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6 Mid shot John taking out the ring out of his pocket John’s Semi formal clothes

7 Close up Him showing the ring John’s Semi formal clothes and ring

8 Mid shot John saying “Will you marry me?” to Lily while showing her the ring

John’s Semi formal clothes and ring

9 Close up Shows Lily’s face expressions of surprise, happy, and speechless – hand over mouth

Eye make up

10 Extreme Close up John putting on the ring to her finger Ring

11 Point of View Point of view of Lily following John John’s Non-formal outfit

12 Over the shoulder Lily is seeing both John and Nevaeh greeting each other

Lily, and John’s Non-formal outfit and Nevaeh’s outfit (all black)

13 Two shot John & Nevaeh are both in the park sitting down, talking and playing

John and Nevaeh’s Non-formal outfit

14 Close up Lily’s expression when she saw John and Nevaeh together (she doesn’t know who Nevaeh is) - Jealousy

No Make up

Shot List for Draft 2 of Opening SequencePart L

Quizzical

Shot No. Shot Name Description Prop/Costume

1 Mid Shot Mid shot of girl sitting down and looking through the Internet

Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring

2 Over the shoulder Girl in Facebook pictures, looking through them

Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring

3 Mid shot Girl looking very happy Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring

4 Point Of View Girl looking at a picture of her and boyfriend playing

Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket

5 Long shot Girl pushing her boyfriend and laughing pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacketTop

6 Long shot Girl running away from her boyfriend and he follows her

pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket, top

7 Mid shot Girl running pink hoody, jeans, shoes, top

8 Close up Boy’s hand reaching out of his girlfriend’s hand

Pink hoody and black jacket, top

9 Long shot boy got her arm after reaching out for her pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket, top

10 Mid shot Boy spinning around his girlfriendBoy: Got you!Girl: *Laugh*

pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket, top

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11 Point of View Her clicking the next button to see the other picture of both of them holding hands while walking

Pink jumper, laptop, jeans

12 Long Shot Girl and boyfriend walking while the camera is filming them from the back

pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket

13 Long Shot Girl and boyfriend walking while the camera is filming across the road


14 Mid shot Girl clinging into him while camera will be in front of both of the characters while they walk


15 Point of View Her clicking the next button to see the picture of both of them close to each other and looking at each other’s eyes

Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody, trousers, shoes, box, ring

16 Close up Female character looking very happy while looking at the picture


17 Close up Boy and girl looking at each other’s eyesJohn: Close your eyes.


18 Mid shot John taking out the box (with ring inside) while the girl is frozen with her eyes closed


19 Over the Shoulder + Reverse Shot

John opening the box in front of herJohn: Open your eyes



Ina saw the ring with a surprised faceIna: Really?



John will be smiling happilyJohn: Yes, will you marry me?



Ina will hug him as she accepted his proposalIna: Yes!


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23 Close up Ina will be looking very happy while she’s recalling her memory


24 Point Of View Ina looking at the current picture while a chat box opensStranger: Hi.


25 Mid shot Female character looking confused of who the person isIna: Hi? Who is this?


26 Mid shot Ina thinking who this person is Pink jumper, laptop, jeans

27 Over the Shoulder Shot

Showing her thinking then the person on the other end of the chat repliedStranger: You don’t know me but I need to talk to you


28 Point of View She replied back to the strangerIna: Ok about what?


29 Point of View Stranger replied back to herStranger: Your boyfriend…

Script Draft 11. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY

Two shot, of Lily and John sitting down in the cafe shop, drinking tea.

2. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY

Over the shoulder shot, John taking out the ring to propose to Lily.

3. EXT. THE CAFE SHOP WINDOW

Mid-shot, Nevaeh looking at John and Lily angrily. Wearing a black jacket, jeans, white top, boots, and black lipstick.

4. EXT. THE CAFE SHOP WINDOW

Point of view shot, Nevaeh point of view of what she is seeing.


Close up shot, John’s hand opening the ring box

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Mid-shot, Lily shocked and happy, she put her hands over her mouth speechless.


Close up, Lily’s face crying as John propose to her.


Extreme Close up, John putting the ring on Lily’s finger.

9. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK.

Long shot, John and Nevaeh holding hands, walking in the park. John’s wearing gray trousers, red hoody, and trainers whilst Nevaeh wearing jeans, black jacket, and hand bag.


Mid-shot of Lily behind John and Nevaeh, wearing tracksuit, top, jacket, trainers, and hair tied back.

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Close up shot, Lily dialling her phone to call John, she press the button hard as she cannot believe what she’s seeing.


Two shot and Mid shot, Nevaeh and John talking, laughing, the phone rings.


Extreme Close up shot, John’s hand and the phone. He declines the call.

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