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Demo feedback:By Josh Davey
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I have shown multiple members of the target audience, two demo scenes which we roughly created to demonstrate exactly what we was going for in the scenes.
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Feedback (Positives)0The content is conventional0Use of conventional mise-en-scene – Pills, hoods.0Conventional themes: -Danger -Tension -Mind control -Government agents
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Feedback (Negatives)0Sound distortion on all scenes0Lacks continuity and professionalism0Extremely long scenes could bored the viewers
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Improvements0Remove sound distortion0Trim down scenes including less build-up 0 Use a wider range of locations for scene 1 to show the
pill is taken by “everyone”
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OverallOverall, these scenes have the content, they just need minor improvements based on length, continuity and mise-en-scene in order for them to be fully conventional.