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Sept 20 06 Adria n Ste phens Slide 1 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/1372r3 Submission 802.11 TGn Editor Report Sept 2006 Notice: This document has been prepared to assist IEEE 802.11. It is offered as a basis for discussion and is not binding on the contributing individual(s) or organization(s). The material in this document is subject to change in form and content after further study. The contributor(s) reserve(s) the right to add, amend or withdraw material contained herein. Release: The contributor grants a free, irrevocable license to the IEEE to incorporate material contained in this contribution, and any modifications thereof, in the creation of an IEEE Standards publication; to copyright in the IEEE’s name any IEEE Standards publication even though it may include portions of this contribution; and at the IEEE’s sole discretion to permit others to reproduce in whole or in part the resulting IEEE Standards publication. The contributor also acknowledges and accepts that this contribution may be made public by IEEE 802.11. Patent Policy and Procedures: The contributor is familiar with the IEEE 802 Patent Policy and Procedures < http:// ieee802.org/guides/bylaws/sb-bylaws.pdf >, including the statement "IEEE standards may include the known use of patent(s), including patent applications, provided the IEEE receives assurance from the patent holder or applicant with respect to patents essential for compliance with both mandatory and optional portions of the standard." Early disclosure to the Working Group of patent information that might be relevant to the standard is essential to reduce the possibility for delays in the development process and increase the likelihood that the draft publication will be approved for publication. Please notify the Chair <[email protected] > as early as possible, in written or electronic form, if patented technology (or technology under patent application) might be incorporated into a draft standard being developed within the IEEE 802.11 Working Group. If Date: 2006-09-19 N am e C om pany A ddress Phone em ail A drian Stephens Intel Corporation [email protected] Authors:
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doc.: IEEE /1372r3 Submission Sept 2006 Adrian Stephens, Intel CorporationSlide 3 Acknowledgements Editorial assistance: –John Ketchum Editorial review: –Amit Bansal, Bjorn A. Bjerke, Eldad Perahia, George Vlantis, Krishna Pillai, Sanjiv Nanda, Solomon Trainin, Tomoko Adachi, Yuichi Morioka
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Sept 2006
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802.11 TGn Editor Report Sept 2006
Notice: This document has been prepared to assist IEEE 802.11. It is offered as a basis for discussion and is not binding on the contributing individual(s) or organization(s). The material in this document is subject to change in form and content after further study. The contributor(s) reserve(s) the right to add, amend or withdraw material contained herein.
Release: The contributor grants a free, irrevocable license to the IEEE to incorporate material contained in this contribution, and any modifications thereof, in the creation of an IEEE Standards publication; to copyright in the IEEE’s name any IEEE Standards publication even though it may include portions of this contribution; and at the IEEE’s sole discretion to permit others to reproduce in whole or in part the resulting IEEE Standards publication. The contributor also acknowledges and accepts that this contribution may be made public by IEEE 802.11.
Patent Policy and Procedures: The contributor is familiar with the IEEE 802 Patent Policy and Procedures <http:// ieee802.org/guides/bylaws/sb-bylaws.pdf>, including the statement "IEEE standards may include the known use of patent(s), including patent applications, provided the IEEE receives assurance from the patent holder or applicant with respect to patents essential for compliance with both mandatory and optional portions of the standard." Early disclosure to the Working Group of patent information that might be relevant to the standard is essential to reduce the possibility for delays in the development process and increase the likelihood that the draft publication will be approved for publication. Please notify the Chair <[email protected]> as early as possible, in written or electronic form, if patented technology (or technology under patent application) might be incorporated into a draft standard being developed within the IEEE 802.11 Working Group. If you have questions, contact the IEEE Patent Committee Administrator at <[email protected]>.
Date: 2006-09-19
Name Company Address Phone email Adrian Stephens Intel
Corporation [email protected]
Authors:
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Abstract
• This document summarises editorial activities on the TGn Draft and Comment resolution
• It also contains a summary of the status of the 802.11 TGn LB84 comment resolution based on the ad-hoc comment resolution spreadsheets
• Status as of the start of the TGn session on 2006-09-18
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Acknowledgements
• Editorial assistance:– John Ketchum
• Editorial review:– Amit Bansal, Bjorn A. Bjerke, Eldad Perahia,
George Vlantis, Krishna Pillai, Sanjiv Nanda, Solomon Trainin, Tomoko Adachi, Yuichi Morioka
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Related Documents• TGn DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website)
– P802.11n-D1 03.pdf – 11-06-1323-00-000n-redline-version-tgn-draft-1-03.pdf – 11-06-1329-00-000n-task-group-n-draft-d1.03-in-word-format.doc
• Comments “owned” by the editor:– 11-06-0706-14-000n-tgn-d1-0-lb84-editorial-plus-duplicates.xls
• Composite spreadsheet– 11-06-0541-09-000n-tgn-d1-0-lb84.xls
• Submission Template– 11-06-0967-00-000n-tgn-lb84-submission-template-and-guide.doc
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Process for Draft D1.03• Each “A or C” resolution was implemented (if possible). The draft was
edited and was also marked with a comment indicating the related CID. • The comments spreadsheet was updated with Edit Status and Edit Notes.
