 Practice Set

Grade 7

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