ENGLISH ASSIGNMENT 01

QUESTION 1 : -

In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes and

effects of this condition? Plan your response, and then write a cause and

effect essay.

Less Leisure Time and Pressure Attacking Young Generation

As the technology development , there is more challenges and requirement that young people need to deal with . This situation will also bring us who lives on this planet has become more difficult to survive . All people have become rivals and seek for every opportunities to ensure their living . To compete their rivals , young generation need to work hard especially on their study as the key to success lies under hard work . So , it is very common that they find themselves having very little leisure time which also lend to tensions . From my personal perspective , there are three main courses which are high competitive among students , tuition classes and high requirement from elder .

High competitive among students in class is a phenomena nowadays . All students have the same objective which is study hard to achieves their goal – excellent academic to success in their future . Long terms of involving in high competitive environment will lend to cruelness and egoism of the person . To achieves their goal , not only focus on study , 25% of students in class will try evil tricks towards their classmates due to personal profit . Meanwhile , 75% of students will be stress for facing the competitive in class . This is because , failure of achieve their goal by gaining good result will lead to prejudice from the excellence students . By avoiding to become a loser , weak students need work hard by spending more time on study that lead in decreasing leisure time which cause pressure to them . One of the ways to overcome this situation is , students can express their feeling to person who can be trusted . Unfortunately , in this competitive surrounding , only 10 out of 100 percent probability to have a trust person and this made the condition worse .

Besides high competitive among students in class , over attending tuition classes will also cause less leisure time and lead to pressure . To catch up the global changing with the rapid progression towards the high technology development . As parents , they will sent their children to extra tuition classes by hoping their children will gain more knowledge so that they will not be suffer in future . Meanwhile , different teachers will have different way of teaching and opinions based on the same topic .From this situation , students may get confuse on the topics which will cause them feel stress . Besides that , due to wealth financial in family , parents

will also sent their children to co- curricular classes such as piano classes , dancing classes and so on . Too much of extra classes for the children will grab all their free time which cause leisure time to them . The children have no free time to relax themselves by doing their favorite things , in this condition , stress begin to attack them .

In addition to that , high requirement from the elder will also cause stress to young people . In school , teachers will expect their students to have excellence result in their exam . To achieve their wish , students need to do a lot of assignment given by the teachers . Self revision add up with addition of assignments really burns a lot of time . Students need to face the pressure of high expectation on exam by the teachers , the worse part is , they did’t really have free time to relax themselves because most of their time are used for assignments . Moreover , every parents wants their kids to do well in school and go on to have successful career . To achieve parent’s wish , sometimes , children are forced to study for hours and hours at home . Some parent will minimize their children ‘ s entertaining time and replace it by studying because according to their opinion , entertainment for children is a waste of time . Honestly to say that , they totally wrong . Entertaining is the best way of releasing stress for the young people . Sadly , their leisure time is extremely limited and the pressure on them is considerable.

In a nutshell , high competitive among students , tuition classes and high requirement from elder really will grab them a lot of time causes them to have little leisure time and pressure will be increasing . From my personal opinions , all individual need to pay more concern on this issue . Young people are the future hope so please treat them as gold but not a robot . Everyone will be tired and need extra time for rest , same as the young people . Please give them some childhood . “ A rest , is to run a longer path “