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Junior High PAP English
A Resource for Students
Deer Park ISD
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Table of Contents Course Description.................................................................................................................................. 5
Plagiarism Policy .................................................................................................................................... 5
The Three Levels of Reading and Questions ................................................................................ 7
Literal ............................................................................................................................................. 6
Inferential ...................................................................................................................................... 6
Reading Reminders ................................................................................................................................. 9
Annotation: What it is for, and how to do it. ........................................................................................ 10
Theme ................................................................................................................................................... 12
Thesis Statements about Literature ....................................................................................................... 13
DIDLS .................................................................................................................................................. 14
DO STYLES ......................................................................................................................................... 15
Using TPCASTT and TPFASTT for Analysis of Poetry ...................................................................... 16
TTRAPS for Analysis of Persuasive Writing ....................................................................................... 18
SOAPSTone ........................................................................................................................................ 19
The Big6™ Skills ................................................................................................................................. 20
Syntax / Sentence Structure Terms ....................................................................................................... 21
Patterns by Purpose ........................................................................................................................... 21
Patterns by Structure ......................................................................................................................... 21
Patterns by Syntax............................................................................................................................. 21
Advanced Syntax Techniques ........................................................................................................... 22
PAP TERMINOLOGY ......................................................................................................................... 23
Literary Forms .................................................................................................................................. 23
Literary Elements .............................................................................................................................. 23
Poetry Terms ..................................................................................................................................... 28
Grammatical Terms .......................................................................................................................... 29
$5 WORD LIST .................................................................................................................................... 30
Dialogue Tag Words ......................................................................................................................... 30
Verbs ................................................................................................................................................. 31
Adjectives ......................................................................................................................................... 32
Adverbs ............................................................................................................................................. 33
Transitions......................................................................................................................................... 35
DESCRIPTORS FOR TONE, ATTITUDE, & DICTION ................................................................... 37
VERBS .................................................................................................................................................. 38
JUNIOR HIGH SHORT STORY WRITING RUBRIC ....................................................................... 46
JUNIOR HIGH ESSAY WRITING RUBRIC ..................................................................................... 47
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Welcome to Deer Park’s English Pre-Advanced Placement
program. Under the direction of the College Board and Deer Park ISD’s
Advanced Academics, Pre-Advanced Placement English is a program that
affords students in-depth and rigorous preparation for high school courses,
including Advanced Placement classes. Obviously, one of the primary goals
of our program is to prepare students for Advanced Placement English, and
to encourage student enrollment in Advanced Placement courses in high
school.
Having said this, our program has an even greater purpose, something more
lasting and more substantial than enrollment in a particular class, even one
that will prepare them to earn college credit during their high school years.
The Pre-Advanced Placement program is founded on two assertions: that
students can meet the expectations of rigorous curriculum and that students
can begin to prepare themselves to meet those challenges as early as
possible. Deer Park’s team of Pre-Advanced Placement teachers creates
classrooms that foster the development of skills and habits that will propel
students to exceed expectations early in their educational career. The Pre-
Advanced Placement program does this through the exploration of
literature.
Beyond all of these strictly academic concerns, PAP Language Arts is
designed to introduce students to a higher level thought process that will
improve their performance in any area of life that requires abstract
reasoning, problem-solving, or deeper understanding. This program is
designed for students to grow academically and emotionally, to add to the
sum total of who they are. We truly believe that participation in a Pre-
Advanced Placement class supports parents in raising good citizens, good
friends, and good students.
Junior High PAP Language Arts Teachers
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Junior High PAP Reading Selections
6th
Grade Freak the Mighty
The Underneath
The Hunger Games
7th
Grade The Book Thief (SR)
The Old Man and the Sea (SR)
Dark Water Rising
Animal Farm
A Christmas Carol
Isaac’s Storm
The Outsiders
Roll of Thunder, Hear My Cry
Life as We Knew It
The Compound
8th
Grade And Then There Were None (SR)
Anthem (SR)
Pygmalion
Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde
Flowers for Algernon
Romeo and Juliet
Night
Each Campus
will choose
two titles from
those listed
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Course Description:
A Pre-AP course in English Language Arts engages students in becoming skilled readers …and in
becoming skilled writers. The purpose of the Pre-AP ELA course is to model good reading and
writing strategies for students so that those skills become incorporated into students’ own reading and
writing habits. Students will read complex texts and extract meaning from them as well as understand
the writer’s process and craft that allows for development of meaning and entertainment for readers.
Students will then learn to analyze and employ those writing strategies, creating well-written
narrative and expository pieces.
Plagiarism Policy According to the WPA (Council for Writing Program Administrators), and with DPHS – South ELA
Department input, in an instructional setting, plagiarism occurs when a writer uses someone
else’s language, ideas, or other original (not common knowledge) material without
acknowledging its source.
Source:
Defining and Avoiding Plagiarism: The WPA Statement on Best Practices. Council for Writing
Program Administrators. N.d. Web. 4 May 2011.
For more information:
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/589/01/
http://wpacouncil.org/positions/WPAplagiarism.pdf
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The Three Levels of Reading and Questions – Student Bookmark
Levels of Reading Level One - Literal Level Students will find meaning directly in the text (reading on the line). Level Two - Inferential Level Students will interpret what is in the text (reading between the lines). Level Three - Thematic Level Students will move beyond the text to connect to universal meaning (reading beyond the lines).
Levels of Questions Level One:
Level one can be answered by using details contained in the text; they are fact based.
They answer who, what, where, and when kinds of questions.
Level Two:
Level two can be answered after analyzing the text.
They are how and why types of questions.
They are inference-based and implied in the text.
Level Three:
Level three questions are open-ended. They ask the reader to reference information beyond the text.
These types of questions will provoke discussion of higher-level, abstract ideas or issues.
They use the text as a guide to explore larger issues.
Literal
Inferential
Thematic
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Reading Reminders for Journal Writing
Thinking about what you read
Why does the character /author...
Why doesn’t the character /author...
What surprised me most was...
I predict that...
This author’s writing style is...
I noticed that the author uses…
The main character wants/is...
If I could, I’d ask the author/character...
The most interesting event/idea in this book is...
I realized...
The main conflict/idea in this book is...
I wonder why...
One theme that keeps coming up is...
I found the following quote interesting...
I ____________ this book because...
Elaborating on what you think
I think__________ because...
A good example of _______ is...
This reminded me of ______ because...
This was important because...
One thing that surprised me was___ because I
always thought...
The author is saying that...
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Annotation: What it is for, and how to do it.
Annotation is active engaged reading. It is reading with a pen or pencil in hand and responding as
one reads by underlining important passages and adding marginal notes, comments and personal
responses to what is being read. It is reading that requires the active engagement of both the mind
and the hand, rather than the mere passing of one’s eyes over an assignment hoping to get the ‘gist”
of the story.
Benefits
Annotation is the first step in analyzing and understanding a given work, whether it is a work of
literature or a newspaper or magazine article. A close reading of any work will reveal its strengths as
well as its weaknesses and is an invaluable skill for the college-bound students, as any glance at the
used-book stacks at a college bookstore will immediately make clear. In fact, it could be fairly said
that annotating assigned textbook readings in college is a way of life. However, whether you see
college in your future or not, you should make the practice of annotating as you read a life-long habit.
It will make you a more critical, analytical thinker, and that is a life skill from which you can reap
benefits regardless of the career path you choose.
How do you annotate?
In this class, we will be annotating works of literature, but the basic steps and thought processes will
be the same for any piece of reading material. An in-depth analysis requires at least two readings.
During this reading, you should underline unfamiliar words and [bracket passages] that you do not
understand, or that need further explanation. In the margin, note your initial reactions and responses
to this initial reading. Underline words or phrases that are repeated.
In literature, there are at least 12 possible areas that are open to analysis in any given work: setting,
characterization, point of view, tone, style, imagery, symbols, figures of speech, plot, structure,
conflict and theme. Focusing on these elements provides a good starting point for any analysis. The
suggested steps below are intended to aid you in making annotations. Remember: annotation is a
skill, and, like any skill, it gets better and easier with practice. Do not be intimidated. Your
annotations are essentially a reflection of your own thought processes and your interaction with the
text. There is no single “right way” to annotate.