Edit Notes indicate any interpretation or modification of the resolution that was implemented. Edit Status indicates one of: EI, EM, EMR, ER, EN (see next slide).
• A complete response to the Comments approved in July in is document 11-06/0706r11 in the “Approved in July” tab.
• The working draft and spreadsheet were reviewed by editorial volunteers who reported ~200 defects.
• The defects were corrected, and D1.03 was published.• Time required (for ~800 comment resolutions):
– 2 weeks for initial editing– 2 weeks for review– 1 week for addressing defects and publication
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Terminology• Type (Ed)
– T = Technical– ST = Submission
Technical– DT = Disputed Technical
• Resolution Status– A = Accept– R = Reject– C/L = Counter/Alternate
(equivalent)– D = Defer– T = Transfer– W = Withdraw
• Edit Status (New)– EI = Edited as resolution– EM = Edited with minor
changes
– EMR = Edited with changes, recycled for TGn approval
– ER = Cannot edit, recycled for rework and TGn approval
– EN = Nothing to do (duplicate of other resolution)
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Implementation of “A+C” resolutions approved in July
Resn Status EI EM EMR EN ER EIR Grand TotalA 109 132 29 168 16 1 455
C 80 49 18 226 6 379
Grand Total 189 181 47 394 22 1 834
• Status as in 11-06/0706r11• Since then, reclassified EIR comment to EI
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Treatment of recycled “EMR+ER” comments• These are comments that need input from the technical ad-hocs, and
subsequent re-approval by TGn• EMR comments relate to the editor’s “best interpretation” of the
resolution, but require TGn re-approval because what the editor implemented was substantively different to the resolution approved by TGn.– These comments all need to be discussed, modified (if necessary) and approved by
motion in TGn as soon as possible. – The editor will then make any necessary adjustments to D1.03 and issue a D1.04 for
approval before the end of the next full TGn session.– Unhanded EMR comments will probably delay the approval of D1.04
• ER comments do not block the approval of D1.04.– However it may be instructive for ad-hocs to look at these early rather than late to
discover what kind of resolution causes the editor to assign an ER status.
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Editorial Actions/Motions this week
• Action: ad-hoc to– collect defects in D1.03– answer questions on EM comments
• Motion: Approval of “Edit Status”=EM (edit with mods) resolutions
• Motion: Approval of EMR comments returned after review by ad-hocs
• Action: revise draft as required to address:– Defects identified– EMR resolutions that did not agree with what the editor did in D1.03
• Motion: approve draft D1.04
• Motion: approve resolutions to (~100) editorials
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Status of Comments Database
• The LB84 comments are distributed between 13 Excel worksheets in 9 separate files.
• The comments are regularly checked against the original corpus, held in 11-06/0541r2 to ensure that no comments are lost, and fixed fields of the comments have not been changed.
• The list of components follows on the next slide.
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Monday morning status
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Component FilesDocument name Version number Short name Comments11-06-0706 14 editorials Unapproved editorial resolutions
11-06-0675 35 beam Beam main sheet
11-06-0688 31 general General main sheet
11-06-0690 33 mac MAC main sheet
11-06-0693 38 phy PHY main sheet
11-06-0687 29 psmp PSMP main sheet
11-06-0717 34 frame Frame main sheet
11-06-0731 03 ca CA Doc main sheet
11-06-0724 22 coex Coex main sheet
11-06-0706 14 dup Unapproved duplicates
11-06-0706 14 edited Edited approved A+C comments
11-06-0706 14 no edit required
TGn Approved R+W comments
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Status by Component – Unique Tech only
Last Updated By A C R L W D ER EMR Blank Total Done % Doneapproved 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 1 100
beam 23 97 17 0 0 123 0 0 4 264 137 51.8
ca 13 0 4 7 0 0 0 0 1 25 24 96
coex 14 34 20 0 0 113 0 2 202 385 68 17.6
edited 241 126 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 367 367 100
editorials 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 2 1 50
frame 8 9 16 0 0 37 0 0 69 150 33 22
