Drafts Poster

Draft 1

Feedback: From my Target Audience • The image : good because, the hybird genre, fantasy is clearly shown through the smoke, and the

thriller hybrid of the genre is shown with Kate in the background as she is putting her finger on her mouth, as if she has a dark secret

• Makes the diary obvious, and gives a hint to the audience Improvements: • Cannot see some of the billing box because of the boys arm • The Title does not show any thriller element, too bright • Billing box needs to be a different font • Cannot see the strapline • Add some reviews?

Draft 2

Feeback: from my target audience:

• Reviews make the poster look professional

• Like the gradient on the title

Improvements:

• The “inside” part of the title cannot really be seen

• Take one of the reviews out because it’s too busy

• Cannot see the names of the actors

Draft 3

Feeback: from my target audience:

• You can now see the actors names

Improvements:

• Need to move the “inside” title because it’s hard to notice

Draft 4

Feeback: from my target audience:

• Moved the “inside”

Improvements:

• Not sure if the strapline should go in the middle

• The title blends in with the image and it should stand out

• Need a logo

Draft 5

Feeback: from my target audience:

• Added logo

• website

Improvements:

• Move the strapline

• The title font is good but it dosen’t stand out enough

Draft 6

Feeback: from my target audience:

Improvements:

• The title is too small and the font is over powered by everything else around it