Start like this:
1. Look carefully at the title. Are there any word play (pun, irony, double-meaning, etc.) or
possible symbolic or thematic implications contained in the title? Don’t wait to see if you are
right. Simply indicate your suspicions in a margin comment and move on.
2. What information is contained in the exposition (the introduction of the setting, characters and
immediate situation)? The exposition can be the first few paragraphs, or the first chapter of a
longer work. Underline significant details such as time and place (setting). What is the mood
or atmosphere in the exposition (what does the author want you, the reader, to feel)? Indicate
the mood in the margin. Does it change later? What words suggest the mood? Mark the
most extensive or important descriptions of physical place, and underline the most telling
words and phrases.
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3. Underline the name and description of each character as he/she is introduced. The details
may become significant later. Mark the “main character” or a secondary character’s
relationship to the main character (i.e. wife, husband, friend, etc.).
4. Note the point of view. Who is telling the story? Underline any repeated actions, habits or
words of characters. When the characters speak, are they being sincere or sarcastic? How do
you know? What evidence supports your speculation?
5. What is the tone? (The author’s attitude toward the subject.) Underline the words that suggest
tone and write “tone” in the margin.
6. Is the style ornate or simple? Does it rely on figurative language (repetition, alliteration,
metaphor, simile, etc.) or is the style plain and the subject directly stated?
7. If the author uses figurative language, underline examples and write in the margin what kind
of figurative language is being used. Underline images that are recurring.
8. If the sentence(s) appeal to you, underline them and put a note in the margin saying why.
9. Circle possible symbols in the work and suggest possible meanings in the margin as you read.
What evidence supports these meanings? Underline examples. Pay particular attention to
repeated words or phrases.
10. Mark the structural units of the work (i.e. exposition, introduction of conflict,
complication/conflict, climax, resolution). Be sure to mark the major conflicts and climax!
11. Consider how the title, names of characters, symbols may be related to a theme. Write
possible themes in the margin.
12. Review all your annotations. Do you see an emerging pattern? Is there a pattern? If so, does
it begin earlier than the first indication that you noted? If there is not an apparent pattern, are
there any connections or conclusions that can be made based on your annotations? Write
them in the margins.
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Theme is a universal truth or a lesson about life that the author is trying to
convey by telling a story. It is the deeper meaning of a text, not just the sequence of events or the main idea of the piece. Often a work will have more than one theme.
two-step process. Discovering the theme of a work is a
Step 1: Begin by brainstorming a list of subjects. The subject of a piece is what the story
is “REALLY” about stated in 1-3 words.
1.
2.
3.
Step 2: The theme of a work should be stated in a complete sentence and should reflect a
universal truth (a widely held belief that is accepted as true by most people.)
Complete the following sentence for each thematic statement.
__________________________________ believes ____________________________________
(author’s name) (subject word or phrase from step 1)
At this point, you now know what the author believes. Next, rewrite the statement removing the
author’s name and the word believes.
Read the statement. Does it state a universal truth? If so, you have arrived at a theme expressed in
this work.
Create two more thematic statements using the remaining words from step 1.
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Thesis Statements about Literature A thesis is a single sentence that introduces 1) your topic (the SUBJECT of your
paper), 2) your position on the subject (i.e. your view/opinion/argument on the topic),
and 3) your evidence (HOW PROVENS) to prove your position.
In English Language Arts classes, in class essays and research papers are often about
pieces of fiction. As a result, you must include two additional pieces of information in
a thesis statement: 4) the author’s full name, and 5) the name of the work of literature
you will be discussing in your paper.
An easy way to remember these requirements for a thesis statement in a literary paper
is the acronym:
P-A-T-H
P = Position
A = Author
T = Title
H = How proven
The strongest essays will have at least 3 HOW PROVENS (pieces of evidence) to
prove the position of the paper. A strong thesis is like a sturdy stool. You need at least
3 legs for a stool to stand up, any less and it will fall. Similarly, your essay will not
stand up unless you have 3 strong examples or pieces of evidence to support it.
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The key to unlocking tone in a piece of literature is through the following elements:
diction, imagery, details, language, and syntax. These elements are also known as
DIDLS.
D (Diction) Choose unusual and/or effective words from the passage.
Evaluate the connotations of the words and write
synonyms for each. Then, decide what the word choice
suggests about the character’s or narrator’s demeanor.
I (Images) Cite examples of imagery from the passage. Identify the
sense appealed to, and interpret the meaning.
D (Details) List facts or the sequence of events from the passage.
L (Language) Determine the type of language used (formal, informal,
clinical, jargon, literal, vulgar, artificial, sensuous,
concrete, precise, pedantic, etc.). Site examples.
S (Syntax) How does sentence structure reveal the character’s
attitude?
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DO STYLES Think of literary style in the same way that you think of fashion style. A fashion designer has certain
well-known features of her/his work which set it apart from other designers. Some designers use only
a certain type of fabric, color, or emphasize a certain level of formality in their creations. Authors do
the same thing, only with WORDS. Just like fashion designers use fabric, color, and levels of
formality in their create their style, authors use several different components to create their STYLE.
To help you remember the different aspects of writing which create STYLE, here is another (oh boy!)
acronym:
Diction – word choices made by the author, consider both CONNOTATION AND DENOTATION
Objective of Author – author’s PURPOSE for writing his/her work, what does he/she hope to teach
you?
Syntax – the way the sentences are structured, the way PUNCTUATION (first key) is used, whether
the sentences are all long, all short, or a mixture. Includes parallel structures, repetition, etc.
Tone – the attitude of the author toward his/her material.
You (Audience) – is the author aware of his/her audience? Is he/she AIMING his comments at a
certain group of people? Are his words appropriate for his audience? How does he/she use words to
appeal to a certain group? Does he/she offend anyone? Please anyone?
Level of Language – which level of language is the author using? Why? Levels include
ACADEMIC, FORMAL, INFORMAL, CONVERSATIONAL, , DIALECT, SLANG, etc.
Elements and Devices – includes both LITERARY and RHETORICAL (logical argument)
elements. Literary elements include figurative language, fiction elements such as foreshadowing,
symbols, irony, etc. Rhetorical devices include rhetorical question, persuasive techniques and appeals
to ethics, logic, or emotion.
Structure – the way the ENTIRE work (essay, story, novel, play) or large portions of it are
organized. Consider point of view, tense and time shifts, flashbacks, comparisons and contrasts,
closure, patterns, and motifs.
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Using TPCASTT and TPFASTT for Analysis of Poetry
T Title What do the words of the title suggest to you? What denotations are
presented in the title? What connotations or associations do the words possess?
P Paraphrase Translate the poem in your own words. What is the poem about?
C Connotation What meaning does the poem have beyond the literal meaning? Fill in
the chart below.
Form Diction Imagery
Point of View Details Allusions
Symbolism Figurative Language Other Devices
(antithesis, apostrophe, sound devices, irony,
oxymoron, paradox, pun, sarcasm, understatement)
A Attitude What is the speaker’s attitude? How does the speaker feel about
himself, about others, and about the subject? What is the author’s attitude? How does the author feel about the speaker, about other characters, about the subject, and the reader?
S Shifts Where do the shifts in tone, setting, voice, etc. occur? Look for time and
place, keywords, punctuation, stanza divisions, changes in length or rhyme, and sentence structure. What is the purpose of each shift? How do they contribute to effect and meaning?
T Title Reanalyze the title on an interpretive level. What part does the title play
in the overall interpretation of the poem?
T Theme List the subjects and the abstract ideas in the poem. Then determine the
overall theme. The theme must be written in a complete sentence.
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T Title and
Author
Ponder the title before reading the poem.
What do you think it will be about?
P Paraphrase
Read the poem at least twice-maybe even aloud.
What is going on in the poem?
Translate and summarize the poem into your own words.
F Figurative
Language
Find at least 3 different types of figurative language such as similes and metaphors, idioms,
personification, repetition, alliteration, etc. Refer to your PAP Notebook for other
examples.
Make a list and give an example for each.
Ex: Repetition – “And then” is repeated several times to build suspense.
A Attitude
Who is the speaker?
What is the overall tone of the poem?