frame 1364 motion 55 27 25 0 0 0 0 0 0 107 107 100
frame emr motion 2 11 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 13 13 100
general 0 8 14 0 0 11 1 0 0 34 22 64.7
general emr motion 1 3 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 4 4 100
mac 16 6 1 0 0 79 3 0 90 195 23 11.7
mac 1363 motion 42 23 21 0 0 0 0 0 0 86 86 100
mac 912 motion 33 18 19 0 0 0 0 0 0 70 70 100
mac emr motion 4 6 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 10 10 100
no edit required 174 226 258 0 23 0 0 0 0 681 681 100
phy 56 52 76 0 0 171 2 0 176 533 184 34.5
psmp 0 0 0 0 0 20 0 0 0 20 0 0
psmp motion 2 66 83 28 0 0 0 0 0 0 177 177 100
Totals 750 729 499 7 23 554 6 2 543 3124 2008 64.2
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Status by Component – Ad-hoc main sheetsLast Updated By
A C R L W D ER EMR Blank Total Done % Done
beam 23 97 17 0 0 123 0 0 4 264 137 51.8
ca 13 0 4 7 0 0 0 0 1 25 24 96
coex 14 34 20 0 0 113 0 2 202 385 68 17.6
frame 8 9 16 0 0 37 0 0 69 150 33 22
general 0 8 14 0 0 11 1 0 0 34 22 64.7
mac 16 6 1 0 0 79 3 0 90 195 23 11.7
phy 56 52 76 0 0 171 2 0 176 533 184 34.5
psmp 0 0 0 0 0 20 0 0 0 20 0 0
Totals 130 206 148 7 0 554 6 2 542 1606 491 30.6
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Status by Component – Motion sheetsLast Updated By A C R L W D ER EMR Blank Total Done %
Doneframe 1364 motion
55 27 25 0 0 0 0 0 0 107 107 100
frame emr motion
2 11 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 13 13 100
general emr motion
1 3 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 4 4 100
mac 1363 motion
42 23 21 0 0 0 0 0 0 86 86 100
mac 912 motion 33 18 19 0 0 0 0 0 0 70 70 100mac emr motion 4 6 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 10 10 100psmp motion 2 66 83 28 0 0 0 0 0 0 177 177 100
Totals 203 171 93 0 0 0 0 0 0 467 467 100
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EMR status
Last Updated By A C EMRGrand
Totalbeam 4 4coex 2 8 2 12
frame emr motion 2 11 13general emr
motion 1 3 4
mac 1 1
mac emr motion 5 6 11
phy motion 3 1 1
psmp motion 2 1 1Grand Total 12 33 2 47
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Motions
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Editor Motion 1• Whereas the editor found it necessary to make minor
modifications in the incorporation of TGn comment resolutions approved in July, identified with an “Edit Status” of “EM”, and
• whereas 11-06/0706r15 has 181 “EM” Comments:– CIDs: CID, 24, 25, 44, 51, 123, 130, 157, 201, 461, 498, 560, 589, 610, 613, 623, 633, 663, 668, 855, 867, 874,
934, 936, 937, 978, 979, 1075, 1082, 1103, 1107, 1110, 1114, 1116, 1120, 1122, 1135, 1138, 1139, 1149, 1168, 1170, 1257, 1281, 1286, 1289, 1297, 1300, 1303, 1304, 1307, 1314, 1318, 1327, 1338, 1339, 1426, 1430, 1456, 1457, 1460, 1461, 1473, 1742, 1752, 1805, 1956, 1965, 1969, 1992, 2470, 2486, 2572, 3155, 3157, 3158, 3159, 3160, 3161, 3162, 3163, 3164, 3165, 3166, 3167, 3168, 3169, 3170, 3171, 3172, 3173, 3174, 3175, 3176, 3177, 3178, 3179, 3180, 3181, 3182, 3183, 3184, 3185, 3186, 3187, 3188, 3189, 3190, 3191, 3192, 3193, 3194, 3195, 3200, 3201, 3203, 3205, 3209, 3210, 3211, 3212, 3214, 3215, 3216, 3217, 3218, 3411, 3412, 3420, 3421, 3432, 3442, 3466, 3474, 3620, 3755, 3804, 3827, 3841, 3852, 3912, 3998, 4019, 4022, 4050, 4545, 4552, 4599, 4606, 4676, 4818, 5108, 5109, 5152, 5156, 5157, 6765, 6781, 6782, 6789, 7050, 7104, 7105, 7156, 7224, 7337, 7338, 7353, 7580, 7609, 7621, 7657, 7658, 9955, 9969, 10304, 10353, 11970, 11996, 12001, 12149, 12255
• Move to accept the resolution of the comments as amended by the “Edit Notes” column where the comment has an “Edit Status” of “EM” (Edited with modifications) in document 11-06/0706r16 on the “Edited” tab
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Editor Motion 2
• Whereas review was requested of modifications in the incorporation of TGn comment resolutions approved in July, identified with an “Edit Status” of “EMR”, and
• whereas the referenced EMR comments have been reviewed and updated by the technical ad-hocs
– 30 CIDs: 1443, 2334, 3976, 10079, 1311, 1209, 1423, 1445, 1455, 4638, 7276, 7283, 7612, 612, 632, 635, 1119, 1181, 1990, 3754, 3727, 3729, 5140, 8112, 1459, 7308, 6788, 3726, 3746, 1533,
– (The other 17 EMR comments were brought before TGn independently by General, MAC and PSMP motions)
• Move to accept the resolution of comments in document 11-06/0706r16 on the “EMR Comments” tab
