Pre writing: Making a list

Effects of adjusting the law for children over 15

Aggressive attitude

Influenced by the violent movies

There are verbal and physical violence in the movies

Learn the actor’s character

Throw things when get angry

Threatening attitude

Involve in accidents

Drive in high speed

Get angry when meet bad or clumsy drivers

Want to overtake the car

Can’t control the car well and accident happens

Accidents cause severe wound and death

Teenage pregnancy

Curious about sex

Forced by boyfriends

If they don’t use birth control, girls have babies

Affect their own future

Thesis statement:

In fact, adjusting the law for children over 15 will cause them to be

aggressive, rate of them involved in accidents increase and teenage

pregnancy.

References list

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