Look for diction, images, and details that suggest their points of view and contribute to
the understanding of the poem.
Use your list and explain how the author creates this tone.
S Shift
Notice changes in speakers and in attitudes.
Where does it happen in your poem?
Watch for changes in line length, sound, diction, and punctuation.
Explain why the author used the shift(s).
T Title
Reexamine the poem’s title again, this time looking at its meaning.
How does it relate to the poem?
Why did the author give it that title?
Would you have given the poem a different title?
T Theme
Determine what message the poet is conveying.
Look for human experience, motivation, or condition.
Start with a list of words that you can think of and make one into a statement reflecting
what the poem is trying to say.
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TTRAPS for analysis of persuasive writing
Title
T Topic
What is the topic of the selection?
How do you know this is the topic?
What do you know about the topic?
What else do you need to know to understand the topic?
T Tone
Is the tone positive or negative?
Provide a descriptive word from your list.
Use text evidence to support this tone.
Why would the author choose this tone?
R Rhetorical
Devices
Find at least one type of device used in the paper and give an example from the text.
Loaded Terms (words or phrases with strongly positive or negative
connotations)
Leading/Rhetorical Questions ( questions addressed to the reader)
Caricatures (cartoon-like portrayals of opposing arguments)
A Audience
Who is the sender of the message?
Why is her/she sending this message?
Who is the intended audience?
Why did the sender choose this audience?
P Purpose
What is the purpose of this selection?
S Strategies
Emotional Appeal – the use of words, descriptions or images that call forth
strong feelings, such as pity, fear, or anger.
Ethical Appeal – attempts to gain moral support for a claim by linking the
claim to a widely accepted value.
Logical Appeal – the use of facts and evidence that appeal to reason.
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SOAPSTone
Speaker
The voice that tells the story. The author and the speaker are NOT necessarily the same. An author may choose to tell the story from any number of different points of view. In non-fiction consider important facts about speaker that will help assess his/her point of view / position.
Occasion
The time and place of the piece; the context that encouraged the writing to happen. Writing does not occur in a vacuum. There is the larger occasion: an environment of ideas and emotions that swirl around a broad issue. Then there is the immediate occasion: an event or situation that catches the writer’s attention and triggers a response.
Audience
The group of readers to whom this piece is directed. The audience may be one person, a small group, or a large group; it may be a certain person or a certain people.
Purpose
The reason behind the text. Consider the purpose of the text in order to examine the argument and its logic. You should ask yourself, “What does the speaker want the audience to think or do as a result of reading this text?”
Subject
The general topic, content, and ideas contained in the text. You should be able to state the subject in a few words or a phrase.
Tone
The attitude of the author. The spoken word can convey the speaker’s attitude, and, thus, help to impart meaning, through tone of voice. With the written work, it is tone that extends meaning beyond the literal. Tone can be determined by examining the author’s diction (choice of words), syntax (sentence construction), and imagery (vivid descriptions that appeal to the senses).
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The Big6™ Skills
The Big6 is a process model of how people of all ages solve an information problem.
1. Task Definition 1.1 Define the information problem
1.2 Identify information needed (to solve the information problem) What is my current task?
What are some topics or questions I need to answer?
What information will I need?
2. Information Seeking Strategies 2.1 Determine all possible sources (brainstorm)
2.2 Select the best sources What are all the possible sources to check?
What are the best sources of information for this task?
3. Location and Access 3.1 Locate sources (intellectually and physically)
3.2 Find information within sources Where can I find these sources?
Where can I find the information in the source?
4. Use of Information 4.1 Engage (e.g., read, hear, view, touch)
4.2 Extract relevant information What information do I expect to find in this source?
What information from the source is useful?
5. Synthesis 5.1 Organize from multiple sources
5.2 Present the information How will I organize my information?
How should I present my information?
6. Evaluation 6.1 Judge the product (effectiveness)
6.2 Judge the process (efficiency) Did I do what was required?
Did I complete each of the Big6 Stages efficiently?
The "Big6™" is copyright © (1987) Michael B. Eisenberg and Robert E. Berkowitz. For more information, visit:
www.big6.com Handout created by: Barbara J. Shoemaker, School Media Specialist, Mill Road Elementary, K-2
Red Hook Central School District, Red Hook, NY
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Syntax / Sentence Structure Terms One of the most important elements of syntax is the way words, phrases, and clauses are arranged.
This is a key element of the author’s style and can have a marked effect on meaning.
Syntax: The arrangement of words and the order of grammatical elements in a sentence.
Patterns by Purpose Declarative Sentence
Makes a statement:
“The king is sick.”
Imperative Sentence
Gives a command:
“Cure the king.”
Interrogative Sentence
Asks a question:
“Is the king sick?”
Exclamatory Sentence
Provides emphasis or expresses strong emotion:
“The king is dead! Long live the king!”
Patterns by Structure Simple Sentence
Contains one independent clause:
“The singer bowed to her adoring audience.”
Compound Sentence
Contains two independent clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction or by a semicolon:
“The singer bowed to the audience, hut she sang no encores.”
Complex Sentence
Contains an independent clause and one or more subordinate clauses:
“Because the singer was tired, she went straight to bed after the concert.”
Compound-Complex
Contains two or more independent clauses and one or more subordinate clauses:
“The singer bowed while the audience applauded, but she sang no encores.”
Patterns by Syntax
Loose or Cumulative Sentence
Makes complete sense if brought to a close before the actual ending:
“We reached Edmonton that morning after a turbulent flight and some exciting experiences, tired but
exhilarated, full of stories to tell our friends and neighbors.”
Periodic Sentence
Makes sense fully only when the end of the sentence is reached:
“That morning, after a turbulent flight and some exciting experiences, we reached Edmonton.”
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Parallel Structure
Refers to the grammatical or structural similarity between sentences or parts of a sentence. It involves
an arrangement of words, or phrases, sentences, and paragraphs so that elements of equal importance
are equally developed and similarly phrased:
“He loved swimming, running, and playing tennis.”
Repetition
A device in which words, sounds and ideas are used more than once to enhance rhythm and to create
emphasis:
“...government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth.” (Address
at Gettysburg by Abraham Lincoln)
Advanced Syntax Techniques The techniques listed here are powerful strategies for using language. Students find it both interesting
and valuable to identify these techniques in the works of authors and to use them in their own writing.
Asyndeton
Deliberate omission of conjunctions in a series of related clauses: e.g., “I came, I saw, I conquered.”
(Julius Caesar)
Polysyndeton
The deliberate use of many conjunctions for special emphasis to highlight quantity or mass of detail
or to create a flowing, continuous sentence pattern: e.g., “The meal was huge — my mother fixed
okra and green beans and ham and apple pie and green pickled tomatoes and ambrosia salad and all
manner of fine country food — but no matter how I tried, I could not consume it to her satisfaction.”
Some suggestions for Syntactical Revision: While students are peer-editing essays, short stories, or other writing, they should work on their
syntax as well as on mechanical problems.
1. Rework most sentences beginning with the expletive “there.”
3. Add a sentence using a comparison (simile or metaphor).
4. Replace “be” verbs with active verbs.
5. Combine any two sentences to form one compound, one complex, or one compound-complex
sentence.
6. Change one declarative sentence into an interrogative sentence.
7. Move one sentence to a more effective location in the paragraph.
The AP Vertical Teams Guide for English. 2nd ed. College Board, 2002.
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PAP TERMINOLOGY
Literary Forms Autobiography the story of a person’s life written by that person; can vary from a
chronological account to an impressionistic narrative
Comedy story with a happy ending (from Greek word for “merrymaking” and
“singing:
Fiction a work of prose that contains imaginary elements; may be based on actual
events and real people
Non-fiction writing about real people, places and events; largely concerned with factual
information, although the writer shapes the information according to his or
her purpose or viewpoint; biography, autobiography, newspaper articles
Genre type, kind of literature (short story, essay, drama, poetry – ode, elegy,
sonnet)
Memoir a form of autobiographical writing in which a person recalls significant
events in his or her life, usually in first-person; true accounts of actual
events; include the writers’ feelings and opinions about historical events
Novel any extended fictional prose narrative
Prose ordinary language of speaking and writing
Poetry
communication of thought and feeling through the careful arrangement of
words for their sound, rhythm, connotation and sense – verse
Literary Elements *Red = Introduced in 6th Grade, reinforced at all grade levels **Light Blue = Introduced in 7th Grade ***Green = Introduced in 8th Grade
Allusion* brief, often direct reference to a person, place, event, work of art, literature,
or music which the author assumes the reader will recognize (Literary**,
Mythologica**, Historical***)
Anecdote a brief story that focuses on a single episode or event in a person’s life and
that is used to illustrate a particular point
Apostrophe*** an absent person, abstract concept or an inanimate object is addressed
directly; a form of personification
Apposition** the placing next to a noun another noun or phrase that explains it, e.g.,
Pollution, the city’s primary problem, is an issue.
