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Creating Compelling Copy

@MaryOlivieriECD

The simple, yet secret approach to nailing it quickly

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ECDCopywriterMentorImproviser

MARY OLIVIERI, EVP EXEC. CREATIVE DIRECTOR

@MaryOlivieriECD | @cbdmarketing | www.cbdmarketing.com

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(Oh please, for the love of Pete,let me come up with something compelling!)

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Exercise your kid brain.

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Airport security

Line

Waiting

Waiting room

Reception

Greeting

Hello

Good-bye

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In the hands of Freud and other psychoanalysts,

Based on my interviews with the creative subjects in my workshop study, and from additional conversations with artists, I knew that such unconscious

processes are an important component of creativity. For example, Neil Simon told me: “I slip into a state that is apart from reality.” I surmised that observing which parts of the brain are most active during free association would give us clues about the neural basis of creativity. And what did we

find? Sure enough, the association cortices were wildly active during REST.

Dr. Nancy Andreasan, Secrets of the Creative Brain, Atlantic Magazine

free association—spontaneously saying whatever comes to mind without censorship—became a window

into understanding unconscious processes.

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A picture is worth a thousand words…dammitt!

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Home

Light

Beauty

I wish I lived there

Grass

Are those children in the background?

The house is witnessing that.

Solid

Reliable

Comforting

The home is the beautiful backdrop to your life.

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• Your company/client is sponsoring a new award in the automotive industry

• Email

• C-Suite level execs in automotive industry

• “Thanks for your contribution to the industry as a whole. You’ve been nominated for the X Award!”

Criteria

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Wires

Metal

Spark plugs

Engine

Engines are fast

Speed

Ticket

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You were clocked going above and beyond.

19% 27%

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Wear the hat.

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BASF introduces new advancementsin the science of wind energy.

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Feel the energy. Feel the wind. BASF.

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BASF introduces new advancementsin the science of wind energy.

Original

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BASF is opening new windows in the advancement of wind energy.

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BASF introduces new advancementsin the science of wind energy.

Original

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Wind energy is cool.

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Cell phone sales up by 8%:

Teens are the sweet-spot.

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Don’t just get out of your head…

get out of the office.

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Solutions Innovative

LeadershipParadigm Shift

Extensive

Best Practices

Robust

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Buzzwords exist for one reason:

to hide. By obfuscating, lying, confusing, or just plain avoiding the issue, business

people can avoid communicating.

Seth Godin

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Solutions Innovative

LeadershipParadigm Shift

Extensive

Best Practices

Robust

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The communication between your body

posture and your feelings also goes the

other way. You can change the way you

feel based on how you hold your body.

You can change your brain chemistry, and

the actions you take or don’t take.

Susan Weinschank, PhD

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Maintain the posture, then write.

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• Business-to-Business Campaign

• Target: Contractors, Architects, Building Owners

• Partnership

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Your partner in building success.

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Exercise your kid brain

A picture is worth a thousand words

Wear the Hat!

Get out of the office

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Thank you.Q&A

#MWMcbdmarketing.com

@MaryOlivieriECD@cbdmarketing