1ST Draft, 2nd Draft and 3rd Draft

OF ADVERT 2

1ST Draft

Advert Title

I have placed the advert title on top of the large perfume bottle, because it stands out, as it is also covering the scenery slightly

Layout

I have placed the model slightly to the left, so that the scenery can be seen, but also because I need to leave space for the advert title and the picture of a perfume bottle

Model Pose

I will make her hold the perfume bottle, so that the model seems as if she needs the perfume. Also, I have made the pose quite simple to create a sense of elegance

Original

2nd Draft

• The image is completely different to the 1st Draft, due to the weather. Therefore, I couldn’t go to the park and had to take it in the house. Therefore I have changed the product from perfume to fashion, due to the pose.

• I cropped the picture, because there was a door, as well as there being too much white background, as the model couldn’t stand out

3rd Draft

• I moved the model up, as there was a large gap at the top, which wasn’t appealing to the eye

4th Draft

• Instead of having the advert title on the bottom left, I have moved it to the top of the picture, because of the pose and there is a white gap at the top.

Feeback on Draft 4

• I need to add some eye make-up, as well as using the burn tool to make her eye lashes and eye-brows darker.