Analogy a comparison of points of likeness between two otherwise dissimilar things,
a familiar object or idea is used to explain a more abstract concept
Students will be expected to learn the following terminology. This study of terminology is a three-step process:
1. Learning the definition, 2. Identifying the device when it appears in literature, and 3. Being able to discuss the effect or purpose of the device.
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Archetype* a character, action or situation that is a prototype or pattern on human life
generally; a situation that occurs over and over again in literature, such as a
quest, an initiation or an attempt to overcome evil. Examples include such
recurrent symbols as the rose, the serpent, and the sun; common themes like
love, death, and conflict; mythical settings like the paradisal garden; stock
characters like the femme fatale, the hero, and the magician; and some basic
patterns of action and plot such as the quest, the descent to the underworld,
or the feud. The most fundamental of these patterns is often said to be that of
death and rebirth, reflecting the natural cycle of the seasons.
Asyndenton*** conjunctions are omitted, producing a fast-paced and rapid prose: I came, I
saw, I conquered
Attitude see tone
Character Types:
Developed Character*
(round)
Stock Character*
(flat)
Dynamic Character***
Static Character***
Protagonist*
Antagonist*
people or animals who take part in the action of a literary work; readers learn
about characters from a) what they say, b) what they do, c) what they think,
d) what others say about them, and d) through the author’s direct statement
complex, many sided, fully rounded personality
a single important trait is emphasized; definite type of character
conventionally used, stereotype occurring often in fiction (usually short
stories); examples: cowboy or mad scientist; stock characters provide quick
individualization and save time
undergoes a permanent change in some aspect of personality because of
action or events in plot
remains same at end of story as at beginning (usually not a main character)
leading character, not always the hero – but the principal character
character who opposes the protagonist
Characterization*
Direct***
Indirect***
techniques used by the writer to create a character (fictional personality
created by the author)
what the author says
what the other characters say
what the character says
what the character does
Conflict
interplay between opposing forces
man vs. man
man vs. nature
man vs. society
man vs. self
man vs. fate, destiny, supernatural
Connotation* the feeling or attitude associated with a word, related to but quite distinct
from its literal meaning
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Denotation* literal meaning of the word; dictionary definition of a word
Detail facts revealed by the author or speaker that support the attitude or tone; e.g.,
the desert
Dialect* moralized tale, medieval; such as Chaucer’s Nun’s Priest’s Tale
Dialogue* analysis of the meaning, relationships and ambiguities of words, images, and
small units that make up a literary text
Diction* a writer’s or speaker’s choice of words which is intended to convey a certain
effect; includes both vocabulary and syntax; can be formal or informal,
technical or common, abstract or concrete
Epiphany*** Sudden awakening or realization
Euphemism*** substitution of an inoffensive word for one considered offensive, e.g.,
“kicked the bucket” for “dead”
Figurative language words or phrases that describe one thing in terms of something else; always
involving some sort of imaginative comparison between seemingly unlike
things; not meant to be taken literally; used to produce images in a reader’s
mind and to express ideas in fresh, vivid, imaginative ways, and, by
emphasizing their connotations, bring new insight to the subject described;
the most common are simile, metaphor, personification
Flashback* a scene which interrupts the action to show a previous event; as in an episode
before the story opens
Foreshadowing* the use of hints or clues which suggest future action
Hero*** central character, refers to a relationship of character to action
Hyperbole** obvious and deliberate, sometimes outrageous, exaggeration for a serious or
comic effect, e.g., the shot heard ‘round the world.
Imagery words or phrases a writer uses to represent persons, objects, actions, feelings
and ideas descriptively by appealing to the senses – sight, smell, taste, sound
Irony
Situational irony**
Verbal irony*
technique of indicating an intention or attitude opposed to what is actually
stated (reality different from appearance); akin to sarcasm, hyperbole,
understatement; three types:
a situation turns out differently from what one would normally expect,
though the twist is oddly appropriate, e/g/, a deep sea diver drowning in a
bathtub
saying one thing while meaning the (not sarcasm or satire)
Metaphor* an implied comparison between two things which are not alike in their
general nature, e.g., It’s raining cats and dogs; the clouds are ships floating
on a sea of blue
Mood* the atmosphere or predominant emotion; a state of mind in which one
feeling, emotion or range or sensibility has ascendancy, the emotional or
emotional-intellectual attitude that the author takes toward the subject or
theme
Myth an anonymous story with roots in the primitive folk-beliefs of races or
nations and presenting supernatural episodes as a means of interpreting
natural events in an effort to make concrete and particular a special
perception of human beings or a cosmic view
Narrator anyone who recounts a narrative, the ostensible author or teller of a story
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Oxymoron** combining of opposites for emphasis (concise paradox, contradiction in
terms), e.g., jumbo shrimp; deafening silence, wise fool
Paradox*** a statement that is self-contradictory on the surface, but which reveals a
subtler meaning on reflection; the statement may appear illogical, impossible
or absurd, but turns out to have a coherent meaning that reveals a hidden
truth
Parallelism*** the use of a series of words, phrases, or sentences that have similar
grammatical form, e.g., He tried to make the law clear, precise, and
equitable
Pathos (Emotional
Appeal)
See Rhetorical Appeals
Personification* a human characteristic is attributed to an inanimate thing, abstraction,
animals, or ideas; a kind of metaphor, e.g., the wind cried in the dark
Plot*
Freytag Pyramid
(plot diagram)
a) Exposition
(b) Conflict
c) Rising Action
d) Climax
e) Falling Action
f) Dénouement
pattern of happenings in a narrative – sequence of events
d
/ \
c / \e
a______b_/ \f
Setting and background
Central problem
first part of narrative during which the tension between opposing characters
builds toward the climax; conflict begins during rising action
point where the conflict is definitively faced by the protagonist; highest
emotional peak.
action of a narrative which follows the climax, and represents the working
out of the decisive action of the climax
end of falling action; final unraveling of plot; catastrophe; resolution
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Point of view *
(narrative point of view)
First person
Omniscient
Limited Omniscient
Objective
perspective from which a narrative is told; the relation assumed between the
author toward his characters – who tells the story and how it gets told
the person telling the story is one of the characters (major or minor character,
participant or observer, first person), similar to limited
the author has unlimited knowledge about characters’ thoughts and feelings;
told in third person
the author tells the story from one character’s viewpoint (major or minor
character, third person) author reveals everything about the narrator’s
character but knows nothing about other characters except through thoughts
of narrator
the author does not presume to know the thoughts and feelings of the
characters; the author simply reports what can be seen or heard
Polysyndenton*** the use of many conjunctions slows the pace “. . . and how quietly she ran on
the moonlight sails, when the older boys played their mandolins and the girls
sang and we ate doughnuts dipped in sugar, and how sweet the music was on
the water in the shining night, and what it has felt like to think about girls
then.”
Repetition recurrence of sounds, words, phrases, lines, or stanzas
Rhetoric art of persuasion
Rhetorical appeals:
Ethos
Pathos
Logos
the character or quality of the speaker
the quality that stimulates pity, tenderness or sorrow in the reader
the speaker’s use of logic
Sarcasm* use of exaggerated praise to imply dispraise – bitter ridicule
Scene specific setting for a given event in a narrative, or the shortest major division
of a play. It indicates
stage in action, shift in time or place, change in number of actors on stage
Setting* time and place of an event
Shift a change or movement in a piece resulting from an epiphany, realization, or
insight gained by the speaker, a character or the reader; could result from a
word like “but”
Simile** a direct comparison made explicit by using the words like or as. Ex. David
was like a lion in battle.
Soliloquy a character in a drama, alone on stage, voices his thoughts (monologue)
Speaker persona; author’s mask; who speaks a poem
Stereotype an over-simplified image of a person, group, or institution, e.g., all
Southerners, every used-car dealer
Structure planned framework or organization of a piece of literature; usually
determined by plot and by chapter division (play: acts, scenes; essay:
organization of ideas; poetry: rhyme scheme and stanzaic form; see form
Style* the distinctive or characteristic handling of the language by a given author
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Suspense* quality that makes the reader or audience uncertain or tense about the
outcome of events
Symbol* use of any object, person, place or action that both has a meaning in itself
and that stands for something larger than itself, such as a quality, attitude,
belief or value; two basic types: universal and contextual, e.g., a symbol that
is common to all mankind or a symbol used in a particular way by an
individual author; e.g., the raven as a symbol of evil
Syntax arrangement of words and order of grammatical elements in a sentence; as
the way in which words are put together to form phrases, clauses or
sentences
Technique the conscious methods used by an author to shape his material
Theme* controlling idea or central insight of a literary work (not always a moral); not
the same as a subject, which can be expressed in a word or two: courage,
survival, war, pride; the idea the author wishes to convey about that subject;
expressed as a sentence or general statement about life or human nature; a
work can have more than one theme
Thesis* the main idea of a paper, usually occurring at the end of the first, or
introductory, paragraph
Tone* the attitude a writer or speaker takes toward a subject, character or audience,
and is conveyed through the author’s choice of words and detail; serious,
humorous, sarcastic, indignant, objective, etc.; a tone may shift**
Poetry Terms Accent stress on a syllable – basic element of rhythm
Alliteration*
recurrence of the same letter or sound at the beginning of closely succeeding
words
Assonance** the repetition of vowel sounds in a series of words(So long lives this, and
this gives life to thee)
Blank verse*** unrhymed iambic pentameter – poetry written without regard to stanzas
Cinquain a stanza of five lines
Concrete Poem a poem that stresses the visual appearance of the words and lines on the page
Consonance** the repetition of consonant sounds within a series of words to produce a
harmonious effect, e.g., “And each slow dusk a drawing-down of blinds.”
Couplet pair of successive lines of verse that rhyme
Free verse a type of modern poetry without a strict rhythm or regular rhyme scheme
Internal rhyme similarity in the sound of two words, one in the middle of the line, one at the
end, e.g., “Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered weak and weary”
Meter*** the pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables established in a line of poetry;
see page 45-49
Onomatopoeia* the use of a word whose sound mimics the sounds it describes (plop, splash,
boom); it is called imitative harmony when it is used on an extended scale in
a poem
Refrain repeated stanza
Rhyme*
repetition of sounds in two or more words or phrases that appear close to
each other in a poem
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End rhyme
Internal rhyme
Near or Slant rhyme
occurs at the end of lines
within a line
rhyme which is not exact
Rhyme scheme regular pattern of rhyming words in a of poetry which is repeated in
following stanzas – a different letter of the alphabet is assigned for different
sounds
Stanza a group of verses forming a division of a poem
Verse a single line of poetry
Grammatical Terms Antecedent the noun or pronoun to which a pronoun refers (if Adam forgets his
raincoat…)
Clause* a group of words that contains a verb and its subject; may be an adjective,
adverb, noun, elliptical, main (independent) or subordinate (dependent)
clause
Modifier makes another word precise, usually adjectives and adverbs
Subject complement follows a linking verb and renames or describes the subject (the coach
seemed anxious)
Subordinate clause does not express a complete thought and cannot stand by itself (while the
nation watched)
Syntax the way in which words and clauses are ordered and connected so as to form
sentences; or the set of grammatical rules governing such word order.
Syntax is a major determinant of literary style: while simple English
sentences usually have the structure ‘subject verb object’ (e.g. Jane
strangled the cat), poets often distort this syntax through inversion, while
prose writers can use syntactic structures such as the periodic sentence.
Infinitive* The word “to” plus a verb. Infinitives can function as adjectives, adverbs,
or nouns
Appositive Phrase** A phrase that refers to, and helps explain another noun or pronoun. When it
adds information that is nonessential, it is set off by commas.
Gerund*** An –ing verb form functioning as a noun.
Participle***
Present Participle
Past Participle
A verb that functions as an adjective.
ends in –ing
usually (but not always) ends in -ed
The AP Vertical Teams Guide for English, 2nd ed. College Board, 2002.
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$5 WORD LIST
This chart is set up as a progression of synonymous word choices. The most mature words on
the list are the Five Dollar words. You should be working your way to the far right column of
the list, including as many $5 words into your natural vocabulary as possible. By your eighth
grade year especially, quarter and dollar words should be limited within your writing.
NOTE: Synonyms DO NOT equate across the board equivalents! Though these columns are set up as
progressions, not all words will “fit” as perfect replacements. THIS IS NOT PLUG AND PLAY! This means you
must understand HOW each of these words work in order to use them properly.
Dialogue Tag Words: Quarter Dollar Five Dollar
admitted allowed yielded
admitted confessed professed
agreed confirmed assented
answered replied responded
asked strongly demanded commanded
asked questioned queried
asked for requested solicited
babbled rambled chattered
begged pleaded implored
bragged boasted gloated
claimed charged accused
claimed held insisted
complained whined whimpered
complained groaned griped
cracked joked quipped
cried wailed howled
cried sobbed blubbered
declared announced reported
disagreed bickered quarreled
laughed giggled chuckled
lied fibbed paltered
praised congratulated raved
remembered recalled reminisced
reminded nagged pestered
said stated uttered
said (brokenly) stuttered sputtered
said (casually) noted commented
said (forcefully) stated declared
said (in a monotone) chanted intoned
said (in defense) argued contended
said (indirectly) hinted alluded
said (loudly) shouted roared
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said (meanly) spit hissed
said (out of breath) panted wheezed
said (out of turn) broke in interrupted
said (secretly) whispered confided
said (unclearly) mumbled muttered
said (with regret) sighed lamented
said again repeated echoed
said triumphantly exclaimed whooped
sang warbled crooned
scolded chided reproved
screamed exclaimed squealed
spoke discussed lectured
swore promised pledged
teased mocked taunted
told related recounted
warned (maliciously) threatened snarled
wondered pondered conjectured
yelled barked roared
Verbs: Quarter Dollar Five Dollar
Add increase supplement with
Advise recommend counsel
Allow permit consent to
Annoy Irritate Provoke
Approve Endorse Authorize
Be amazed Wonder Admire
Be angry Rage Fume
Be Like Resemble Reflect
Beat Pound Clobber
Begin Launch Commence
Calm Soothe Appease
Certify guarantee Assure
Change... mind Submit Concede
Chew Munch Gnaw
Continue Carry on Advance
Copy Imitate Ape
criticize condemn Decried
Declare Proclaim Blare
Destroy Ruin Raze
Differ Vary Belie
Entertain Amuse Delight
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Express Voice Convey
Fall Plop Settle
Flap Thrash Flail
Glow Flicker Glimmer
Guess Hypothesize Assume
Jump Leap Bound
Leave (forever) Desert Abandon
Like Enjoy Appreciate
make noise rattle Clank
Mess up Disorganize Disturb
Pause Hesitate Blanch
Plan Organize Dictate
Prance Caper Cavort
Predict Forewarn Foretell
Remove Eject Expel
Rise Climb Soar
Search Investigate Scrutinize
Smile Grin Beam
Sneak Creep Edge
Spread Penetrate Infuse
Stick Attach Cement
Stick out Bulge Jut
Take Steal Pilfer
Tell Reveal Expose
Think about Contemplate Muse
Turn Spin Whirl
Use up Consume Exhaust
Watch Study Observe
Adjectives: Quarter Dollar Five Dollar
many numerous countless
mad furious livid
small tiny petite
exciting thrilling riveting
happy joyous elated
awful horrible vile
loud roaring ear-splitting
friendly outgoing extroverted
shy timid reserved
mean evil malicious
big large enormous
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tacky showy gaudy
kind giving generous
perfect ideal quintessential
harmful lethal toxic
hardworking thorough diligent
firm stubborn unyielding
short brief temporary
nice cordial genial
secret undercover covert
snobby conceited egotistic
kind caring benevolent
wise cautious shrewd
private isolated reclusive
mean hateful spiteful
annoying irritating inflammatory
noisy feisty boisterous
secret undercover stealthy
wrong untrue misleading
not related unrelated irrelevant
brave courageous fearless
arguable debatable contentious
cheap thrifty frugal
model typical classic
aggressive argumentative belligerent
grouchy irritable cantankerous
angry furious enraged
harsh bitter biting
different disagreeing inconsistent
guilty responsible liable
doubtful suspicious skeptical
irregular unpredictable haphazard
boring dull bland
unoriginal commonplace cliched
extra unnecessary excess
nasty foul vile
fake mock contrived
pale sickly ashen
fancy extravagant lavish
Adverbs: Quarter Dollar Five Dollar
almost nearly approximately
angrily crossly fiercely
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badly poorly unfavorably
bravely courageously fearlessly
busily briskly diligently
calmly peacefully tranquilly
carefully attentively conscientiously
clearly obviously blatantly
correctly properly fittingly
easily smoothly effortlessly
excitedly brightly enthusiastically
fairly justly impartially
fast rapidly swiftly
gently softly tenderly
happily merrily joyously
on purpose thoughtfully deliberately
kindly warmly cordially
loudly noisily deafeningly
nervously uneasily tensely
nicely pleasantly affectionately
politely civilly graciously
quickly speedily hastily
sadly glumly mournfully
cheaply thriftily stingily
seriously earnestly solemnly
sleepily dozily drowsily
secretly slyly stealthily
now immediately promptly
worriedly uneasily apprehensively
by accident accidentally unintentionally
clumsily ungracefully awkwardly
foolishly carelessly blindly
proudly jauntily boastfully
happily cheerfully jovially
meanly severely cruelly
rebelliously defiantly impudently
beautifully elegantly magnificently
later someday eventually
strictly faithfully expressly
wildly chaotically frenziedly
innocently ignorantly naively
interestedly curiously questioningly
crossly irritably testily
lazily lethargically listlessly
strongly powerfully potently
cautiously hesitantly warily
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legally justly rightfully
shyly bashfully timidly
enthusiastically zestfully zealous
very extremely vastly
Transitions: Quarter Dollar Five Dollar
Compare
like as similar to
like in comparison likewise
like also more or less
Contrast
but in contrast on the other hand
but instead meanwhile
Contradict
but however on the contrary
but rather conversely
but even though although
still yet nevertheless
still besides in spite of
still anyways in any case
Cause/Effect
because since as a result of...
because where due to...
so it follows [that]... hence
so
then thus therefore
Summarize
in summary in short in brief
to sum up to summarize to review
Conclude
in conclusion on the whole all in all
in conclusion after all above all
in conclusion wrapping up overall
Order/sequence
also plus in addition
after afterwards thereafter
also besides beyond
at the same time meanwhile simultaneously
before earlier previously
before in advance of prior to
first in the beginning/to begin originally
in the first place first of all primarily
last finally in the end
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later in time eventually
later someday after all
now at the present presently
then next immediately
Emphasize
absolutely certainly definitely
absolutely positively unquestionably
always constantly invariably
always traditionally habitually
always regularly routinely
basically practically in effect
for real in fact actually
importantly significantly critically
in particular particularly specifically
more importantly further moreover
most importantly most significantly fundamentally
obviously clearly explicitly
obviously of course naturally
often usually frequently
rarely scarcely occasionally
without a doubt doubtlessly undeniably
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DESCRIPTORS FOR TONE, ATTITUDE, & DICTION
Affectionate aggravated Agitated Agreeable Aloof Amiable
Amused Anger Antiquated Appealing Appreciative Apprehensive
Arrogant Artificial Authoritative Belittling Belligerent Benevolent
Bitter Bizarre Boastful Bold Boring Calm
Candid Cautionary Ceremonial Charming Clinical Comical
Commonplace Compassionate Complementary Concerned Concrete Confident
Connotative Contemptuous Contented Contentious Contradictory Critical
Crucial Cultured Cynical Deflated Dejected Depressed
Despairing Desperate Detached Dialect Disappointed Disdainful
Disgusted Disinterested Distant Doubtful Dramatic Dull
Earnest Ecstatic Elated Emotional Encouraging Enthusiastic
Exact Excited Explanatory Exuberant Factual Fanciful
Fantastic Fear Figurative Flat Flight of
fancy
Flippant
Foreboding Formal Furious Gloomy Grotesque Grouchy
Happiness Hopeful Hopeless Humor Hurt Ideal
Impartial Incisive Incongruous Incredulous Indignant Inflammatory
Inflated Informal Informative Instructive Inspiring Insulting
Intense Intimate Ironic Irreverent Irritated Joyful
Jubilant Judgmental Learned Lighthearted Literal Logic
Loving Lyrical Malicious Manipulative Matter-of-fact Metaphoric
Mocking Moralistic Mournful Mundane Narrow Nervous
Neutral Nonchalant Nostalgic Objective Obscure Old
Optimistic Ordinary Outdated Outraged Overblown Paranoid
Passive Patronizing Peaceful Persuasive Pessimistic Petty
Petulant Plain Pleading Poetic Pompous Positive
Precise Pretentious Proud Rational Reduced Reflective
Regretful Relaxed Reminiscent Restrained Ridiculing Romance
Sadness Sarcastic Satiric Savage Scholarly Scornful
Serene Serious Showy Simple Sincere Slang
Solemn Somber Soothing Spiritual Sullen Superficial
Sympathetic Tender Thoughtful Threatening Tragic Tranquil
Trite Unclear Urgent Vibrant Whimsical Whining
Wistful Wrathful
This list is by no means extensive, so you should add below as you encounter new descriptors.
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VERBS
Precise language is of the utmost importance in Pre-AP/AP English. In order to assist you in
your word choice, below is a list of verbs to replace immature and outdated language like
“said.”
Accentuate
Accept Achieve Acknowledge Add Admit Adopt
Advise Advocate Affect Agree Alleviate Allow
Allude Analyze Announce Approach Answer Approve
Argue Assert Assess Assume Assure Ask
Attack Attempt Attribute Avoid Babble Bargain
Began Believe Boast Brag Call Challenge
Change Characterize Choose Claim Command Comment
Compare Complain Complete Concern Conclude Conduct
Conform Confront Consider Contend Dramatize Elevate
Empathize Encounter Envision Estimate Exclaim Exclude
Expand Experience Explain Express Extend Extrapolate
Fear Focus Force Foreshadow Function Generalize
Giggle Grin Grunt Guide Heighten Highlight
Hint Hold Honor Identify Illustrate Imagine
Imply Include Indicate Infer Insist Inspire
Instruct Intend Interpret Interrupt Inundate Justify
Laugh Lecture Lie List Maintain Make
Manage Manipulate Mention Minimize Moan Mumble
Murmur Nag Notified Object Observe Oppose
Order Organize Overstate Outline Perform Permit
Personify Persuade Plead Point out Portray Postulate
Pray Predict Prepare Present Presume Produce
Project Promote Propose Provide Qualify Question
Rationalize Reason Reassure Recall Recite Recollect
Record Recount Reflect Refer Regard Regret
Reject Relate Repeat Reply Represent Request
Respond Restate Result Reveal Ridicule Roar
Rule Scold Scream Seem See Select
Serve Shout Shriek Snap Sneer Sob
Specify Speculate Spoke Sputter State Strive
Storm Suggest Summarize Supply Support Suppress
Symbolize Sympathize Thought Told Trace Understand
Understate Use Urge Value Verify View
Vow Want Warn Whisper Wish
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Adjectives of Personality
1. Absent -minded 2. Aggressive 3. Ambitious 4. Amusing 5. Argumentative 6. Arrogant 7. Assertive 8. Audacious 9. Authoritative 10. Brilliant 11. Charismatic 12. Charming 13. Cheap 14. Clever 15. Compassionate 16. Conceited 17. Condescending 18. Conscientious 19. Conservative 20. Cooperative 21. Courageous 22. Coward 23. Creative 24. Critical 25. Dangerous 26. Deceitful 27. Demented 28. Dense 29. Dependable 30. Determined 31. Devout 32. Dignified 33. Disobedient 34. Dutiful 35. Easy-going 36. Egotistical 37. Enigmatic 38. Enlightened 39. Envious 40. Evasive 41. Extroverted 42. Exuberant
43. Finicky 44. Flexible 45. Flighty 46. Foolhardy 47. Gallant 48. Generous 49. Greed 50. Guarded 51. Gutsy 52. Heartless 53. Honest 54. Humane 55. Idealistic 56. Impartial 57. Impulsive 58. Incompetent 59. Inconsiderate 60. Incorrigible 61. Independent 62. Industrious 63. Innocent 64. Innovative 65. Insolent 66. Intellectual 67. Intolerant 68. Intrepid 69. Introverted 70. Irascible 71. Lethargic 72. Levelheaded 73. Liberal 74. Local 75. Malicious 76. Mature 77. Meek 78. Melancholy 79. Mindless 80. Modest 81. Moral 82. Narrow-minded 83. Nervous 84. Nurturing
85. Offensive 86. Officious 87. Optimistic 88. Outgoing 89. Passionate 90. Passive 91. Patient 92. Persevering 93. Pessimistic 94. Petulant 95. Prejudiced 96. Pretentious 97. Professional 98. Progressive 99. Proud 100. Quarrelsome 101. Radical 102. Rambunctious 103. Realistic 104. Rebellious 105. Reliable 106. Repulsive 107. Reserved 108. Responsible 109. Romantic 110. Sarcastic 111. Self-centered 112. Self-confident 113. Self'-conscious 114. Self-reliant 115. Sensible 116. Sensitive 117. Sentimental 118. Shallow 119. Sincere 120. Single-minded 121. Sociable 122. Spiteful 123. Spontaneous 124. Stern 125. Stubborn 126. Superficial
127. Sympathetic 128. Tactful 129. Temperamental 130. Timid 131. Tireless 132. Tolerant 133. Tricky 134. Trustworthy 135. Unemotional 136. Uninhibited 137. Vain 138. Versatile 139. Witty 140. Zealous
1. Absent -minded Likely to forget things
2. Aggressive Very determined to succeed and get what is wanted; behaving in an angry, aggressive way
3. Ambitious Determined to be successful, rich, powerful, etc… 4. Amusing Funny and entertaining 5. Argumentative Someone who disagrees and argues with others often 6. Arrogant Someone who behaves as if he is much more important than others 7. Assertive Behaving in a confident way; expressing your beliefs in a determined manner
8. Audacious bold, daring, or fearless; willing to take risks or do things that are shocking or rude
9. Authoritative Unusual and impressive intelligence 10. Brilliant extremely bright or radiant 11. Charismatic Possessing an extraordinary ability to attract others 12. Charming Possessing a special quality that makes people like you or feel attracted to you 13. Cheap stingy or unwilling to give freely 14. Clever Intelligent and able to find new ways to solve problems or do things 15. Compassionate Feeling sympathy for others and desiring to help them
16. Conceited Behaving in a way that shows too much pride in your abilities, appearance, etc…
17. Condescending Behaving as though other people are not as good, intelligent, or important as you are
18. Conscientious Showing a lot of care and attention; responsible
19. Conservative Preferring to do things the way they have always been done; not willing to take risks with change
20. Cooperative Willing to work with others 21. Courageous brave 22. Coward Behaving in a way that shows you are not brave
23. Creative Good at creating new things or solving problems by using your imagination or skills
24. Critical Making severe and often unfair judgments of' people and things 25. Dangerous
26. Deceitful Intending to make someone believe something that is not true so that you can get what you want
27. Demented Crazy or very strange in behavior 28. Dense Not very smart or bright 29. Dependable Able to be trusted or depended on 30. Determined Having or showing a strong desire to do something even if it is difficult 31. Devout Having very strong and sincere belief's 32. Dignified Calm, serious, and inspiring a feeling of respect from others 33. Disobedient Deliberately not doing what you are told to do 34. Dutiful Motivated by a sense of responsibility 35. Easy-going Relaxed and casual; easy to get along with others 36. Egotistical Believing that you are much better than or more important than others 37. Enigmatic Mysterious and difficult to understand ot explain 38. Enlightened Showing a good understanding of something 39. Envious Wishing to have someone else’s possessions, abilities, or qualities 40. Evasive Not willing to answer questions; avoiding doing something that you should do 41. Extroverted somebody who is sociable and self-confident 42. Exuberant Happy and cheerful; full of energy and excitement 43. Finicky Difficult to please; liking only certain things
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44. Flexible Being able to change easily to suit the plan or situation
45. Flighty Someone who often changes his/her beliefs; doesn’t follow through and isn’t serious about things
46. Foolhardy Taking stupid and unnecessary risks 47. Gallant Being kind and polite towards women (usually describing a man) 48. Generous Willing to give more time, money, effort, than is expected 49. Greedy Always wanting more power, money, possessions, attention 50. Guarded Careful not to show too much emotion or say too much 51. Gutsy Being brave and taking risks 52. Heartless Cruel; not feeling any pity; 53. Honest Behaving in a good, socially accepted way; not lying, cheating, or stealing 54. Humane Treating people and animals in a way that is kind, not cruel
55. Idealistic Believing that you should live according to high standards or belief's 1even if' it is not practical or possible
56. Impartial Being fair; not giving special treatment or privileges 57. Impulsive Tending to do things without thinking about the result 58. Incompetent Not having the ability or skill to do something correctly or well 59. Inconsiderate Not caring about the feelings or needs of' other people 60. Incorrigible Having bad habits or doing bad things and refusing to change
61. Independent Confident and able to do things by yourself in your own way without the help or advice of others
62. Industrious Having the energy and willingness to work hard at something 63. Innocent Not having much experience at life or knowledge of evil in the world
64. Innovative Having ideas that are new 1 different and better than those that existed before
65. Insolent Impolite and disrespectful 66. Intellectual Well-educated and interested in serious ideas and subjects
67. Intolerant Not willing to accept ways of' thinking and believing that are different from your own
68. Intrepid Willing to do dangerous things or go to dangerous places; dertimined 69. Introverted Quiet and shy; not enjoying being with other people 70. Irascible Easily becoming angry 71. Lethargic Having no energy or interest in anything 72. Levelheaded Calm and sensible in making judgments
73. Liberal Willing to understand or respect the different behavior, ideas, etc. of other people
74. Loyal Always supporting your friends, family, beliefs, country, etc. and never changing your feelings about them
75. Malicious Showing a desire and intention to hurt someone 76. Mature Behaving in a sensible and reasonable way 77. Meek Very shy and gentle and unwilling to argue or express an opinion 78. Melancholy Feeling sadness and a lack of hope 79. Mindless 80. Modest Unwilling to talk proudly about your achievements and abilities
81. Moral Always behaving in a way that is based on knowing what is right and what is wrong
82. Narrow-minded Unwilling to accept or understand either new and different ideas or other's ideas and beliefs
83. Nervous Worried or afraid and easily upset 84. Nurturing Giving care and support to a person or idea so that is grows and is successful
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85. Offensive Very impolite and insulting toward others 86. Officious Too eager to tell people what to do; bossy
87. Optimistic Believing that good things will happen in the future and feeling confident that you will succees
88. Outgoing Liking to meet new people and do new things 89. Passionate Having or expressing a very strong feeling or belief 90. Passive Accepting situations or things without attempting to change or prevent them
91. Patient Being able to wait calmly for a long time or to accept difficulties or people’s annoying behavior without becoming angry or anxious
92. Persevering Determined to keep trying to achieve something in spite of' difficulties
93. Pessimistic Expecting that bad things will happen in the future or that a situation will have a bad result
94. Petulant Behaving in an impatient and angry way for no reason at all; like a child
95. Prejudiced Having an unfair feeling of dislike for someone who is different from you in some way
96. Pretentious Trying to seem more important, smart, etc.. than you really are 97. Professional 98. Progressive
99. Proud Feeling pleased with you achievements, family, country, etc because you think they are very good
100. Quarrelsome Often arguing or seeming to enjoy arguing with others 101. Radical 102. Rambunctious Noisy full of' energy and behaving in a way that is uncontrolled
103. Realistic Judging and dealing with situations in a practical way, according to what is actually possible
104. Rebellious Deliberately disobeying someone in authority 105. Reliable 106. Repulsive Disgusting; totally unlikable 107. Reserved Unwilling to express your emotions or talk about your problems 108. Responsible Sensible and able to make good decisions; trustworthy 109. Romantic 110. Sarcastic Mocking, making fun of another person 111. Self-centered Interested only in yourself and not caring what is happening to others 112. Self-confident Sure that you can do things well and that others have a good opinion of you
113. Self-conscious Worried and embarrassed about what you look like or what other people think of you
114. Self-reliant Able to decide what to do by yourself without the help or advice of others 115. Sensible Showing good judgment
116. Sensitive Able to understand other people’s feelings and problems; easily hurt or offended by what people say
117. Sentimental 118. Shallow Not interested in showing any understanding of important or serious matters 119. Sincere Being honest and saying what ~you truly believe or feel 120. Single-minded Having one clear aim or goal and working hard to achieve it 121. Sociable Friendly and liking to be with other people 122. Spiteful Being deliberately mean to someone in order to hurt or upset them 123. Spontaneous Doing things when ~ou want to without planning or organizing 124. Stern very serious and strict 125. Stubborn Determined not to change your mind even when you are being unreasonable 126. Superficial Concerned only with unimportant or non-serious things
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127. Sympathetic Willing to listen to and try to understand someone's problems 128. Tactful Careful not to say or do anything to upset or embarrass other people
129. Temperamental Likely to become suddenly upset, excited, or angry and difficult to deal with or please
130. Timid Not having courage or confidence 131. Tireless Working hard in a determined way without stopping
132. Tolerant Al lowing people to do, say or believe what they want without punishing or criticizing them
133. Tricky 134. Trustworthy Being dependable and honest 135. Unemotional Not showing your feelings, cold and hard-hearted 136. Uninhibited Confident or relaxed enough to do or say what you want. to 137. Vain Being too proud of your looks, abilities or position; conceited 138. Versatile Good at doing a lot of things and able to learn new skills quickly and easily 139. Witty Smart in a clever and amusing way
140. Zealous Extremely interested in and excited about something that you believe in very strongly and behaving in a way that shows this.
JUNIOR HIGH SHORT STORY WRITING RUBRIC
CRITERIA 4 3 2 1 Story Structure Establishes a strong plot, conflict,
climax, setting and point of view.
Develops an effective blend of
dialogue, narration, and action.
Establishes plot, conflict, climax,
setting, and point of view.
Develops a mostly effective
blend of dialogue, narration, and
action.
Some elements of story
structure are present and/or
weak blending of dialogue,
narration, and action.
Few or no story structure
elements are present and/or no
blending of dialogue, narration or
action is present.
Characterization Develops complex characters
through effective blend of dialogue,
narration, and action.
Develops characters through a
blend of dialogue, narration, and
action.
There is some character
development through
dialogue, narration, and/or
action.
Characters are not developed.
Doesn’t blend dialogue narration
and action.
Description Creates vivid “pictures” through
concrete language and rich sensory
detail; use of metaphor, simile,
analogies, and other literary devices;
incorporates the five senses.
Creates “pictures” through
concrete language and sensory
detail; uses many literary devices
and incorporates sensory detail.
Some use of concrete
language and sensory detail;
uses some literary devices
and/or sensory detail.
Uses little or no concrete
language and sensory detail.
Word Choice Uses appropriate, sophisticated,
precise vocabulary. There is a clear
sense of audience.
Uses many effective and
appropriate words. A sense of
audience is evident.
Uses some effective and
appropriate words. There is
some sense of audience.
Uses few or no correct or
effective words. There is little or
no sense of audience.
CONVENTIONS -The extent to which the response exhibits conventional spelling, punctuation, paragraphing, capitalization, grammar, and usage.
Punctuation Exhibits correct grammar in each
sentence. Smooth, fluid sentences.
No run-ons or fragments. Error free
punctuation.
Exhibits mostly correct
grammar. Errors in punctuation
do not interfere with
communication.
Exhibits errors in grammar
that somewhat interfere with
communication.
Exhibits errors in grammar that
interfere with communication.
Awkward sentences throughout.
Spelling and
Usage
Exhibits correct spelling and usage.
Error free.
Exhibits mostly correct spelling
and usage.
Exhibits errors in spelling and
usage that somewhat interfere
with communication.
Exhibits errors in spelling and
usage that interfere with
communication.
Misspelled/misused words
throughout.
Presentation Neat and professional, clean
presentation; shows attention to
details.
Neat, easy to read. Sometimes hard to read;
careless presentation.
Little or no attention to
presentation.
MEANING - The extent to which the response exhibits sound understanding, interpretation, and analysis of the task and texts.
Accuracy of
response
Arrives at correct responses
consistently through correct and
appropriate computations.
Arrives at correct responses most
of the time; if the response is
incorrect it is the result of a
minor error.
Arrives at correct responses
some of the time. A few of
the responses may be
incorrect because of major
errors.
Arrives at incorrect responses
because of major errors in
computation.
Conceptual
understanding
Shows a depth of understanding of
concept with ample support.
Shows understanding with
adequate support.
Shows some understanding
with some support.
Understanding is not evident.
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JUNIOR HIGH ESSAY WRITING RUBRIC
CRITERIA 4 3 2 1 CONTENT -The extent to which the paper exhibits sound understanding, interpretation, and analysis of the task and text
Introduction of
thesis
Thesis is insightful and clearly
stated. Key terms are defined.
Introduction is energizing
Thesis stated. Some key terms
are defined. Introduction is
interesting.
Thesis is vague. Terms are
not defined. Introduction is
not clear.
There is no thesis. No
terms defined. No
introduction.
Opening Clear focus on topic. Thorough
introduction of topic. Powerful
message conveyed to reader.
Topic is introduced. Sufficient
focus on topic. Message
conveyed to reader.
Little focus on topic and
purpose. Vague message
conveyed to reader.
No focus on topic. No
message conveyed to
reader.
Development of
ideas
Interesting, sophisticated,
insightful. Strongly supports
thesis.
Development of ideas is clear,
evident, and supports thesis.
Simplistic. Does not
support thesis. Varying in
quality.
Absent or ineffective.
Supporting
evidence and details
Uses examples, reasons,
explanations, etc., that are
relevant, appropriate, and
convincing.
Examples, reasons, details, and
explanations are sufficient and
accurate.
Some examples, reasons,
details, etc. are sufficient
and accurate.
Vague, missing, inaccurate
evidence.
Conclusion Extends, connects, comments on
key ideas and topics.
Summarizes main ideas,
echoes key concepts.
Restates main idea. Absent, incomplete, or
unfocused.
DEVELOPMENT -The extent to which the response exhibits direction, shape, coherence
Sentence variety
(word choice, word
order, sentence
length)
Well varied sentence structure
throughout piece.
Evidence of some sentence
variety.
Occasional sentence
variety.
No sentence variety.
Paragraph
development
Each paragraph clearly and
consistently relates to the main
idea, contributes to an effective
argument, and reinforces the
content; smooth transitions.
Many paragraphs relate to
main idea, contribute to an
effective argument, and
reinforce the content; often
uses smooth transitions.
Some paragraphs relate to
main idea, contribute to an
effective argument, and
have smooth transitions.
No or few paragraphs
relate to main idea,
contribute to an effective
argument or have smooth
transitions.
Organization with
pre-set
Requirements of format are met
consistently throughout piece.
Many of the requirements of
format are met in the piece.
Some of the requirements
of format are met in the
piece.
Few or none of the
requirements for the format
are met.
Designing
organization
Creates an organizational pattern
that effectively supports the
topic/thesis of the piece.
Creates an organizational
pattern that adequately
supports the topic/thesis of the
piece.
Creates an organizational
pattern that inconsistently
supports the topic/thesis of
the piece.
Little or no organizational
pattern to support the
topic/thesis of the piece.